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sorry for late comment actually colg shuru hogai hai n colg walo ne puri band bajane ki planning kar rakhi hai so anyways meri ram khata chodti hu

the update was sooo sweet n filled with love
the way they both were shy with each other in front of dadima
n then their confession n then the unrestrained love it was all super cute

loved geet's words about her convo with dadi
n her confidence is something which complies anyone to believe in it

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This is so cute... I can't stop watching it...😆
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Request all of you to support Drashti in JDJ...please vote to make out Maan ki Mishty win this title. Use this link to vote - http://colors.in.com/in/jhalak-dikhhla-jaa/#nav

Thank you so much all of you for your lovely comments. I am happy you are enjoying Maaneet moments...

@Remya – Thanks dear for giving comments on so many parts...welcome back

@Ritjuja – Thank you dear for all the messages, pictures and love you so much for such a sweetu comment...btw Maan will get bolder and bolder but trust me Geet is going to give him barabar ki takkar...

@Shruthe – You don't know how eagerly I wait for your comments. Thank you so much and dunno worry, there is nothing in his past which Geet can't handle...

@Ash – darling tune aur Shruthe ne hi toh kaha tha naya thread banana ko...btw I am veg to teri chiken kadhai mere patidev ke liye...i could hear your sighs...yeah sir will go away with a very big milestone...u have no idea how many times i had to review to ensure I don't miss that "sir" in front of Maan...

@dqno1 – Thanks dear for your confidence and no I won't be rushing...lots of Maaneet moments coming up mingled with some more character's reactions...

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 – Thanks dear...yes complete transparency is absolutely necessary for a successful relationship

@Heytal – Thanks dear. Song selection was very tricky for this update because there are so many romantic songs which could have fit. But I wanted to bring out those emotions of first confession...the uncertainty, excitement, disbelief and happiness and that song was part of such a confession in movie so I went for it. I am glad you liked the apple romance. I loved that sequence in GHSP after marriage with the apple and this was my twist to it. Also dunno worry. Maan and Geet will always fight odds together and never against each other...

@Maaneetpuneet – Thanks dear for your kind words...dunno worry too much abt his past, it gets covered in this part

@Cyberlife – I get so excited to see your comment...thanks dear. I will indeed write as I have thought about and let's see how it evolves. A lot more to come, as now past is there but still many confrontations left...

@Anu (Tellyme) – Are you settled now? Thanks dear for the comment...Maan's past coming up now

@gudmeet – Thanks dear for showing your faith in me...love ya

@-Lakshmi- Thanks dear...for taking so much interest and giving a comment..mein khud peedit hoon apne laptop ke broken keyboard se...getting it fixed this weekend positively

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Chapter 52– Hum Mar Jayenge

Maan loosened his grip on her and he walked to the balcony. Suddenly he felt stifled and fresh air helped him in calming himself. Geet frowned and walked to stand beside him. He seemed to be just looking at the beautiful green garden dotted by some pretty flowers and lush trees.

Hesitatingly but with surety, she touched his hand clasping his fingers.

"Kya hua Maan sir?"

Maan sighed

"Did Daadima tell you about my college?"

"Ji?"

"I didn't think either. Geet trust is the foundation of any relationship and you need to know something before we move forward.

"Lekin..."

"Shhh...Geet kehne do mujhe...please

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mVLdbnUf4I8&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link –http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mVLdbnUf4I8

Apni aankhein khaali kar de

Kaash tu meri aankhein bhar de..

Mere yaara tere gham agar payenge

Humein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge

Do yeh saugaat tum, to zamane ki hum

Har khushi se mukar jaayenge

Hum mar jaayenge..

I was quite a popular guy in college at least in the beginning. Along with being from a good family, I was part of college's football team which helped me in having many friends. I had couple of girlfriends in my first year but it was nothing serious. Couple of dates here and there. But in second year…I had a serious relationship. At least it was serious from my side.

Her name was Samira. I wouldn't say I was deeply in love or anything but I was fully committed. She was also a popular girl. At that time I was quite attracted to her outside beauty. We were friends first but then I am not sure if it was peer pressure, friends making comments that we look good together or just mere attraction but I asked her for college dance and then later proposed her formally to be my girlfriend. We were together for almost a year and in that time we did…I mean…we did do some intimate stuff but I promise I never crossed my limits."

