MG SS : Ishaqzaade *pt 35 @ pg 148* LINK OF 2ND THREAD @ PG151 - Page 83

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Posted: 9 years ago

hi all,
thank you for your amazing responses 🤗
i am loving each one of you ...although i know u all must be wanting to kill me right now ...😆

but chalo ...koi nahi
here i have a treat for u all 😳😳
a teaser for the next update since i still haven't been able to type the whole update ..
don't blame me its eid ...after all 😃😳

enjoy reading and do let me know what do you think is going to happen 😉

TEASER


Pammi Bhabi aap yeh kya keh rahe hu ...

Please devar gi ..mehndi ka function shoro hugaya hai kisi ko pata nahi chalega aap plss ridhima k ghar yeh letter de aao ...

Humien kisi bhi tarha maan g tak yeh khabar puhanchani hugi k geet ki shaddi hu rahi hai ...

Par brij bhai ...

Devar gi ...5 saal se iss ghar mien buhat kuch galat hua hai aur mene kabhi zuban nahi kholi magar agar aaj kuch nahi karat u zindagi bhar apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paongi ...

Mujhe laga tha geet di shadi apni marzi se kar rahi hai ..

Dekhiye geet ko devar gi ...mehndi lagwarahi hai wohh ranveer g ke naam ki magar kya koi bhi khushi hai uske chehre par ..

Titu sighed and took the envelope from her hand ...

Pammi bhabi aaj pehli baar mauqa mila hai geet di rakhi ka karz utaarne ka ...yeh letter ridhima k ghar puhanch jayega aap fiqar naa karo ...

Pammi smiled thanking god at least one of her brother do care about geet ...titu left from there and she prayed that this would help geet get out of this hell ...


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Posted: 9 years ago
dhoka diya tune
mujhe laga update di hai 😭😡
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

dhoka diya tune

mujhe laga update di hai 😭😡


update kal pakka ...abhi thora busy hoon ...bahar jaana hai mom dad k saath relatives k ghar
eid hai na
couldn't complete the update

keep waiting
luv ya
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hope u had a wonderful Eid! superb teaser! will b waiting! pls updates Dastaan...
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Nice teaser. Eid Mubarak to you too.
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Apko bhi eid Mubarak ho
N its a treat thanks alot I hope maan wil cum n situation samhal le
N finally pammi ne kuch to kara
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Posted: 9 years ago

hi all
hope u all enjoyed the teaser

here i am with another update
enjoy reading

thankyou for ur amazing comments


stay with me
keep reading and commenting😳😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

MG SS Ishaqzaade



PART 33

Geet laid on the bed like a dead soul ...looking into oblivion every moment of their closeness played back in her mind ..how he use to hold her close ...the warmth of his protective embrace ...the love she always saw in his eyes for her ...his transparency ...his innocence ...those childish demands ...meaningless talks ...and their last night together ...another tear trail left from the corner of her eyes but she never blinked instead curled into a ball feeling his touch all over again ...feeling someone squeezing her heart in their hands ...his lips on her ..those hands holding her close ...his warmth ..all burned her with agony ...she closed her eyes feeling him around her like a second skin still ...she could smell him ...could feel him ..and then those words ...

geet tu aa hi gayi hai na mere paas ...uss se kahan jana hai ...wohh tu poori tarha mere pyar mien pagal hai ...aur aap mujhe jaante hain na ..aaj tak girlfriend tu 1 week se ziada rahi nahi koi tu phir life time ek larki ...

another sob left her mouth ...and she clutched her cloths feeling someone piercing thousand needles in her heart ...
how can he do this to her ...y he made her believe in love when he didn't loved her ...y
she was happy being the stone hearted practical woman she always was ...y he had to make her feel all those emotions that were alien to her ...even if the world would have stood against him she wouldn't have believe them but when he himself said all those cruel words ...she could process nothing ...her anger ...her pain all surfaced in front of him ...she couldn't believe she gave so much authority ...so much control on herself to a worthless person like him but then her heart still wanted all that to be false ...the heart that still loved him ...the stupid part of her body that she wanted to throw out of her system for being so illogical ...that guy himself accepted that he was there with some girl in the hotel room then y is this stupid heart still wanting it all to be false y ...
this struggle ...this pain ..this confusion made her immune to all her surroundings ... it was her anger that made her agree to this alliance ...she never heard what ever those people were saying yesterday morning ...all that was running in her mind was y maan betrayed her ...

