MG~ SS~The Mist ... UPDATED Pt11/Pg130/21st Oct ... .. .. .. ..... . - Page 47

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Posted: 11 years ago
both got married,bt wt nw,,,??geet ne family honour to bcha lia,,,ab uski life ka kya hoga ..??eger 2 see hw mneet bhae wid echothr,,,,gud going babie,,,,😳
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Posted: 11 years ago




Lakshu, Priya,Mona,Lily and Sona ...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24





Lakshu, Priya,Mona,Lily and Sona ...🤗

hi babie ,,,🤗happy dussehra,,,,😊updtting kya...??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24





Lakshu, Priya,Mona,Lily and Sona ...🤗



hi babie😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

feel very bad for maaneet..maan silence is scary yaar..hope he dont push his frustration on geet..pls cont soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update.

Marriage happening. But no one is happy. Maan n Geet both r lost thinking abt their fate. Geet emotionless.
Eager to know y Geet hates her family. N the reaction of relatives wen they will see new bride.
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Posted: 11 years ago


abhi tak aayi kyu nahi aaj???
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Posted: 11 years ago


The Mist

For banner credit goes to my dear Laksmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.






Part - 6


It was wee hours of morning. All cars stopped at d gate of KM Dadima came forward to take out Geet from d car,, Maan rushed to go inside but Dadima's words stopped him.


Daadima: Maan rukiye , aap esse ander nahi ja sakte, wahi ruko.


Maan stopped there ,, he was hell irritated now and fuming in anger , but he was helpless coz of circumstances ,, his family was already hurt and he don't wanted to hurt his father and Dadima more ,, he waited there and Dadima made Geet to stand near Maan,, did d aarti and told her to push d rice pot with right foot ,, Geet did that and then Dadima told them to enter with their right feet all together. They did that and enter d main hall of KM. Maan at once threw his Gathbandan dupatta on the ground and rushed to his room ,, Daadima looked at his retreating figure with painful eyes. She could understood his condition ,, he was badly hurt and betrayed. All d members gathered there with hanging heads ,, the happiness

of this family turned in to a disgustful memories,, Geet was feeling suffocated at this new place. Dadima made Geet to sit in a sofa and sat near her .


Dadima: Guddu beta jo situation hei wo tumhare samne hei ,, hum nahi jante tum iss sab ko kaise face karogi ? lekin ab tum iss ghar ki izzat ho humara Sammaan ho , iss ghar ka ek hissa ho , jo bhi aage kadam utana bada soch - samjhker utana beta ,, tumhare liye badi tough situation hei Maan ko face kerna ,, aur wo iss waqt bahot toote hue aur bhikhre hue hei ager wo kuch galat kahe to please bura matt manna. Tumhe iss ghar mei koi takleef nhi hogi ,, jo parashani ho hume kehe sakti ho. Dadima caresse her head and told Annie to show her room.


Geet stood up to go,, she was also very confused and helpless ,, following every words like a puppet. She wanted some peaceful time to think about all this. Yash came to her and held her from her shoulders and spoke in a heavy voice.


YSK: Guddu i knew , everything is very difficult for u beta ,, u respected my decision and saved our family honour ,, Thanuku so much beta. Don't think u r alone ,, we r with u beta. He packed on her head and blessed her.


Geet listened everything quietly ,, just nodded her head . She knew only Yash and Nidhi in this house ,, she never met any other member of this house. Annie came near her to take her to the room or Maan's room. She thought that she is now Maan's wife , so she'll live in his room. Annie herself decorated that room for newly Wed couple. She brought her upstairs in Maan's room and left from there ,, the room was empty , fully decorated with flowers and aroma candles ,, it was a king size bedroom ,, Geet looked all around threw her vail ,, she saw these type of rooms in movies, magazines and in tv shows, but not in real ,, she looked at d decorated bed and then at a coach at her side. She sighed and mumbled, ye sab mere liye nahi , kisi aur ke liye tha ,, usse judi koi bhi cheej mjhe sirf takleef hi degi , she decided to take some rest on coach , she turned to look her bag to change her clothes right then a sharp broken sound hit her ears from d side room


Geet came near d door and peeped in it was like a study and everything scattered here n there broken like some storm hit that place,, she looked at a figure whose bare back was facing her ,, his torn sherwani was laying on d floor and his hands were bleeding from many places. A loud gasp released from her mouth ,, he turned back listening that sound and found her at d study door,, his face and eyes were red in anger,, shooting angry he came near her and grabbed her arm tightly..Aahhh,, She flinched in pain and looked at him threw vail ,, she tried to lose his grip with her other hand but he jerk her saying


Maan: tum ussi ki bahan ho na ,, dekho tumhari uss bahan ne kya kiya hei meri zindgi aur meri family ke sath , he pushed her back ward ,she stumble and her back hit d wall ,, he came closer her and caught her by her throat and pushed her in wall ,, mujhe dhoka dene ki , meri aur meri khandan ki izzat se khelne walo ko mei maaf nahi karunga ,, tum bhi waisi hi hogi jaisi tumhari bahan ,, ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna , ye shadi ka drama meine sirf apni family ki izzat, Dad aur Dadima ke liye kiya hei ,, ghinn aa rahi mujhe tumhe dekh ker.


Tumhara mere samne hona uske kiye gunah ki yaad dila raha hei ,, mei apne Dad ki wajah se tumhe kuch nahi kaha raha warna tum se hi uske kiye ka badla leta ,, door ho jao meri nazaron se aur kabhi mere samne matt aana ,, tumhari parchai bhi dekhna mujhe bardast nahi ,, nikal jao yahan se ,, he pushed her out from his room and shut d door.


Geet was shocked, puzzled and angered on all this outburst ,, why he was accusing her? She saved his and his family's honour , she burned all her dreams for his family's respect and he was accusing her. She felt very insulted and humiliated ,, she decided to give him a solid reply ,, Samajhta kya hei apne aap ko ,, Ye Sameera ka hone wala pati tha ,, uska BF ,, usne jo kiya uske liye uski maa aur bhai ka sar fode mujhe ku suna raha hei . She knocked at his door 2-3 times and he opened that with anger .


Maan: tumne suna nahi meine kya kaha hei ,, jao yahan se i don't want to see ur face , out.


Geet pussed d door back and entered ,, she was not a meek girl if she could bent down for her elders than she could stand for her respect too.


Geet: Mr Khurana , listen me carefully ,, aap mujhse nafrat kare ya nahi mujhe kuch ferek nahi padta ,, mere liye bhi ye shaadi ek drama hi hei aapke aur mere dad ki izzat ke liye hi meine isse accept kiya hei ,, usne tumhare sath kya kiya ye tum jano ,, mujhe iss sabse kya ? Wo tumhari GF thi , tumhari hone wali BIWI aur tum uske mangeter, uske hone wale PATI. Mr Khurana , mera na usse kuch lena dena tha na tumse ,, wo meri kuch nahi lagti ,, usse ya usski family se mera koi wasta nahi hei.


Maan was stunned with her audacity , his anger overpowered him .


Maan: get out from here ,,, tum kaun ho ,kya ho mujhe nahi janna , ho to ussi khandan ki na aur yahi kaffi hei meri nafrat ke liye. He pushed her out again and shut d door.


Precap"aftermath



Sorry for mistakes.
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Part - 7


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Love it graphics

me first ...

Tap dance graphics
i didnt expect to maan to behave like this... though i understand his non acceptance of marrige... but behaving like this to geet... he himself knows that she is there only due to their majboori...

but loved geets reply... peeche mat hatna ... lage raho geet...👍🏼

have maan seen her face or not??
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago

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