The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 18

don't know the whole story of dev and nt

nice but little complicated

Originally posted by: Onir

Shattered Dreams ... Indeed for some and for some the helplessness causing them to feel so 👏👏 Beautifully written. Awesome song selection, it was Bang on!

Thank you. I had planned this song a while back so I had to get all the couples to this point before I can put it.

Paami's veil of pretend concern and all her true colours, lies, deceit, and venom came out in front of Chandan... only that the realization and truth took such a long period for him as he was lost in his own guilt. I loved that scene... where you described the separating curtain between them puled down by him on the bitter realization showing the clearing of the haze in their relation, at least somewhat.

Felt for that scene when Poonam was begging him for her daughter's safety, but in all that too she held fiercely onto her own.. her only possession and true relation her child. Truth is finally out for Chandan.

Chandan and Pammi are finally on the same page. Glad you caught that scene ripping the curtains between them. Truth is in both their faces now.

Loved how you tied all the scenes👏👏... Dev being the savior for both Father and daughter in times of need. Brij took him away after Stenting?? What's more in there, I wonder??

So the person following Naina is actually detective hired by Dev.. 😉 And Dev was there for her. 😳 Loved how she relaxes knowing its him, melting in his warm embrace and seeking protection. Her withdrawing from him due to the threats she had received and fear to loose him to death unknowingly causes Dev to feel so helpless... loved your portrayal of it all on the hilltop. 👍🏼 He is unable to reach her, weaken her guard or fight with her stubbornness... but then somewhere I feel he's going to be the connecting path leading her true home (To her parents and then him... 😉😳)

Dev and NT both in pain right now.

Bambi is affected by Maithili's pain and harsh life... but Maan perceives it all even form a distance. ❤️ His soothing her and comforting her was so needed and so natural for them both yet there was later distancing yet the warmth felt. 😳👏 Both Khurana brothers are quite good in embracing, understanding the pain and comforting their lady love. 😉

Her innocent questions are met with his true and heart felt answers... Lovely! "True love never dies... it is what is in you, the image of them never lessens" 👏👏 ❤️ And he tying all of this feeling in this line with him recollecting his joyful and true love and bonds with his parents was so heart warming. ❤️

I hope when he is going to be away form her he remembers these lines and helps him survive... "No matter the distance true love finds you wherever you are and you will be one again" Nahi toh Khotta will go and do more damage in the present time I feel.

I am nervous about writing their parts in the present...

So Kabir's Angel is Megha.. 😲 Kya socha aur kya sach nikla Challo Maan ki Bambi nahi hai 😆 So another love story here 😉

Kabir is trying to avoid Megha. The angel was always Geet for Maithili. Itni jaldi don't be relieved.

Loved the update...

And yeh mera Double hat-trick on being 1st 😃🥳

Continue soon... 😃

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Originally posted by: chavvi16

Oh ma, things are getting bad for all concerned it seems

And confrontation is out on cards for few

And about time too

After all how long can they run away from their pasts

What was Tara doing going to see her dad like that

Does she not know what could have happened

So it seems that he finally claim to know what happened in his absence with his wife

Oh my things are getting out of hand for sure but its needed too

So what now truth to be out

Maan thinks that Geet likes kabir when nothing could be far from the truth

Awww kabir fell for megha huh bless

But he can't be with her due to his problems he thinks

Cheers for pm

Originally posted by: heytal

Finally the curtain of deceit, betrayal, prejudiced, mean and lies unveils

Chandan now aware of the true colours of his so called family and the extent of damage they have done to His Family!

Poonam pleading him for Tara and also disclosing him the biggest and harshest truth of his life that his own daughter was killed by his family😔

For the first time Poonam's pain for both her daughters was evident and she confided in Chandan probably trusting him that maybe he will have pity on her

Dev their savior

I guess Dev will be the catalyst to the Thakur clan

Tara safe in his arms and Chandan was timely treated by his presence of mind😊

Dr Siddharth dono Khurana samdhi ke liye hamesha ready rehte hain😳

Dev-Tara moments were so soothing

The calm before the storm or after?

Tara yet again backing out of the comfort, the security and the love as her past comes haunting her again😔

Dev restless, helpless and worried 😳

Geet not able to come in terms with Maithima's state

Kabir's pain too disturbing her and her disturbed state worrying Maan

Maaneet hug was just so touching

Geet just breaks down in Maan's arm finding her solace and seeking her answers

Maan comforts her and his lines voicing out his innermost feelings for his loved ones be it his family or his Giit

Truly distance doesn't matter if it is yours it will come back to u😳

Their simple gestures and simple lines are so deep and touching!

Kabir and Megha🤔

Chalo meri tension toh waise tune last update mein door kar di thi😳

Awesome update Avi

So well written with so much happening around in all their lives😕

All struggling with their past and present for a better future😳

Thanks for updating

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