all the while when she faced her father ...the guilt of misbehaving with him ...the anger of choosing a wrong person ...the pain of being betrayed dominated all her rational thoughts ..and here she is now broken ...shattered ..alone and suffering ..

geet sat up not being to breath ...her tears never stopped ...but seemed as if her heart will burst with pain ...she gasped in between her hiccups not being able to breath ..she clutched her throat in suffocation ...maan's word kept ringing in her ears ..

wohh tu poori tarha mere pyar mien pagal hai ...aur aap mujhe jaante hain na ..aaj tak girlfriend tu 1 week se ziada rahi nahi koi tu phir life time ek larki ...geet ...achi hai dadi maa ki type ki hai tu han shaddi ttu uss hi se karni thi ...aura bb tu uss ne apne dad ko bhi chor diya hai ..

the voices growing louder ...scarier ...her tears never stopped and she stood up pacing the room madly trying to avoid those voices in her head and kept a hand on her ears but nothing seems to help ...she collided with the cup board and a dress fell from inside ...she wouldn't have cared a bit if that wasn't the same dress she had wore the day she became friends with maan ...
geet slid down along the door of the cupboard ...clutching the dress in her hand ..she closed her eyes tears streaming down while the happy time played back in her mind ..

FLASHBACK

It was her first year and maan was her senior ...and he had arranged a party for all the first years and his own classmates and friends ...initially she really wasn't interested besides she would never get permission for late night parties ...she never has gotten one ...but on the insistence of ridhima she tried her luck with a bit sifarish from simi aunty she did got permission ...the party was super cool ...she enjoyed so much for the first time ever ...armaan was behind ridhima and so maan also tagged along ...a smile adorned her lips now understanding it was to take her away from ridz so that armaan could spend some time alone with ridz ...geet had the best time of her life in those few hours with him ...he made her laugh her heart out ...she never knew she could dance so well or was him making her look good on the dance floor ...whatever it was she found her new friend a nice guy totally opposite to what she had been hearing about him but all became a real mess when the disc went under police raid ...geet was so shocked ...scarred seeing so many policemen manhandling her classmates ... maan and armaan made sure all girls were pushed back and were sent outside before the police arrest them but geet was arrested coz she was in the girls' room when police entered and maan didn't knew that she was still in the disc when he came outside with armaan and saw the police taking geet with them was when he saw her ...he cursed his negligence and called his dad to arrange for bail papers ...even though he did got geet bailed out as soon as the police reached the police station but geet never talked with him ...she was so angry ..at him at her ownself that all while during their drive from police station to her house she never said a word and maan ...well her silence was only drowning him in all the more guilt than he already was ...he couldn't explain her anything ...he just dropped her outside her house and when she was about to open the car's door he mustered all his courage and spoke his heart ...

I ...I am sorry geet ..jo kuch bhi hua ...//

But she never listened to him ...and ran inside ...she wasn't in a state of mind to hear any of his explanation and so she ran ..ran inside hiding her tears ..hiding her anger on herself from a stranger ..how stupid of her to have believed this guy in just a matter of few hours ...

The next day she was avoiding each and every damn person ...angry on everyone ...ridhima for convincing her for that stupid party ..n that moron for making go through that police fiasco ...just when she was waling in the corridor to reach her class room she heard some loud noises ...curious she walked up to the empty room and saw Maan and RV in there ...

Shut up ..RV ..just shut the hell up

Do u have any idea tumhari ek galti ki waja se kiya hu sakta tha kal ...I mean how could you be so careless ...venue select karne se pehle usske bare info leni huti hai ya nahi ...uss disc ki reputation itni kharaab hai then y did u booked that for the party ...

Dude relax mujhe pata chala tha k 6 months pehle wahan raid huyi thi but hum log thorai kuch drug le rahe thay and itne din hugaye thay iss baat ko I thought it would be ok ...

Really ...!! Aur dekha tumhare iss ek galti ki waja se kya hugaya ...
I swear agar dadi ko doctor k paas nahi lejana huta na tu kabhi tumhain venue select karne ko nahi kehta ...
But thank you I ve got my lesson ...

