MG SS : Ishaqzaade *pt 35 @ pg 148* LINK OF 2ND THREAD @ PG151 - Page 57

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Posted: 10 years ago

hi all,
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will try n type something soon n update this as well


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THE DARK ANGEL OF FATE
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Posted: 10 years ago

hi all,
kaise hu sab ..?? hopefully doing fine

🥳🤗 a very Happy New Year to u all ...🥳🤗
may this year bring a lot of happiness in ur lives ..😊

well i surely am ...😆 semester over ..break is about to come to an end but trying to update all of my stories ...dark angel n salaam e ishq readers got thr double updates ..here i come with this one

though bit dis-appointed with the decreased likes n response but still thank u for those who clicked the like button n left a few words for my hard work ..

sorry not being able to reply to ur comments but read each one of them n trust me its all the motivation for a writer ..

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Posted: 10 years ago

MG SS : Ishaqzaade



PART 16

On the other hand ...in geet's room simi was drilling geet on todays event n geet told her the whole story of her n maan ever since he came in her life ...thr fights ...how they became friends ...his care ..concern ...his protectiveness even when he was just a friend ...everything ...n then how things changed after that accident ...thr relation ...the way she accused him n then he came to handa haveli mohinder's condition ...though simi knew it all but she wanted geet to say it all ...she knew thr is so much geet is holding in her ...n that geet's isn't a person to open up easily ...ever since she lost her mother ..simi is a only person geet shres her every thought ..though she come for a few days but these few days are enough for geet to feel all the love of a mother from her simran maasi ...

Simi : I still can't believe tujh jaisi larki ..maan jaise larke pyaar kaise kar paayi ..i mean I know u ..the-real-u ..but I am amazed how he was able to reach thr ...

Geet (shighed wth a smile) : pata nahi maasi ..yeh tu aaj tk mien bhi nahi jaan payi ..

Simi (smiled all the more excited) : acha chalo say something about maan ...

Geet (surprised n confused) : kya ...maasi sab kuch tu bata diya ..

Simi : nahi bhuddhu ...tune story batayi ...kaise mille ..kb pyaar hua kb izhaar hua ...abb maan k baare mien bol ...woh kaisa hai ...tere saath kaisa hai ...romantic hai ..ya tere dad jaisa ..kharoos types serious lover ..

Geet (giggled) : kharoos aur maan ...hmm actually kuch kuch ..i mean I don't know ..uff its complicated ...mujh se nahi huga ...

Simi (nudged her) : chal bhav mat kha abhi ...jaldi bolo ...kaise hain tere who ..

Geet (blushed hard with her teasing) : maasii ..



Simi (smiled seeing her child turning red) : bolna ..

Geet (sighed n closed her eyes then smiled n said his name so softly) : Maan ... (then opened her eyes n looked in oblivion) ..kya kahoon uske baare mien ...wohh humari dunya se nahi hai ...he ...he is so different from us ...kabhi kabhi tu lagta hai wohh kisi aur hi planet se aaya hai ...

maasi he is nothing like everyone has been telling me about men are like ...he isn't an egoistic jerk ...wohh apni galti maanne se nahi darta ...wohh sorry kehne se sharmaata nahi hai ...ghussa buhat jaldi aata hai uss se ...buhat un reasionable batoon par ..but he usually don't express it like the way brij veerji or even dad do ...lekin pata chal jaata hai .. jab who apni steaming hot coffee ek dafa mien khatam kar le ...ya mirror mien ready hone k baad apni gud looks par flaunt na kare ...pata chal jata hai ...he is a complete possessive alpha-male ..(laughed a bit) ... but wohh male chauvinist nahi hai ...he isn't ashamed of crying in front of me ...buhat senti hai ...but that doesn't make him weak ...lekin han shayad usski strength zaror hai ...u knw what he actually cried the day he left KM ...(simi was amused seeing geet's eyes turning water just remembering it ..but geet smiled throughout re-living each moment with her maan).. he is so full of life maasi .. itna sab hugaya ..he still doesn't hold dad responsible ..though he hates brij veerji but he won't say it ..(laughed throatily n wiped the tear trailed just cascaded down her cheeks) .. aapne kahana mujh jaisi larki kaise pyaar kar bethi uss se ...I don't ...I don't know maasi kaise ...he just makes me feel how I always wanted to be ...maasi mien (sighed not being able to put it in words) ... kya kahoon ...Maan Singh Khurana gets what he wants ...😛

Aap jante hu na maasi ...sirf aap jaante hu ...I didn't wanted to be like this ...This hard core Geet handa ...thts not me ...mien nahi banna chahti thi aise ...but ...but mere paas koi option nahi tha ... dad ne humesha kaha world is not that gud as it seems to be ..every person has its own motive to be with u ...I never trusted anyone ...maa k jaane k baad school mien sab itna bully karte thay .. n brij veeriji tu thay hi nahi ...I had to shield my own self ...ghr mien bhi veerji never left a chance to pull my leg ... everyone ...every single person taunted my father for not having a son ...mien kya karti maasi ...I had to be this strong to survive ..to be able to prove myself more than a mere daughter ... n then all of a sudden ..this stupid stubborn guy enters my life ...

