I Won't Give Up - Page 13

Originally posted by: birdy2011

this is so amazing and so touching ...and the title is soo good...u r a grt writer

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Oh yeah? Bring it on! Lekin pehle Avi ki gardan ko thoda sa mazbut kar de aainda kabhi ghumaana pade toh dard na ho. 😆

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

beautiful...

whole incident and their love from maan's POV is beautiful...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: mayyo13

That was too easy to guess! Avi itni ladaku hai kya? 😆
If and when I pen something down and I feel it's satisfying, I will surely let you read it. 😊

Originally posted by: dqno1

Avi jaha aati hai

line wahi se shuru ho jaati hai...😲

Discipline... bada inglis word... wo kya hota hai...😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Is it...😲

Ever heard of readers choice 😲😲

or user input...😲😲

😡

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hawww!!!

Abuse!!!

tu meri gardann ghumayegi...😲

tu aur kitne aur?

Touch bhi nahi kar sakti hai...😲😲

Jiske saath Chulbul Pandey hai...

usse tujh se darr nahi lagta...mind it...

Originally posted by: dqno1

Doc ne mujhe ladaku nahi kaha hai...😲

Apni baat mat add kar...

Main sab dekh rahi hu..

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Discipline matlab anushaasan. Ye toh pata hai na? 😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

Ye kya Yoga ka koi pose hai...😆