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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24




Mona , Lily , Lakshu , Priya , and Sona...


yeh lo main aagayi hoon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Kya hua net ko...???😔



pata nhi evening se slow ho gaya .. post bhi like nahi ho rahi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111


yeh lo main aagayi hoon



hiii priyaa babbie


Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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hi mona
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Pls see this VM, made specially for this part, from my lovely friend URME .. and its just awesomeee!!!!!!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Lg2qf5LeLY&feature=share


The Downpour... Part 42



Geet saw him sleeping. She could not stop herself to keep away from his allure. She went near and sat beside him slowly, lost in his charm. She felt a sudden wish to adore him, love him so profoundly that nothing could be left unfulfilled between them. His extreme care and love was making her to devote herself completely, in his embrace. It was for the first time she was experiencing something like this! She was so shocked with own weird thoughts but did not want to defend them.

Slowly she brought her hand to touch him, his face. She stroked his hair then his cheeks. Her heart was racing high, face was burning, turning into red but she was doing, fulfilling her desire. She felt like her life was perfect now.

Tu Mile Dil Khile, Aur Jeene Ko Kya Chaahiye

She felt a hand on her shoulder. Abruptly she turned back and saw Maan was standing behind. She shocked and looked back toward bed, Maan was sleeping there yet. She came to know she was dreaming him. She smiled. She started taking part in her dreams.

She felt Maan was cupping her face. He kissed her eyes and then cheeks, like always used to do. He eyes were pouring pure love in which she found herself submerging.

Na Ho Tu Udaas Tere Paas Paas Main Rahunga Zindagi Bhar
Saare Sansaar Ka Pyar Maine Tujhi Mein Paya


His song was making her heart dance on the rhythm of his words. She knew he will be there for her, always. Maan eyes were filled with naughtiness. He brought his face closer, staring to her lips. Geet gasped, she trembled and moved back abruptly, hit with bed and found a sudden fall over Maan. He woke up with jolt and found his Geet was in his arms. Geet tried to stand up but he took turn, bringing Geet below him. She was trapped.

Her eyes met with him. She was shocked, what happened! Her heart was pumping so repeatedly that it must be giving Maan feel of her excitement, she knew. She found his face so near. His eyes were stroking her face and stopped over her lips. She got sacred. She knew it was not dream. Before Maan could take next step she pushed him back gathering her last bit of spirit and runs away, out of room, to catch some relief breathes.

Maan chuckled loud. He loved her shyness. He was enjoying the longing for his love, which had seen in her eyes. Till the time he had guessed that she knew about the girl of his life, otherwise she would not let him increase the intimacy between them.

He stood up and went for getting fresh. He came out wearing his jeans and vest, drying hairs with her towel. He needed not to ask before using her things. He knew it was his authority only. He came before dressing table to comb hairs when his eyes fell on desk, keeping something very familiar there. He picked it up and his eyes shines when saw, her Earrings, was in pair.

"It means, she knows!!!'' His eyes started shining in happiness. His happiness had no bound knowing that she knew about his love. Though he had guessed it before but at the moment no one could avoid the glow appearing on his face. He could not have stopped the happy dance of his heart and his heart wanted to fill her in his arms right there. He hid earrings and comb and shouted,

"Geet, I can't find comb. Can you please come and find it for me!!!'', and waited impatiently.

Geet who with difficulties, had handled her heart and was working in kitchen now, heard his calling her. In hurry she runs to him and stopped when reached there, looking him in vest. His exposing skins were teasing her senses. With slow and steady steps she walked toward dressing table, avoiding looking at him. Maan was very much enjoying her plight, standing in attitude, with crossing arms pose.

Geet came and started searching comb in drawer. Suddenly she heard his breaths sound which was falling on her shoulder. She knew he was near, very near to her. She looked up in mirror and found him right behind her, gazing to her only. His wet hairs and fresh shower smell was making her lose her heart over him again. Maan touched her both shoulder and made her turn to him. He wanted to ask her something. He held her chin and made her look direct in his eyes. He could find the love which he always wanted to have in it. They did not feel need of words between them.

Maan brought his face closer, staring her lips. She shivered and looked down, could not handle the heat of his desire.

Maan was satisfied, finding the slight smile on her lips. He rested his head on her forehead, just gave time her to be calm. She smiled but it did not stay longer when found a cold drop slipped down from his wet hair, on her shoulder. Maan bent and drunk it, giving a deep kiss on the place. She shivered, clutched his arms in reflex. It was so hard to manage her own heartbeats, she never had known it before.

After feeling some calm, Geet opened her eyes. Maan made her turn and made face to mirror, in which they could see each other reflections. Maan pick out her earrings from pocket and slowly made her wear one by one.

Chanda Tujhe Dekhane Ko Nikala Karta Hai

Aaina Bhi O , Deedar Ko Tarasa Karta Hai

She shied although smiled. He turned to her and cupped her face. He sung,

Itni Hasin Koi Nahin
Husn Dono Jahan Ka Ek Tujhme Simat Ke Aaya

Tu Mile Dil Khile, Aur Jeene Ko Kya Chaahiye

Na Ho Tu Udaas Tere Paas Paas Main Rahunga Zindagi Bhar
Saare Sansaar Ka Pyar Maine Tujhi Mein Paya


And hug her. She also hugs him back.

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Day passed with same routine. Maan staying with Geet, at night in hospital. After realization of their love, time was running so fast that they could not get enough time to spend together or talk in alone. Hospital was not the right place to pour their hearts out which they eagerly wanted to but they did not miss their little eye locks every now and then.

Next day, again Maan was ready to drop Geet home when she stopped him. She did not like as she was noticing; Maan was ignoring his office and meetings behind her. She tried to talk him. She said, she will go back home alone and he should go office. But as if Maan was to agree. Geet was having tough time to make him understand,

"Geet I said I'm not going anywhere leaving you alone, you get it!!'

"But why Maan, I am not a kid. I can manage alone also. And I don't like that you are avoiding your work just because of me''

"First of all let me understand you Geet that I'm not avoiding my work, and that also because of you, how can you think like this!! And second, I am not at all going to leave you alone and that is my final decision!!!!'' He turned back to her.

"But why Maan!!!'' She was becoming irritated. "I said I'm not kid!!!!''

"And that's why I don't want to leave you alone Geet'' He Looked her.

"But why!'

"Because I don't like the place where you live, I have seen, it's not safe for you and no risk I want to take with your life.. with my life'' He held her face between his palms.

"Why can't you stay with us Geet, in mansion? Dadi also wants this''

Geet could see he was really worried for her. She held his hands resting over her cheeks and said,

"Maan please try to understand. I can't stay in mansion without permission of my parents''

"It means you want to Geet??' He looked her mischievously. She was trapped between her own words. She removed her hand over his.

"I never say this!!'

"But your words said this!!''

Maan I think you should leave now, your clients will be waiting for you'' She tried to change the topic that Maan understood.

"Hmm, Okay, fine!!! I will go but, you are coming with me!!!'' He held her hand and dragged with him toward car.



Precap : Dadi hears Maaneet talk in office 😛


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊

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Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Mona n Priya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lagta hai mona indono ko bina confesses karein he sab kuch karwana chahthi hai. Hey mona maan ki gaadi thodi dhere chalane do warna lene ke dene pad jaayegi😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan+geet-asha updtt,lovd itmneet mmnts r osm ,maan ne earings dale 😳precap bhi mast hei yaar...alrdy waiting 4 it...asha ko hospital mein hi rehne do...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi
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