MK yaar chill kar kuch huya tou nahi na ...besides u got the girl bailed in time ..

Geet looked away disgusted and was about to leave but maan's word stopped her ..

RV I wish tumhari koi sister huti then u would have understand k ek larki k liye kitni baari baat huti hai arrest hona ...that girl is a fresher abhi high school se pass out huyi hai ...u n me won't even understand how much difficult it must have been for her to get permission for that party alone aur agar uske ghar waloon ko pata chalta tou ...socha hai kya huta
Leave that agar armaan ki nazar nahi pari huti tou hum tou ghar chale jaate ...aur wohh larki poori raat police station mien huti pata nahi kya kya jhelti ...tumhain bilkul ehsaas nahi hai na kisi ki reputation ka ..

Yaar tu itna senti kyun hu raha hai ...chor na hugaya abb tu

Maan shook his head frustrated ...that was my party wahan har koi mera guest tha RV and job hi hua sahi nahi hua ..i don't know how am I ever going to face her ...

Dude tu jitna tension le raha hai na ...wohh soch bhi nahi rahi hugi ...dekha jaise college mien enter huyi ...buhat attitude hai uss mien ...kuch nhi hu raha ussko ..

RV ...she is not like other girls ...wohh baqi larkiyoon jaisi nahi hai ...

Matlab ...

Chor tere level k upar ki baat hai ...

Acha maaf karde na yaar ...abb aage se aisi glati kabhi nahi karunga ..waise hi mere face ki band baja di tu ne ..

Don't worry tujhe agli baar aisa kuch karne ka mauqa hi nahi dunga ...

Geet walked away wondering maan wasn't at fault really it was his stupid friend ...infact he actually helped her ..just then ridhima bumped into her ..

Oh geet ...thank god u mili tu ...subha se dhundh rahi hoon ...

Kyun kya hua ..??

Nahi wohh Amy..he said to apologized to you on his behalf ..actually they didn't know uss club ki reputation itni kharaab hai ...n all that mess u got into he was really guilty ..

Hmm ..its okie

But geet ... mujhe samajh nahi aaya they I mean maan and Amy they both got all the girls out from there in time ..tum ...tum kaise reh gayi ...

I ..wohh I was in the loo

Oh ..tab hi
Waise they both are cute na ...

Cute ka pata nahi but lagta hai tujhe wohh doctor bara pasand aagaya ...

What !! ..ai...aisa kuch ..kuch nahi hai ok

Achawww ...tab hi wohh over night
Armaan se Amy hugaya ..

Woh ..wohh ...mien ...

Geet smiled seeing her friend blushing ...n just then maan came to stand behind her ...

Hi girls ...

Oh hi maan ...kaise hu ...sorry about last night ..i hope ziada kuch problem nahi huyi ...

Yeah it was a real mess ...I hope u got home safely

Yeah ...Am ...I mean Armaan ne drop kardiya tha ...

Oh ...that's good

Geet looked away not sure if she should be angry at him for his stupidity or just ...

Acha guys wohh mujhe ek book return karni hai ...tu mien aati hoon library se phir class ka bhi time hu raha hai ...geet plzz front desk par mat bethna ...

And she left leaving both maaneet in an awkward silence ..geet stood there thinking what she should say a few minutes back she was so angry that she wouldn't have stood any where near this guy but now she knows he wasn't at fault for what happened at least not directly ...
maan was thinking if he should apologize ...but how ...he was use to girls going gaga over him ..his smile was enough always but geet is a different lady and he really got to know her smart no-nonsense attitude last night ...he knew she wasn't anywhere like those girls he is use to be with ...and he must be honest with her but then she is too high tempered to start with as well ..

Maan (st) : pata chala sorry bolne gaya aur iss ne thappar hi maar diya ...dekh le beta aage peeche koi ha tu nahi ...😆😛

N to his luck the corridor was empty ...geet glanced at him looking here and there ..and she wondered who he was looking for even she mirrored his actions in confusion ...and just when she thought he is not going to say anything he said ..

I am sorry ...

What !!

