kashmakash Maaneet SS THD 5 updated new thread - Page 25

aaj ke update ke liye intezaar ...

milega na??

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

aaj ke update ke liye intezaar ...

milega na??

Hum bhi hai waiting line mai 😉

Your writing skills are amazing and the best part is that you don't drag any of your works in cse of diljale I was skeptical as to how will it end when the the mystry behind the real culprit is still there but I was awed with the way you expressed all the emotions in one chapter itself now when I read it I feel that it ended at the right time but still want an epilouge.

This ff is kind of realistic and somewhere I believe that no matter how much maan repents I can never forgive him he killed his unborn kids mentally tortured his wife even though he does realise his mistakes his sorry cannot undo the past. Amongst all your ffs I hate the maan in truly magical and maybe this is the second work in which I will never be able to fall for this maan. Have nothing against maan but somewhere in these two ffs like geet's character more and have preffered geet to be with someone else in these two ffs here maan is a total loser.

Finally he is realising his mistakes but in reality its difficult to trust a person all over again.

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

Same here

Waiting so eagerly Di... Update kabi milega???

superb update. finally geet heard what she was longing to hear from maan. but how will their life be onwards, will maan change, will geet b able to trust him. plz dont end it too soon. want it to b a ff. concept is so unique where u can write many more parts by exploring their relationship. will b eagerly waiting for next

any chance of an update????

part 18 touched me
maan's feelings were bared and its good to see that finally he is taking baby steps towards their relation
the part about the babies was very well put together, the counsellor finally seemed to hit the bulls eye and finally some sense was knocked into maan's mind that are in the crutches of his self imposed rules
he now needs to ease out, let all go and follow his heart and bare his soul to his soul mate and i see glimpses of it in the update especially in the confession that he makes to geet
your descriptions bring to life the very part and i could visualize the part
geet's pain is magnanimous and it'll take time to soothe
lovely update