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drrose31

@drrose31

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

congozz on new story dear

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Smily

@angel_smily

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

awesome update

finally they met

but till now maan doesn't see her face

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

superb update...

loved it...

continue soon...

thnks for the PM...

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

first of congratz for te new ff.. very lovely, ur dream story naa..i read all parts all in one go

wow lovely lovely lovely ff.. very interesting start.. my maan te king of india oh god.. i drooling on his style, his atittude te way he threat his people and te way his wives oh god , imagining him with crown and in king dress .. oh god.. i want tis maan , ks i want him.. te way he winning all te places and te way his power.. seeing tis maan, i feel he is te superman, no no god.. yes he is god who know only to rule and destroy.. i love u maan..ks i have fallen more for tis maan.. te way geetanjali ki entry and her braveness why cant she is lady lion, my maan ki sherni.. te way my maan fida on his geet at first sight was so lovely.. i love tis ff so so much dear..

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queenbee001

@queenbee001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Sorry dear for late comments. Loved the start. Has been fond of Historical stories always. Loved this Maanveer and Geetanjali. Love to read Maaneet in this new avatar.
Maanveer a typical ruler with all qualities of a ruthless king - marrying more for political benefits than love and doesn't care for the queens and wife he have. His main queen naturally rules over rest of the queens. . someone will knock his sense off for sure 😊

Geetanajli.. wow loved he aura she carry with her as a Rajput princess. Kya entry mari hai Maanveer ki (apni) palace mein.. waiting for their story to start..

Edited by queenbee001 - 12 years ago

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azaina

@azaina

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

wowww
cute si story hain abhi padhi
maan n geet mahanraj n princess
😛

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

vow beautiful update

waiting for maaneet direct meeting

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

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niki

@mymaaneet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

loved it alot update soon

waitin for the next

intresting concept and story

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lizzy84

@lizzy84

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Omg geet and Maan finally met thank u for giving us the much awaited meeting

I loved geet's attitude Maan is totally Fida on geet now what will he do

Eagerly waiting for this story to move forward

Thank u so much for the pm

Love aanya

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Mitu

@Mituag

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

TEASER

[both poems are my property]

Naar chanchal vo angaro se bhare naina,
Shurveer rajkumari vo uska kya khana,
Jale de jaha dekhe le krodhit hokar,
Aor pigla de vo jaha dekhe le laja kar,
Do naina uske,
Muskara diya mujhe gayal karke,
Chaine chura le gaye uske vo do naina!!!

English translation

naught eye filled with fire,

brave princess what i say about her,

if she saw in anger turned another into ashes,

if she say in shyness than she is able to melt stone

two eye

her eyed smiled after taking my peace

her eye took my all peace!!!

maanveer first time clutched his fist after hearing his insult.. indeed this is his insult but he want to explore more to this lioness and want to marry her without any force.

update after 150 likes at least in each chapter

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