Geet looked at him but he wasn't looking at her ...infact he was all the while looking away or looking down ...geet frowned and tilted her head to look at him and there was so much guilt on that face ...she never knew the guy she is seeing with a new girl every week since last 2 months is really standing here apologizing to her that too when he wasn't really at fault ..
Yeah ..i am sorry for all the mess last night ...but trust me I didn't wanted anything like that to happen ...I know its my fault ..//

Ek minute ...its was ur fault ..??

Maan glanced at her confused ...and then thought

RV se tu ragging waale scene k baad se hi itna chirti hai ..iss se pata chala k kal k fiasco k peeche bhi wohh hi hai tou ussko tu ulta hi latka degi lady hitler ...nahi yaar pehle hi ussko itna dhoo dala hai tu ne abb sherni k aage nahi daal sakta apne dost ko ...

Maan gulped his saliva looking at geet waiting for his answer ...

So ...tell me venue tum ne set kiya tha ...?? U ...u knew k uss disc ki reputation kitni kharaab hai ...

Umm ..wohh ...(maan looked away) geet venue approve mene hi kiya tha ...yeah so I am sorry ...

Geet smiled ...don't know y but she found that guilty face of this guy standing in front of amusing ...his not looking at her ...that puppy look wondering how she would react ...and for the first time ever she saw the pure heart behind that Casanova image of Maan Singh Khurana ...she tilted her head and bit her lips trying to control her smile ..

Waise meri height itni choti nahi hai k tumhain itna neeche dekh kar baat karna pare ...😛

Han ...what ..!!

Geet couldn't control and a broad smile spread across her face seeing the confusion on his face ...

And its ok ...u don't need to apologize

Really ..!! matlab tum ghusa nahi hu ...??

Geet smiled and shook her head negatively ...maan jumped in excitement and hugged her tight ..😲😲😳😳😉😉
shocking the hell out of geet ...she stood there paralyzed ...and before she could react maan stepped back clutching her shoulder ...

Thank you ..u don't know how much relieved u have made me ..

His smile was infectious ...geet couldn't believe he is such a child ...so elated at small small things ...geet cleared her throat and stepped back from his embrace politely ..and maan realized may be he over did it ...they weren't really that close that he would ...but damn he was so happy she forgave him ...geet broke the awkwardness and said ...

Umm ..but ...But u should have been careful it was ur party tumhain ek baar venue k bare mien dekhna chahiye tha ..

I know but ...I am really sorry

I said its okie ..

Okie ...(maan kept his hand in his pocket ..so happy) ...good ...really that's awesome

Geet smiled shaking her head and started walking ...

Well umm ...I have a class so ..i should leave

Geet walked a few steps ahead when maan jogged upto her and held her wrist to stop her ...geet turned surprised and looked at hi shold on her hand and then at him ..

Well umm ..since u have forgiven me ...I thought y not start a fresh ...

Geet looked at him confused ...while he extended his hand ..

Friends ...??

Geet smiled looking at his extending hand and then at him ...

I thought we already were ...

Maan gave her broad smile ...for any other girl it would have been a moment to die for but geet saw the real happiness dancing in his eyes ...they both stood there smiling ...happy for their new found friendship unaware to the path they had started walking that day would lead to here today ...where there is so much hurt ...so much pain ..

**^^**

She cried remembering the innocence the sincerity in his eyes ...how can I person who felt so much guilt for some one else' mistake possibly break her heart so brutally ...and not even feel a pinch of remorse ...she threw the dress away and clutched her knees tight rocking back and forth remembering the way he shamelessly accepted that he was with some other girl in that hotel ...geet closed her eyes and only saw that one moment that scattered her whole life ...her belief ...her love ...her paradise ...maan's word his face ..kept coming in front of her closed eyes ..
And just then something clicked in her mind ...his face ...!!

He wasn't looking at his father ...
He never did looked in her eyes ...
Infact he avoided looking at her ...

Geet sighed finally realizing ...and a smile adorned her teary face ...