What the hell could I do with this guy ..he proved every single bit of my concept about this world wrong ... itni achai mene apne ghar mien nahi dekhi thi jitni maan mien nazar aarahi mujhe ...😳 I just couldn't stop my self .. zindagi mien kabhi itna acha dost nahi mila tha mujhe .. itna acha k usski achai kab mere dil mien ghar kar gyi mujhe bhi pata nahi chala .. mere bhai ne kabhi mujhe protect nahi kiya but ek dost hukar uss ne mujhe bachaya college mien har kadam par mera saath diya ..kaise na trust krti uss par ...wohh tu jaan de sakta tha apni dost k liye ...bina kuch maange sab loota deta wohh ...koi hidden motive nahi tha ...koi jhoot nahi tha ...sirf sach ..aur sachi dosti thi maan ke paas jo uss ne dil khool kr lotai ... mien kaise uss se pyaar na karti maasi ...maan itna pyaara hai k pyaar ko bhi uss se pyaar hujaye mien sirf ek insaan thi .. par meri kismat tu dekhiye ...iss se pehle k mien maan ko apni dil ki baat bata sakti ...mujhe pata chala k jis insaan ko mene apna dil diya hai wohh mere hi dad ke rival ka beta hai ...mene kushish ki ...apne dad ki izaat se bar kar meri khushi nahi hu sakti thi ...but this guy ...he is so damn stubborn ...aur abb dekhiye kya hugaya ...

Kabhi kabhi lagta hai maan ki har mushkil ki waja mien hoon ... magar phir usski dedication uske ambitions dekh kar lagta hai shayad yeh aise hi hona tha ...par darr lagta maasi kuch galat na hujaye .. mien dad aur maan mien se kisi ek ko nahi chun sakti ...kabhi nahi chun sakti ..

Simi (hugged her n wiped her tears) : aisa sab mat soch ...kisi ko nahi choose karna parega tujhe .. sab theek hujayega mien aagayi hoon na ..

geet looked up to her n smiled ...her child she just cuddled in her lap while simi kept caressing her hairs lovingly ..n looked up only to see mohinder handa standing by the door of geet's room with his eyes mist ..a single eyes contact b/w them he left closing the door

Geet (simi kissed geet's head n kept her head on the pillow guessing she is asleep but she wasn't n opened her eyes worried) : kya hua ..??

Simi (smiled caressing her head) : kuch nahi mujhe laga tu soogayi iss liye shift kr diya ...chalo abhi ankhien band karo aur sojao ...

Geet smiled n slept with a smile straightening her legs feeling the anklets making soft voice n went to sleep remembering maan's face n the delight he had on his face having seen her wearing those ..

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Simran came to the roof top of handa haveli she knew mohinder would be here ...

Simi (with a heavy voice) : wohh buhat pyaar karti hai maan se ... she won't be ablle to survive without him ...

Mohinder (with a stone cold voice) : mien sirf uss se protect karna chahta tha ..i didn't wanted her to fall prey to every other person walking in her life n hurting her ...I didn't wanted her to become a stone ...

Simi (with a moist eye) : mene kushish ki ussko samjhane ki that she won't have to choose b/w the 2 of u ... but she still fears it the most ..

Mohinder : mien apni beti ko khona nahi chahta tha iss hi liye humesha uss se dunya se door rakha ..iss dunya k logoon se door rakha ...but mien usski khushiyan nahi cheena chahta tha ...

Simi sighed knowing he has heard geet's talk ...she knew whatever he did was to ensure geet wasn't being fooled by anyone ...he didn't wanted her angel's heart broken ...she knew he isn't listening to any of her talks ...but living his own guilt trip ...she knows how it was for him to live without Rano ..loosing the love your life isn't that easy ...the pain never goes nor does it sub sides ever ...n mohinder didn't wanted his child to fall for someone who will leave her ...that's y he always made her aware of the negatives of the society just that he forget to make her see the positives of the life ... which eventually resulted in a stone hearted geet handa ...n now realizing it is bit too painful ...

Simi (turned to him n put her hand on his shoulder gaining her friend's attention) : usski khushi maan hai mohinder ...who ussko de do ..

Mohinder looked away not wanting to break down ...while simi left knowing mohinder won't like any company for the rest of this night ...probably this lone time would make him admit it .. n she left praying for geet's happiness in any case ...
In all these years simi has tried her best to support her best friend ...n be thr for his daughter ..but her commitements did had her accupied ...but geet turned out to be a gem ...just that mohinder fears a bit too much to loose her ..but today she saw the same fear in geet's eyes ...she was a big girl now ...in love with a guy mohinder don't trust an inch ...n she very well knew mohinder can go to any extent in order to protect geet ...