Geet was touched by the agony showing on his face as he turned and clasped her hand tighter

"Geet you trust me right. I never crossed my limits. I did realise much later that I never loved her but maybe just accepted as part of my life because of circumstances…please trust me."

Geet smiled and hugged him slightly.

"I trust you Maan sir….khud se bhi zayda. Don't ask me like that sir because I know you can never do anything wrong knowingly. Even if you…it would have been expression of your love. But if you say you didn't love her then you didn't….you don't need to explain this to me"

"How can u say that Geet? And not only am I explaining but sharing too and I need to...you need to know this Geet."

"Maan sir..."

She searched his eyes which seemed to just want to unburden his secrets onto her. Maybe he had never before shared this with anyone.

She gently caressed his fingers laced with hers "Why did you leave her then?"

Maan smiled sarcastically "I didn't Geet…it was she who dumped me"

Geet smiled and hugged him more, nuzzling her nose on his chest "Good for me then sir but how dumb one would have to be to not recognise a person like you."

Maan laughed out loud at her gesture but was serious in next moment

"As you said Geet, this world is the greatest teacher. I had just started third year college when I had to rush back home. Daadaji and...his son…they both had met with accident."

Geet looked ta him in worry caressing his back to calm his down.

"Rehne dijiye Maan sir"

But Maan was alredy lost in the pain of those days. He just shook his head and continued

"I took almost two months off. Daadima was obviously broken…we all were. It was a very difficult time for us but Daadima emerged stronger. Daadaji had instilled that in her and she somehow forced me to continue my study. Her argument was that Daadaji would have wanted it. Moreover she could manage business and even if we suffered losses for two years, I could make up for it later but lost opportunity at studies would be harder to make up for.

By the time I went, Daadima started to go to office. She knew most of the business pretty well but still many clients in the one month interval had pulled out of KC. With her sheer hard work she was able to pull the company back but in those two months, we had already lost more than 25% share value.

Still she convinced me to go back and threw herself into office work.

When I went back, I found out the reality. So called friends had deserted me and I was no more the popular guy. Those days taught not only me but all of us who our real friends were. On one side were people like Munshiji who worked without taking salary for 4 months till the company's position stabilised and on other side there were people who stopped even talking to Daadima. On one side was a junior like Adi who in spite of being geek and a neglected nerd of my much extended group of the college supported me with his company in that dazed state and on other side was Samira.

After landing back, I needed a shoulder. So I went to her apartment. No one seemed to be around so I let myself in with the spare key to wait for her. But I was wrong. She was very much there and had just chosen to ignore the door bell. I saw her in a very compromising situation with another of my batch mate."

Geet gasped at his words and Maan saw the incredulous look on her face.

"I could have understood…still. I mean maybe she chose to break up with me or whatever. But I can never forget the words she told me that day Geet. Those words resonated in my brain for quite a long time and actually made me believe that there was nothing like love between us. You know it never hurt that we broke up but those words…those words hurt my ego and self respect.

She told me that I was a good for nothing now. Without my family's business might behind me, I was worthless. She even joked that it was my folly that I did not have…have a physical relationship with her. I failed to take advantage of my position and though she did not mind a fling but no way she could be committed to a looser like me.

People think that I was broken by her betrayal. Fact is that I was relieved that I saved myself from the biggest mistake of my life. But yes I was big time hurt by her words and it became very difficult for me to trust anyone. My trust issues made me distant from everyone including my own brothers and even they failed to understand me.

When I come back, Daadima was managing but she was emotionally and physically drained. I forbade her to do any more work and took up reins of KC. My strict demeanour and busy schedule just made things worse. And then one day, Vicky left me. That day even I believed that I was actually just a failure. I could not even keep one promise I made to my mother. I could not be a good son or a good brother.

Life seemed so lonely…so dark. I moved to outhouse and this loneliness just consumed me. There was no need to talk to anyone anymore. There was no reason to even have any emotions let alone show them. My happiness was lost in a black hole. I don't even remember when last I did anything other than work. Everything else just faded away. Shauk toh bahut dur ki baat hai, koi zarurat hi nahi bachi thi. If it was not for Daadima, I wouldn't have a reason to even exist."