He was lying ...wohh jhoot bol raha tha ...I am sure wohh jhoot bol raha tha ..par kyun ..?? mujh se kyun ..?? apne dad k saamne kyun ..?? wohh pictures ..?? wohh larki kuan thi unn pictures mien ...?? Y he looked so happy with her ...?? Y he didn't told me ..??? par usski aankhien chorana ...🤢🤢

In one moment she gained her world back and lost in the other moment ...the fight in her heart and mind left her lost sitting there ..in tears ..confusion and memories ...memories of them together smiling happy ...in love then how come everything got lost in few minutes ...48 hours before she had the worlds' happiness ...everything and now she is here sitting empty handed ...her heart is not ready to accept that he betrayed her but her mind doesn't have a single proof and single rational explanation to justify it ...every thing played back in her mind ...from when she went to maan leaving her father behind ...how broken he was after hurting his father ...his support ...his love ...that kiss ...his touch ...everything can't be fake ...the love she had always read in his eyes can't be fake ...and then his words about Brij Handa ran in her mind ..

But before she could understand anything tai gi and mohinder handa walked in her room with broad smiles on there faces ..geet wiped her face and stood up ..

Geet bte ...dekhiye aapki wedding dress agaya ...

Geet glanced at the heavy package decorated in red and gold in his hand ...her heart paced high realizing the deep shit she has fallen in her anger ...

Dad mujhe ...mujhe aap se baat ...//

Baatien tu huti rahengi geet ...neeche mehndi aur sangeet ki sab tyaari hugayi hai bas tub hi jaldi se tyaar hukar neeche aaja ...

Geet glanced at tai gi with teary eyes ...then with strong determination she stepped ahead to tell mohinder she can't go ahead with this marriage before talking to maan once ...she needs to get her answer ..she needs to know y he betrayed her ...but tai gi clutched her hand ..while mohinder walked towards her bed to keep her dress ...

Geet apne papa k chehri khushi ko dekh puttar ...buhat deir hugayi hai abb inn ansoon k liye ...tera ek galat kadam tere papa k sar ko dunya k saamne humesha k liye jhuka dega ...😡😡

Tai gi bas ek baar ...//

Geet bte aap jaanti hain ...aapki shaddi mien iss sherh k sab hi reputed families aa rahi hain ...even humare jo client hain Mr. Ahuja unke father ...yes ..Minister Finance bhi ...after all meri princess ki shaddi hai ...kisi royal wedding se kam thorai hugi ...

Geet looked away hearing the sound of music coming from downstairs ...she didn't had the heart to tell him anything after seeing the glow in his eyes ...never in her life she had seen her father so happy ...after loosing her mother he never smiled ...he never felt happiness truly but today ...today for first time ever she saw him truly happy ...and would could she say ...that she wants to go to the person who has betrayed her ...to ask her questions ...that her stupid heart still loves that guy who has cheated her ...that she still can't believe that he himself accepted his betrayal in front of her ...she couldn't ...!!

Tears slipped from her eyes while she stood there breaking ...and no body heard the noise ...mohinder came towards her cupped her face in his large palm and kissed her forehead ...

Mien buhat khush hoon geet ...ranveer buhat acha larka hai ...buhat khush rakhega aapko ...

**^^**

Bhabi aap yeh kya keh rahe hu ...

Please devar gi ..mehndi ka function shoro hugaya hai kisi ko pata nahi chalega aap plss ridhima k ghar yeh letter de aao ...
Humien kisi bhi tarha maan g tak yeh khabar puhanchani hugi k geet ki shaddi hu rahi hai ...

Par brij bhai ...

Devar gi ...5 saal se iss ghar mien buhat kuch galat hua hai aur mene kabhi zuban nahi kholi magar agar aaj kuch nahi karat u zindagi bhar apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paongi ...

Mujhe laga tha geet di shadi apni marzi se kar rahi hai ..

Dekhiye geet ko devar gi ...mehndi lagwarahi hai wohh ranveer g ke naam ki magar kya koi bhi khushi hai uske chehre par ..

Titu sighed and took the envelope from her hand ...

Pammi bhabi aaj pehli baar mauqa mila hai geet di rakhi ka karz utaarne ka ...yeh letter ridhima k ghar puhanch jayega aap fiqar naa karo ...

Pammi smiled thanking god at least one of her brother do care about geet ...titu left from there and she prayed that this would help geet get out of this hell ...

**^^**

Maan and armaan were sitting in armaan's jeep outside handa house seeing all the decoration on the haveli ...the relatives entering the house with gifts ...armaan guessed but never dared to voice out his worst fear in front of maan who was looking at everything confused ...and just then they saw geet's tai gi and brij walking outside the house ...and just as they did brij dragged his mother in a lone corner ...and they saw them arguing ...armaan saw maan stepping down and before he could stop him he was already going towards them ...and stood behind the truck opposite to them listening to their talks still hidden from them ...

