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Posted: 12 years ago
I lov de title of stry,a catchy one makes u rd it...😳prolog s vry nice...she s dere 2 make hr identity nd fulfil hr mothr s dreams...he s dere 2 enjy hs drems nd hs identity s hs fader...one thing bind dem 2gethr pnishmnt...osm lines babie..👏geet s douter of army parents ...so can imagine her chrctr..prt 1a...typical indian police..😉 ,acp bohut mystrius lag reha hei,maan tring 2 setle de mater.eger 2 meet acp...prt 1b...paisa jitna jyada kapre utanne kam wow babie kya baat heimaa baap ne tumehen bigara tumne shote bhai ko...acp ke saare dialoges superb 2 real lagta hei maan ko hifikar hei baki teeno ko koi fikar nehi...geet abhi tak kanhii nehii...??prt1c...maans parents emberessd,past mein maan hd done sm mistake ,kya vo geet se related hei..acp ki kya mystry hei...babie u write osm ,curios 4 nxt ...waiting 4 geets entry...or ho chuki hei...acp hun ...??👏👏👏👏👏👏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
parents always want their children to be pride and not shame... its really sad that both maan and dev have let out their parents ...

so many mysteries are there now... what happened 2 yrs back?? maan feeling the same restlessness when he saw ACP ... that means ACP and his past is connected??? is it geet??? so many questions... will be waiting for their answers...


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Posted: 12 years ago
hi laks ,ki haal hei ...??kush extras kam hua kya...??
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The Punishment

Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan Singh Khurana

- Meredith Sapp

Prologue...

She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


Hope u all like it. plzz do hit like button and leave ur comments.


Part--2

Same time in XYZ Police Station...

She was watching them, there was a winning smile on her face. Their hanging faces were giving her contentment. She turned back and went towards her office. She threw a glance on a brass name plate outside her office's wall engraving her name Ms G. Singh. Looked back once again and went in. She took out all four cell phone and start searching something.

She was sitting in her office and sipping her black coffee. There were wrinkles on her forehead and she was thinking deep. She waited for this day and now thinking on her next move.

Geet's monologue...

This was not my dream. I never thought my life turn down like this. I was a very simple and isolated child, living in her own world. I spend my time with books not with friends or in gossips. I don't like others interference in my life. I lived a discipline life of defence and convent school. I came here for my MBA and got a well known institute. But that institute changed my destiny. 2yrs back someone broke me, shattered me, and humiliated me to no extent. Then I got three gems of my life, my 3 friends. They taught me, what are friends and what is friendship? If I am here today it is all bcoz of them. They saved me, consoled me and held me in my worst phase of life. They are my family.

Geet, who came here 2 yrs back lost somewhere. Now here is a new Geet no-no only

G. Singh. ACP G. Singh, new name, new identity and new mission.

Maan Singh Khurana ... here i am .

I'll return, Whatever you given me.

Next Day Morning... KM

Ranjeet Singh was waiting for all the family members in his study. He was watching the family portrait of Khurana's. Daadima and Rano came and sit there on a couch. Dev and Maan came and stand there with dropping heads. All the elders gave them a hateful glair.

Ranjeet: I have had enough of you. Last time i gave you a chance, but you failed me, disappoint me. You have to tell me openly now, what do you want from me? As a father i gave you everything love, care, good education and a well known name of Khurana. I can't tolerate any more. It's now or never. I am waiting for your reply.

There was pin drop silence in the study.

Dev: Dad humari galti nahi hai, hum akele nahi the party mei, aur bhi friends thy. Police wale to roz hi kisi na kisi ko pakadtey hai. Dad party mei to hota hai ye sab, aap bhi to jaatey ho.

Ranjeet: Shut-up ... just shut- up ... kahana kya chahaty ho.. ki mei assi parties mei jaata hoon? Business parties mei essa hota hai? ...sab businessmen police-station mei hote hai girls ke sath? Iss tareeke se maine aur tumhare Dadaji ne ye Khurana Empire khada kiya hai?.. Bolo...

