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Mona

@mona1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#361

awesome update loved it continue soon

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Woha.. She insulted Maanveer on his face...Let's see how can Maanveer will handle this rajkumari.. she is not gonna be easy after marriage also...👏 Nice update..😊

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#363

wonderful...marvelous...awesome upadte...

Geet ne apni talwaar se Maan ki talwaar rok li...

he gave away their kingdom back and wanted Geet in return...this is not digestible to his men because this is not his true self...

but they don't know that this is Geet who has all abilities to change him and make him her own slave...

he acknowledged her bravery...he called her Veerangana...

he has started smiling too much and this is start of birth of heart in his barren chest...

waiting for next part...

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ashmaaneet

@ashmaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#364

update
kya deal ki hai maan ne 😳

geet sacrificing herself for her family n rajbhumi she is truly a princess 👏

maharaj is really proud of her daughter bt at the same he is worried for as maanveer already hv many wifes 😭

am toh maan geet ka chehra tb dekhega jb woh uski wife banegi 😳

continue soon

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kashtilover

@kashtilover

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

fab part
Maan is truly evil he know hw to bend othr
Geet is real prince
Waiting fr nxt

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

superb update
geet is so brave loved her character very much
maan is really a king
cont soon

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

READ TO UNDERSTAND STORY WITH DEPTH

NOTE AND INFORMATION

1. I AM NOT USING ANY particular surname IN THIS FF SO DON'T USE RAJPUT FOR GEET AS I WANT TO FREE MY MIND SO I IMAGINE A PLACE Rajbhumi and will call her 'viragana".

2. almost all king behavior is same their rituals their education and style but scene is always different as like padmni and jodha both are brave but they both are different their story is different.

3. here both are hindu so this ff is no near to jodha akber.

4. this is not a revenge story also.

5. there will most of the scene will belong to inside palace of maanveer as i didn't like war scene so much.

5. i know by mistake in banner i gave name as rajput but ignore it.

6. i know maan 20 wifes left u in big shock but if i am writing this period drama than this is a important part.

7. read with your own wish and comment also only if you like it but silent readers plz dont ask question from me and pm me or demand for updat as this is only my loyal reader right.

chapter 6

This is a purely imaginary Fiction, nothing is related to history even some place is also not exist on earth. someone have problem pm me than.

[power come with sacrifices]

In rani mahal temple

[some people worship only one statue or 'thakur jii ki murti' only, hum une murti mai life mante hai or unki saari responsibility humari hoti hai, not only royal family but normal person also, 100 yr se ek hi statue ki puja hoti hai kuch ghar mai, this is about shradha and trust]

"Ye lijiye Geetangli apke Krishna jii.. inhone hii apka bhagye nishit kiya hai.. abb ye hi apki raksha karge usse nagri mai(take it Geetangli your Krishna jii.. he only decided your fate.. now he will protect you there)" rani maa give her 2000 yr khandani murti of shri krishna to Geetangli.. she is so found of this statue.. even this murti also except only her rasoi (food).. yes this is a miracle.. (I know this too much for u to believe but today also its happened.. for this you have a trust who are not able to digest it ignore this this is not for you).

Story has been moved to blog

precap: will post next in night if got satisfactory comment and like

Thanks to everyone who are supporting me in my dream story

Edited by -Mitu- - 10 years ago

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cvrocks

@cvrocks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

What happened? Why was wrong with last chapter?

'Ll wait for new one

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: cvrocks
What happened? Why was wrong with last chapter?
'Ll wait for new one

??? WHAT ARE YOU SAYING I DIDNT UNDERSTAND

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#370

Everyone is sad because of her leaving rajbhoomi and their proud of her sacrifice and she also wanted all of them to send her with the happy farewell each one of them loved their princess to a greater extent