Abb mujhe kya pata tera kya plan chal raha hai ...mene tu apni taraf se tera bhala hi karna chaha ...

Bhala nahi aapne mere liye sab se bara siyapa khara kardiya hai mummy gi ..tussi v na kuch karne se pehle sochte kyun nahi hu ..

Socha that era hi socha tha ...tab hi geet ki shaddi uss munde naal karane ki kushish kar rahi thi ..

Aap tu na mera diwala nikaal kar chorogi ...

Mien ki kitta hai ...tu ne v tu maa ko bina bataye itna sab kiya ...mujhe kya pata c ..

Han han meri maa sab meri glati abb sudhaar bhi mien hi lunga aap bas itna karo k andar jao aur ...kaam karo apna

Brij agar geet ki shaddi ki khabar sun kar wohh maan yahan aaya tu ...

Tu kuch nahi ...buhat guards hain yahan ...mien dekh lunga ussko ...

They were about to leave never seeing the enraged maan following him to strangle that bas***d to death ...but before maan could get a hold on brij but armaan came from back and stopped him ...

Maan ..stop it ..
Kya karne jaa raha tha tu ..hosh mien aa

Armaan chor mujhe ..i will kill that man ...he

Maan josh se nahi hosh se kaam kar ...itne guards hain yahan ..kuch nahi kar payenge hum ...we have to play smart now
Warna geet se milne k bajaye phir se police lockup mien huga tu ...
Is that what you want ..

Maan jerked him off and walked away banging his hand on the truck injuring his hand ...

**^^**
Ma'am kis ka naam likhna hai mehndi mien ..

Geet snapped out of her thought with a heavy wind that came in and brought the warmth of maan's smell with it from the main gate as she was siting just in front of the entrance ...she gasped

Maan ...

The girl smiled and continued adorning her hand with mehndi ..while she kept searching the entrance ...lost !!

**^^**

Relax maan ...chal abhi yahan se ...hum soch lenge kuch ...

I don't believe this armaan ..how can a father be so cruel to his own child

Unko dekhta nahi hai k yeh kitna galat hai geet k saath ...fine nafrat karrte hain wohh mujh se Karen jitni karni hai Karen but geet ...usko usske saath yeh sab kyun ...

Armaan placed a hand on his shoulder ...

Shaddi kal hai maan ...we'll think of something but iss tarha weak parne se tu kuch nahi kar payega ...

Maan looked back at the haveli from the back side he could see geet's rooms' balcony and remember all the times he sneeked in her room from there ...glancing at the house one last time she turned promising himself ..

Geet I promise you mien humare pyar ko haarne nahi dunga ...kuch bhi hujaye ..yeh shaddi nahi hugi ...

**^^**

Maan walked in armaan's house like a wild man mad with rage ...armaan followed him in and stood in the center of the hall worried what he might do ...

Relax maan ..we'll think of something ..shadi mien abhi time hai ...we can still get geet out of that house and tell her everything and may be u guys can elope somewhere for some time ...we can ...we ask ridhima to get her out for some time ..and may be she'll listen to us ...

She won't ...

They both turned to see ridhima standing at the entrance ...

Geet ne khud iss shadi k liye han ki hai ...

How can that be ridz ...

Pammi bhabi ne titu k haath mere ghar yeh letter bhejwaya hai armaan ...iss mien saaf saaf likha hai ...she herself has consented for it ...

Maan snatched the letter from her hand and read it ...

Maan g,
Mien ...geet ki bhabi pammi ...aap mujhe nahi jaante par mien aapke bare mien sab jaanti hoon geet k chehre ki chamak mien kayi baar apki pyar ki gehrayi dikhi hai mene ..
Mien nahi jaanti k achanak aisa kya hugaya hai k geet aapka naam tak sunna nahi chahti ...najane kyun ussne Ranveer se shadi karne ko han kardi hai ...par itna zaror janti hoon k uski khushi aap hain ...jo galat fehmi ya jhagra aap dono k beech huya hai please usko bhola kar geet ki shadi rok dijeye ...warna geet apni zindagi ki har khushi kho degi ...
Yeh letter sirf aap tak yeh khabar puhanchane k liye likha hai mene k kal ..kal geet ki shadi hai ...aur abb sirf aap hi iss galat ko hone se rok sakte hain ..

Aapki shub-shintak

maan threw the letter in anger ..and ran a hand threw his hair frustrated at what has become of his life ...

I was wrong ...I. was. So. Wrong ridhima
Ghusse mien sirf uska dil nahi dimag bhi chalna band hujata hai ...

Maan chill ok ...relax kar ..//

Stop with his relax maan thing armaan or ill kill u before that bas***d brij handa ..😆😛

Armaan and ridhima both stood there speechless ..while maan was pacing the hall left to right clenching and un-clenching his fist ..gasping ...armaan had never seen his friend so furious ...so mad with rage ...he could see his temper higher with every passing minute ...

What is he thinking armaan ..??

I wish I knew ...?? But his silence is dangerous ..ghussa huta kuch tor phor karta samajh aata mujhe ...

While they were busy conversing they missed maan taking the keys of armaan's jeep from the table ...

Maan where are you going ...??

But he never heard their shouting ...and zoomed out taking his jeep way before armaan could reach him ...he ran back inside grabbing the keys of his bike off the wall ..

Ridz close the main-door I have the keys and go back home ...

Armaan whats going onn ...

Ridz he is out there don't where ..i have to be with him ..u go home for now ..ill .. ill call u ..

And he ran out to follow maan ...he even was too fast in the jeep but armaan catches up and saw him entering the Khurana Mansion ...minutes later he parked outside the main gate and jogged inside seeing him running upstair ...and saw him with a gun upon entering the study room ...

Just what the hell are you doing with a weapon maan ...

Armaan I think you should leave ...

No I will not ...and you better tell me what the hell are you upto ...
Kya karne wale ho tum ...??

Kuch aisa jo mene kabhi nahi socha tha mujhe geet k saath karna parega ..

Maan what is it ..??

Armaan you ...you should really leave ..i can't involve you in all this anymore ..

Listen you ass-hole ...bachpan se aaj tak ..har kaam saath kiya hai hum ne ...aur saza bhi saath bhugti hai ...aaj bhi jo karna hai saath karenge samajha tu ...

Armaan yeh bachpan ki koi shararat nahi hai ...I can't drag you in this shit ..

Well I am in this shit now u can't tell me to get out ...

Armaan tu samajh nahi raha ...

Agar meri jaga tu huta tou chala jata chor kar ...

Maan looked at him and he knew he can't make him step back ...so he stepped forward and hugged him ...armaan hugged him back ...he couldn't have left his best friend alone today ...whatever it be he will stand by his side ...maan thanked his stars for giving him such a friend in his life and prayed that they bless him with the love of his life as well ...

**^^**

Geet was ready dressed in he most beautiful outfit ...wearing those royal jewels along with the pair of gold bangles that belonged to her mother ...but the most important jewel was missing ...her smile !!
The one that actually makes a bride beautiful ...that makes a girl feel beautiful her smile was missing and sadly no body cared ...for the first time ever she felt like eloping from this caged house where nobody seems to see what she wants ...geet glanced at her hands adorned with mehndi ...the girl had mistakenly written maan's name in her hand ...she didn't remember when she told her to do so ...but now seeing his name on her palm ...only gave her pain ...tears ...anguish and nothing else ...y did he have to do all that ...y

**^^**

PRECAP :-
Bachapan Se Usaka
Ek Divaana Tha
Jisaka Kaam Gali Ke Aashik Pare Hataana Tha
Dil Se Jisako Maan Raha Tha
Apane Dil Ki Raani Vo
Aur Kisi Pe Hi Yaaro Marati Thi Marajaani Vo 😉😳😳

so its going to be the face-off in next part ...the wedding

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Geet is totally broken. Her heart is still chanting about maan's innocence but her mind is refusing after hearing maan's confession. Geet recalled the moment when she met main ln how they become friend in only one meeting and how he took blame of someoneelse on himself and how he couldn't able to see in her eyes out if guilt. Geet decided to talk with maan for once but every time thus taiji stops her by emotionally blackmailing her. Pammi sent a letter to maan and asked him to stop geet to get married. Maan was so angry after reading that letter. What is he planning to do. Waiting for next dear

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