Dekh rahi ho Tum dono (towards Daadima and Rano) ... Both the ladies were shocked. They never thought that their sons can spoke like this to their father? They were hurt , looking at them with teary eyes.

Ranjeet: Ye Khurana Empire mere Pita ne aur unke sath milker maine bahot mehanat se banaya hai, mere pita ka sapna hai ye, agar tum iska Sammaan (respect) nahi ker sakte to isska Apmaan (insult) karne ka haq bhi mai tumhe nahi doonga.

Mai ye sab Trust ko de doonga lekin tumhare galat haathon mei nahi. Agar tumhe ye sab chahiye to apne aap ko prove karna hoga , Mai tumhe 6 months ka time deta hoon , Ya to Pariwaar .. Ya .. kuch bhi nahi... only 6 months.

Maa aur Rano iss bare mei mujhse koi baat nahi hoge , ye mera aakhiri faisla hai ... Tum dono inki koi side nahi logi . ( they noded their heads in acceptance ). Kash mere in do beton ki jagaha ek beti hoti..uss ACP jaisi ..to aaj mujhe garv hota.

Maan gather his courage and came near Ranjeet he spoke with a low voice ...

Maan: Dad I know I am wrong and I am ready to accept any punishment, whatever you want to give me. I am at fault and i am ready to repent . Aap jo bhi kahenge, jo bhi decision lenge mujhe manjoor hai.

Dev was annoyed with Maan's behaviour and confused too. He never thought Maan will go with his father's decision so easily. But he can't say anything now. He thought that he'll deal it later.

Ranjeet: OK then. From now both of you will live a normal life, no luxuries, no parties, you'll allowed to use Maa's old car not that Audi, both of you'll work as an employee in KC. Maan you'll join Manesar project and report me every day's work and Dev you'll join me in main office. I want to see you there on time. A single mistake and both of you'll be out.

Dev was stunned, damn... He has to think something else.

Maan noded his head in yes and left the room. Dev followed him.

Daadima came near Ranjeet, kept her hand on his shoulder to console him and blinked in assurance. She left the room giving privacy to husband & wife.



Part- 3 ...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3685802/mg-ss-the-punishment-new-thread-link-on-pg145-17aug?pn=23


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

I lov de title of stry,a catchy one makes u rd it...😳prolog s vry nice...she s dere 2 make hr identity nd fulfil hr mothr s dreams...he s dere 2 enjy hs drems nd hs identity s hs fader...one thing bind dem 2gethr pnishmnt...osm lines babie..👏geet s douter of army parents ...so can imagine her chrctr..prt 1a...typical indian police..😉 ,acp bohut mystrius lag reha hei,maan tring 2 setle de mater.eger 2 meet acp...prt 1b...paisa jitna jyada kapre utanne kam wow babie kya baat heimaa baap ne tumehen bigara tumne shote bhai ko...acp ke saare dialoges superb 2 real lagta hei maan ko hifikar hei baki teeno ko koi fikar nehi...geet abhi tak kanhii nehii...??prt1c...maans parents emberessd,past mein maan hd done sm mistake ,kya vo geet se related hei..acp ki kya mystry hei...babie u write osm ,curios 4 nxt ...waiting 4 geets entry...or ho chuki hei...acp hun ...??👍🏼


Lily..🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

parents always want their children to be pride and not shame... its really sad that both maan and dev have let out their parents ...

so many mysteries are there now... what happened 2 yrs back?? maan feeling the same restlessness when he saw ACP ... that means ACP and his past is connected??? is it geet??? so many questions... will be waiting for their answers...



Dear...🤗

Tum sab din mei aaye thy... mai nahi thi...

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Posted: 12 years ago
mera guess rite tha babie ,acp s geet...wow patting my back...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaj na hi mere hi ka jawaab diya na hi pm ka...kyu?
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Posted: 12 years ago


Lakshu...🤗

Aaj Mona ne 2nd FF ka update diya hai...😊
Aaj ka adda kahan hoga..??😕

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