Maneet ff-Humrahi.#2part 15/16page 112/132 sep 4....#3linkpg1 - Page 37

loved the part yaar u well explained the stae of her mind and thinking to cool him with a kiss innocently slowly learning things between husband and wife, so she now knows how husband and wife kisses good improve ment, u r well potraying the middle class atmosprere in this how to adjust to the situations etc... etc.. i think geet deffinitely becomes a good wife to maan and a good bahu to sd.

Originally posted by: valli22

hehe i myself dont know..what i will do with both😉

awesum...maneet shared their first kiss...continue soon..

Awesome one Di,maaneet relation is budding wit time.hope maan's love wil help geet to overcome her guilt.waiting for nxt part

poor maan no sr 😊but he got a kiss 😊nice update dear😊

hiii di finally read all the available parts of this amazing ff..
i am amazed and in love with this concept..
aapki writing is sooo good... masha allah...


first two parts the inintail background i felt was way too realistic the way u revealed all the things was too good... mujhe na dar laga tha first time jab read kiya tha when the teacher tried to harrassed geet so i quit reading😛

but after now reading i am in love with ur maan specially and the parts where maan tells geet that they will go to the same school to learn how to be a good husband and wife that was epic

later the concern tej saw..geet's father condition status and the main thing that geet is still 17+ but maan is matured i hope he understands her

sorry main aage ka comment bhul gai hun

aap please ise update karna regularly

waiting


update soon

and i like the fact that u showed maan to struggle and establish himslef sab cheezen agar asani se mile then he cant be the true MSK
haina di

fantastic updates dear :)

loved them :)

stalker alert di for both humrahi and u,me FF.pls update soon.