Maan turned and wiped tears from her face as he cupped her face. His voice went an octave down as he continued

"But then one day everything changed again. One rainy morning, I saw you standing on a bus stop trying to catch a bus. At that time I didn't know you will be part of my destiny like this but that moment changed my life. I could not forget those brown honey eyes Mishty…your eyes. Probably it was the pain and innocence in them which had ensnared me.

Tere kaandhe se hi lagke, Yaara beetein umar saari

Socho kaisi hogi kismet, Huaa yun to phir humaari

Saare aansoon to ho tere, Aur aankhein ho humaari

Tere dard haemin

Jo mile pyaar mein

Hum khushi se yun bhar jaayenge

Hum mar jaayenge..

Mere yaara tere gham agar paayenge

Humein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jaayenge

I never told you but that was the first day I saw you…day you came to KC to give your interview. Tumhare Babaji ne tumhein meri kismet mein bahut pehlke likh diya tha."

Smilingly he took her in his embrace. Caressing her head he poured his heart out to her

"I fought a lot Geet…bahut lada apne is dil se…par tumhari masumiyat aur pyar ke saamne haar gaya. I don't know when I fell for you. If it was the moment I saw you at the bus stop or when you had hugged me on the rainy night. But I soon realised my fight was futile. All I had to do was close my eyes in front of your Babaji at dargah and I knew that you were part of me and I could never ever deny my love for you.

I love you Geet…my Mishty…I love you. You gave me a reason to live, to smile. Ab jeene ko jee chahta hai…I love you Jaan."

Maan for the first time hated the sling as he just wanted to squeeze her into himself. Understanding his unsaid words by her tightened fingers around her waist, she grabbed him closer.

Tears weren't stopping from her eyes but neither could the words which just tumbled out effortlessly today

"I love you too Maan sir….pata nahi kabse. I also realised my feelings at the same place when you had taken me there after that party. Shayad sach mein babaji ne humari kismet ko jod diya tha…tabhi toh aap mujhe aise mil gaye jaise pyaase ko saagar.

And you are not a failure. You are the best son who respects and loves his mom...best brother who in spite of everything gave love to his brother...a best person who has so much love and simplicity in his heart. People may misunderstand but those who are close to you will one day eventually know you...it is their folly that they need time to recognise goodness of this heart. Aaj Maa jahan bhi hain unhein garv hoga apni parvarish pe...apne bete pe. Aur mein...mere to hero hain aap...Babaji ka roop..."

Maan smiled overwhelmed with her words. She just knew to calm him even when storms raged his heart. Her simple words...her one love filled glance was enough to bring back that confidence on herself. Yes he was not a failure...how could he be. He had his Geet with him telling him that she was proud of him, that she loved him. There was anyways no bigger achievement then knowing that people you loved, loved you back.

Parting her away, he kissed her forehead and then her closed eyelids. Her tears shone like pearls on her cheeks. They troubled him...today he just wanted a smile on her face not these tears.

"Ro mat na Mishty….mujhe acha nahi lagta"

Her plea warmed her heart as she wiped her tears at his sweet words and a bright smile adorned her face. She responded cheekily

"Ek condition pe."

"Condition?"

"Hmmm…is sab se pehle…aapki sabse fav cheez kyat hi which you stopped doing?"

"Kyon puch rahi ho"

"Mujhe bhi nahi batayenge aap"

Maan sighed "Bachpan mein toh sabse zayda Maa ko hi miss kartha that but as I grew other things came into my life. Family time…Football….discs and parties…..par sabse zayda shayad I miss Daadaji and time I used to spend with him. Pata hai, har Sunday ko me, Daadaji, Vicky, Daadima even Maa when she was there….we all will spend 2-3 hrs in study or terrace after breakfast. It was like a ritual. Eating fruits – watermelon or oranges according to season, we will just listening to old Hindi songs. We will talk, joke, play board games but absolutely no office talk. I can never forget those hours spent with my family and those songs which we all will hum and enjoy. Lekin Daadaji ke jaane ke baad….na family time ki aur na hi un gano ki koi jagah bachi humari zindagi mein. Like everything else even music became silent."

"Toh phir aaj, kuch lagaiye na….mein sunna chahti hoon"

"Geet lekin?"

