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nelufar

@NelufarAazmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

wow dear it's superb...

poem was great...
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love it

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: nelufar10
wow dear it's superb...

poem was great...
.
love it

Hey nelu long time must say😃

Thank u for liking it😃

I owe u too for this😃

We resume reading ur ff Tom😃

Just saw that u completed it😃

I want u to write more 😃

Love aanya😃

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ritvi_mg

@ritvi_mg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

congrats aanya for first story

amazing start 😃

nice poem 😃

luvd it

luvd that cute little girl...but why her mother is crying ???why she is in so much pain???par confuse hu ki geet kaun hai woh cute si daughter ya phir strong mother...waiting for next part eagerly

thanks for the pm 😃

update soon

Edited by ritvi_mg - 12 years ago

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: ritvi_mg
congrats aanya for first story
amazing start 😃
nice poem 😃
luvd it
luvd that cute little girl...but why her mother is crying ???why she is in so much pain???par confuse hu ki geet kaun hai woh cute si daughter ya phir strong mother...waiting for next part eagerly
thanks for the pm 😃
update soon

Hi ritvika how are u 😃missed u😃

Thank u soo much 😃

Me glad that u liked it😃

Hmmm I will soon clear all confusion😆

Thank u once again

Love aanya

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

hey guys thank u sooo much for hitting a like there 😃

I am elated at the response u gave me 😃

and yes thank u for the comment too 😃

read them zillionth of times😃

they mean a lot to me 😃

so here me back with a bantam poem hope u guys like it 😆

DEFERENCE AFLLICTION

THE WORD SEEMS STILL

BEFORE THE BANE .

LOST IN ITS CREPUSCULAR GRIEF,

LIKE A REVERENCE TO OIZYS.

HERE I BOW INFRONT OF ,

OUR

DEFERENCE AFFLICTION

Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Awww...thats full of pain yaar

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

itna dard kyun hai
waiting for update

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Cherishh
Awww...thats full of pain yaar

thank u anu 😃

when r u planning to update love 😆

me waiting for it 😃

u see I kept my promise 😆

now ur turn 😉

Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: priya111111
itna dard kyun hai
waiting for update

will update soon di😃

I know I m making my updates look like devdas😆

sorry for that

yup will sure update soon 😃

thank u for liking it 😃

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: aanya84
umm are u guys finding it too diffi to understand the words me sorry
yes will take care of u guys😃

I think except your title every thing was simple to understand .but one advice (I think i have that right on you) use such language that all can find it easy to attach themselves with it.Great effort.and have patience .Likes will surely increase👍🏼👏

Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago