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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

it was marvelous punishment needed more so that people forget name of rape.

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

a lovely update...i have this gnawing feeling that anant is not going to keep quite...he is going to do something nasty...
loved vikas's punishment..the gutsy girls had chose an apt punishment for him...he deserved this public humiliation and beatings...bloody bas***d...

arjun has heard the convo between anant and geet...hope he doesnt draw his own conclusions and tries to understand the fact that geet couldnt have let her dadu down, she thinks highly of him, as she doesnt know what a manipulative and scheming bas***d her dadu is... wondering how the story is going to progress from now,,,, the truth about the past is yet to be known to geet...looking forward to the next update

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Amazing Update Reet.

Then again ..he controlled covering it all ... .taking all nightmares with him

He was everything I ever wanted ..but at that moment my erupting emotions had crossed the threshold of my tolerance .

Such a great description of how she feels or more appropriately how he made her feel. It would have been fine and great any other day but at this moment in time she is too wrecked to feel anything more.

I don't know who he is to me.i don't know what he feels about me . obligation or something more , I don't if I'm to expect something from him ..or not . but I just felt only one thing .
Its just him .

Only him, I can ever love .

so much it smothers me..so much it frightens me.
Love is like that isn't it. It scares the daylights out of you with what you begin to fear. It is the magic you never want to lose because you know without it you would not be able to survive. She is overwhelmed with her feelings right now. If only he had a chance to have told her, she would not be in so much of a dilemma now.

I had never left him . he did .. I always stood where he had stopped loving me .

I wanted to hug her at this point. He never stopped loving her but she has always been left by everyone so this would be her mentality.

Its void ..but its quiet here a sense of stilled calmness ..i don't have anything to lose ..so I don't have to fear ..dont have to get hurt anymore .i didn't like the way he had kissed my foot ..it scared the hell out of me.

Typical evasive behavior for a person suffering depression. Retreat into the shell so nothing hurts.

Arjun also has his own questions that he is left with. Neither one is certain of the other. There is a massive lack of communication between them.

Was he sure geet would choose me when the time comes ?

she was one told him that she didnt have anybody else than him .

His distrust and anger at Anant is bound to come between them. He does know that her grandfather is all she has left but listening to Anant will never let them be together.

I will never do anything that you don't want ..even if it is about dev.

How can she say such thing .. even after what happened between them . how can the devil of a grandfather be more important to her after everything they been together .

I loved Melinda. For someone who has gone through so much in life, she is full of life and smiles. I loved the way she tried to bring the star crossed lovers together...

actually last night itself . he was just standing in the corridor you know . the door of this room was closed , but he was staring at it like he could see you through it . he didn't even breathe until the time Dr Guha informed your pressure came back normal . he didn't move out for a second since you have come here Miss Geet .

The following lines had me fall off. He teaches English of course so a master at words... 😆😆

I heard you wanted me ?

Thud !!
The rich baritone ..!
darn heart !

Dia and Satya were so cute. The clinical analysis of Dia was funny.

Okay .. his eyes are hazel. Point noted .

She wouldn't call sensuously hazel .

But not bad either !!

The college getting together to punish Vikas was apt. Zaria...👏👏👏 Her standing up for her friend was perfect. We have Yash for Su... sweet... reluctant love is so much fun to read about.

Thanks for a wonderful update Reet. Remember you promised a quick update soon. 🤗

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

i was tempted to post a longer update ..wher u cud see a clear view of the situation ..but decided against it

..god onir you too ..i hated hate will always hate psm

It's okay next update mein aa hi jayega na so tab we can get it all. (Yes Greedy for more) 😉

I just can't understand why PSM? it is a torture and they should give it as voluntary posting or keep it optional.

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

This was a fantastic update on many counts..

1. loved the melinda/geet interaction

2. absolutely loved geet/arjun encounter fight infront of dr towards the end...atleast they are talking even if it is fighting

3. loved the punishment given to vikas by the girls...loved the unity which geet has been trying to do...but poor geet

4. looks like dia is being loved by mr.awasty junior...hmmm

5. dadaji...grrr...when will geet come to know his true colors?? my one question i understand he hates maan but does he love geet or not???

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Hmm..chapter started with beautiful "shair" of "Lady Ghalib"{Naureen}...I would like to confess,i used to consider🤗"shero shayari" cheesy before stumbling upon naureen's "shairs" on Avi's thread..They are classic in their own way..I don't know whether she writes them of her own or they are from some book but I totally love them...!!!! and I really thank her for giving me this pleasure..thank you naureen...!!!

Coming to the chapter-

Geet's monologue ..

As usual,it presented the sheer brilliance of your writing,Reet..!!! Each letter perfectly portrayed geet's emotions and her mental state at present and during those moments of intimacy...!!!

You know,since i had started reading this story,i have always wondered what is so special in your "writing??"which makes a reader glued to it..Finally last chapter made me understand,what is that special thing??? Its the beautiful portrayal of emotions of characters of the story..You have presented the "Hospital scene" in two different versions..In previous chapter,you presented the scene with Maan's perspective as well as a person's{writer's actually} perspective,who might have witnessed everything standing there ,wearing an invisibility cloak ofcourse...😛 and in this chapter,you presented the entire sequence with Geet's perspective..!!! I always wanted to know that whether geet noticed hurt and anger in maan's eyes when she told him ,vikas had touched her there??? and bang..!!! you told that in this chapter...!!! Being able to write little myself,I can understand,how difficult is it to think from each character's point of view and how difficult is to portray it..At one moment,you become Maan and at one moment,you have to think like Geet..!!! and during this interchanging,you looses the track of right and wrong..What is right for geet becomes wrong from maan's pov and vice versa..Complications become more complicated when you have to take care of "reader's" expectations too...!!!