"Mujhe bhi gaane bahut pasand hai...please...Mere Liye"

Chaahe dukh ho, chaahe sukh ho, Dil ne tujhko hi pukara

Tune humko hai banaya, Tune humko hai sanwara

Jahaan ko to rab ka hai, Humein tera hai sahara

Bas tera saath ho

Chaahe jo baat ho

Tere kehne se kar jayenge..

Hum mar jaayenge..

Hmm mere yaara tere gham agar payenge

Humein teri hai kasam hum sanwar jayenge

Maan smiled and hugged her tight "Oh Mishty"

Precap – Phoolon ke rang se

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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!...I am the first one...can't believe it...

awesome...

loved the way how geet supported maan and how maan told geet his sorrow and pain...it's true trust is the key of every relation...

continue soon
Edited by sweet scorpio - 12 years ago
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Someone stole my spot!!! Pointing towards sweetscorpio...
Waiting ka edit kiya... dekha na...
2nd
I loved the update!
Was worried what his secrets were although I knew it could not be anything to hurt her.
That much confidence I had in him.
Opening up his heart and past to her. He should have known that she would be by his side.
Samira, the gold digger!! Acha hua, that she was so dumb as Geet said.
The pleasant memories of family time was wonderful.
Wonder why Vicky went away? Does Dev have a hand in that?
I am intrigued by that...
Maaneet moments were sweet.. Ab uska sling hata doh Ritzy... He deserves some pyar with his love.
Thanks for updating..
Song choice was wonderful.
Waiting for next already!!
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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ohh teri... kambakhat itna karne ke baad bhi 3rd huh!!! phooti kismat meri!!!
waise aaj mazaa aaya
i fell down, sprained my ankle and not able to walk properly now.😃


update was super nice.
aaj hi shruthe di n i were speaking n we guessed it would be samira thing only and we were so correct😉
rightly said that a relationship is based on trust even though geet believes in him blindly still he made sure she knew everything about his life. sam is a bitch!!! (aaj kal am using too much swear words-- college elections ka asar so pls dont mind)

one thing tht caught my attention when maan spoke of 'dadaji and his son'
so evident that he had lost respect for his father aur ho bhi kyun na...
whatever he did to krishna was something really unforgivable. and maan tho chota tha jab ye hua tho uski psychology pe kaafi asar hua hain 4even that sam thing
kuch baatein aisi hoti h that wen loved ones speak, bahut hurt hota hain
we might forget the physical pain but jo chot dil pe lagi ho usko bhulana asaan nahi
but am glad that there is no secret between them now... a very pure relationship they share.. pristine and heavenly.

updt was chotu sa... me not happy
i need another updt today
and yeah not to forget...the way she tried to soothe him.. the old family days.. hindi songs
this reminds me of my best frnd whose parents divorced a year back and she even told me honestly that aishu i feel sad seeing ur whole family together under one roof when she visited my place
i couldnt even do anything for her... i couldnt even tell her anything at that point of time. she even told that she was sometimes jealous of me...
hopefully she gets a very nice family soon...she is the only person for whom i pray a lot...i have seen her breaking down... and so helpless.. i would probably be the happiest person if she gets the best person in this world. now she lives with her mom n two little sisters.
kash ki aisa hota that we cud undo the bad things but sadly we cant-- hardcore truth of life!!!

precap..how can i miss it..
Phoolon ke rang se...
Dil Ki Kalam Se Tujhko Likhi Roz Paati
Kaise Bataaoon Kis Kis Tarah Se Pal Pal Mujhe Tu Sataati
Tere Hi Sapne Lekar Ke Soya Teri Hi Yaadon Mein Jaaga
Tere Khayaalon Mein Uljha Raha Yoon Jaise Ki Maala Mein Dhaaga
Haan Badal Bijli Chandan Pani Jaisa Apna Pyar
Lena Hoga Janam Humein Kayi Kayi Baar
Haan Itna Madir Itna Madhur Tera Mera Pyar
Lena Hoga Janam Hameh Kayi Kayi Baar

awwieee one of my fav songs diii
ab tho jaldi jaldi updt banta hi hain
Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago
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tell me Di from where u got these songs.. they are just too accurate foor updates...

awesome update...

everything is cleared abt their past now it will be present and future...

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