..and then comes a point,when writer's looses the "reins" of story and its the "characters" only which drive the story further of their own...!!!!

phew..I am sorry for all this "Ram katha" but I could not stop myself..Hope it would make some sense to you..and if don't then ignore my ramblings dear..!!! All i wanted to say that,you are very hardworking and fabulous writer..I would always admire the hard efforts you are putting to write this story and giving us such long long chapters...!! a BIG hug to you for that...!!!🤗

I think,i have already said alot, and i should stop now other wise comment super lengthy ho jayega...!!!!😆 You know,my story's updates are shorter than the comments i give on this thread...🤣

but jate jate,thoda toh bol ke jaungi...

Anant and Geet's meeting was umm..emotional form geet's side..Geet loves her grandpa alot..i wish that old man would have valued her selfless love 😡I am really glad that geet did not agree to leave the hostel..I already knew,she won't be able to leave after those lessons from her teacher...!!! Arjun heard only last bit of their conversation..Hope it would not create any misunderstanding further..They are all ready suffering from alot of misunderstandings...!!!

Mr.Sahay is struggling with the information,he had accidentally got... I am liking him more and more with each chapter..He is a good man...!!!

Nurse Melinda's appearance was a good surprise. Her words had actually given much strength to geet to bear all this and fight against it..After hearing her story,geet might have felt,the strong lady standing near her had endured much more than her..!!!

ok entry of Mr."you wanted me???",made me giggle..😆 He is good player of words..Actually they both are..!!! When Geet asked him to ask melinda to send lunch for her,I was like,why she is saying so???😕 I did not understand she was indirectly telling him that she had eaten and he should eat now..Girls are really complicated...She could have said all this directly too...!!!😕

Maaneet's "nok jhok" was entertaining and very cute..Reminded me of old GHSP days...!!!😃

and At last..

What a "deserving" punishment that Vikas had got...!!!👏.👏👏.👏👏.👏.👏.👏 It actually calmed my heart..!!!

Bravo to group of girls for taking this step and punishing him publicly..!!! This should be the actual punishment for every "rapist" in this world...😡

A standing ovation to the "writer" who made "Su and team" to do all this...!!!👏.👏.👏.👏

Hmm..so we have two "Hazel eyed" characters here..and I am confused whom i like most..Being a girl,i love the guy more...😉😆..!!!

Bas..ab mein samachar smapt karti hoon...!!!😃 Baki agle chapter ke baad..

PS-"dia was finally being accustomed with satya's talking style ..he never addresses her .just startles from behind "

You detailing of the characters always amazes me,reet...!!!!😃

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Amazing update..!

Loved Maan n Geet's bickering at the hospital...so sweet..

Bravo to the girls who managed to tie up a naked Vikas...deserves that...wuuhuuu...!!

Ahem...Satya and Dia...seems like sparks will happen soon...loved their part...

Loved the whole update actually..!!

Cont soon please..!!

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

-after somany sad and emotional updates its somewhat relief by seeing arjun and geets cute tomand jerry fight. Loved how dr.Guha appointed melinda to make her come out of depression who has faced more sexual problems and successfully came out of that hell. Hate Anant very much and now he is after Arjun and waiting what information is Awasty is going to disclose.The punishment given by the girls was superb that b******* diserved more.How all girls became one inorder to give justice to geet who fought for all and wants to keep them unite really now her mission got succeded by facing a lot of humiliation.Kahi Satya tho line nahi maar raha haina dia pe😉 if so no problem loved their jodi.

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#609

Ok so firstly I am speechless with the way you have written these 4 updates . Nothing I say can really justify or for that matter explicitly convey what I felt reading ... the way Geet's transition ; well not transition but her shift from helpless , depressed , self-loathing condition to her being gaining back "The Geet" fervor that I witnessed in earlier chapters was outstanding ! it very fluently described that nightmares such like Geet faced should not hinder a girl's life in any way . But Geet was lucky because there was a certain Arjun in scenario ...

I really loved this place more like the befitting place Arjun thought about Geet and her words

I love you arjun ..!

never leave me ..

I love you so much that I fear its going to kill me ..

Arjun shut his eyes .. the nails digging in the palm .. was it drawing blood ?

I don't understand you sir ..what do you want from me .. for me ..!

You have already proved that you are beyond expectation .

For once I felt like you are concerned for me..

Will you leave ?

You don't concern me geet ..!

miss geet ..its sir for you ..

Haan I did ..

I did ! damn it !!

I shouted for you because ..

because .. I don't have anyone else ..

She wants you to move on ..with me..

You hurt me . you ignored me . you refused me . you humiliated me .

But still if you look at me once with kind eyes .

I come running after you .

I cant stay without you .

Not now .not ever.

i promise you ..i will never call for you ..ever again .even if it brings my end .

you lied.. you didn't forgive me.

It almost had me in tears as well . The part where Arjun claimed his touch on Geet wsa divine to say the least . Being in love truly can create miracles and wonders . His touch healed Geet that in morning she wanted to have food .Her awkwardness , fidgeting , crying hearing Melinda's story are all proof that Geet that was lost few days back indifferent to emotions has started to feel again 😊 Very slowly still surely Geet is coming back !

I just loved Satya with the way he explained truth to Dia , truly commendable

About Mr. Raichanda I knew he would nudge Geet on marriage now ; Geet's persuasion for sake of her academics and scholarship was lovely ...

Lastly a befitting punishment to Vikas . Pple like him should be tortured such that henceforth anyone should think a lifetime before attacking a girl ! truly Beautiful writing ...

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#610

i loved the punishment.i seriously think every rapist's punishment should be death.brutal death.forget death they don't even get punishment for our so called justice.i am loving satya.after a long time it was a light hearted update reet.

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