Simi : babaji please mehr karna meri bachi par ...

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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 10 years ago
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MG SS : Ishaqzaade



PART 17

The next few days went by in a rush ...geet was busy with her work ...then having simi here meant she had no time but she did went to maan's house early morning ..managed to maintain her schedule with him as it is ...mohinder started noticing the way geet smile at the mere mention of maan's name ..not that he wasn't aware of his daughter's visits to maan's place but now a days he observed maan as well ...how he had been doing in his office despite brij creating so many hurdles in his ways ..not just his office ..mohinder got to know of his approached to some small firms in delhi regarding his project ... n then he walked in his chawl one day early morning when geet was busy preparing thr bf ..

Geet : maan jaldi karo we're late ..

Maan : han baba bas 2 min ..

Geet (placing the omelet on the table) : mien coffee laa rahi hoon ..n u Mr. Khurana better get started with ur bf ...

Maan (smiled fixing his shirt) : okie Mrs. Khurana ..

Geet was adding sugar to her cup when she heard him ..a smile appeared her face n she shook her head chuckling at him ...he knows how to cool her down in seconds ...damn him !!😳

Distracted with the thought she accidently poured the hot water on her hands a bit ...n the pot slipped from her hand .

Ahh ...(n maan ran to her worried)

Kya hua geet ...(he saw her hand n took her away carefully).. shit ..tum kar kya rahi thi ...yeh ..dekho kitna red hugaya ..(he was so scared seeing her hand turning red n held her hand gently).. geet dekho yeh ...dhayaan kahan tha tumhara ..

N she so innocently n instantly replied ...aap par ...😳

geet was staring him with her big teary hazel almond eyes filled with so much love in them that he couldn't scold her any more n looked away with a helpless smile coming on his face ..



mishty ... tum na (n he couldn't just voice it out her eyes speaks so much he wish he could also say it all through his eyes coz sometimes its so difficult to give words to ur feelings ...n the pain mixed with love he felt at her nave answer just made him speechless).. chalo mien ...mien medicine laga deta hoon ..

just as he was about to put the medicine ..geet took her hand away fearing the burning sensation ..n she did that twice ..

geet if u ll continue taking ur hand away ..please explain hhow am I to put this medicine ..

maan ..wohh ...actually rehne do ..theek hai ..itna nahi laga hai ..(n she was just about to stand up)..

he stood up n stood by her side of chair ...n made her sit again ..

ji nahi ...yeh zarori hai ...n don't worry ziada jalan nahi hugi .. (before she could interupt he circled her in his embrace from left side n took hold of her right hand that had been slightly reddened with hot water ...he looked into her teary eyes n said with so much love n concern).. trust me

geet couldn't possibly argue on that ..could she ..?? she closed her eyes tight n just as he placed the ointment on her hand n turned her head n pressed herself closer into his embrace hiding her face in chest to stop herself from crying ..n circled her free arm around his waist ..

maan cupped her face in his palm n wiped away the tears lingering around her eyes ..n kissed her forehead lightly ..



whispering
hugaya ..😃

she looked up n sniffed ...looking at her hand ..n was about to get up ..when maan again pressed her shoulder down standing up from the arm rest of the chair ..

abb tum koi kaam nahi karugi ..yahan betho n ill get the coffee ..

mohinder was standing outside hiding from them with the help of the curtain on thr door ...it was hard not to barge in hearing his daughter scream ..n he did removed the curtain to step but the way maan was holding her hand ..n the concern in his eyes made him retreat ...not only that he could see the assurance in geet's eyes as well .. when he heard her refuse to put the ointment ..he was angry at her childishness ...but then maan handled her so well ..n again he couldn't over come the urge to peep n he did ...usually seeing his daughter in another man's embrace is an awckward feeling for a father but that moment mohinder could see the level of trust geet had in this guy ..

n just by a simple few minutes around them ..he knew he might never be able to trust maan with his daughter but just for the sake of his daughter's happiness he has to give him a fare chance ..a fair chance to prove himself ...

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The next few days were both tough n great for maaneet ...maan had got a few apointments with some small firms of the country regarding his projects ..while geet could see mohinder changing his stand n opinion about maan ..once she was telling simi about maan'ss upcoming appointment with a person n brij intervened with some bitter cruel comments ...but before geet could have him shut up ..mohinder scolded him to have used such a language in front of family ..which did made geet happy ..not coz brij was scolded but coz mohinder said something n maan's favour though not directly but indirectly also .. she knew it something has to do with simi maasi ..but obviously she won't except it so she isn't going to waist her time by asking her ..she was happy that things are getting better ..she just prayed that now nothing goes wrong now for maan ..he has struggled a lot ..

On the other hand in KM ...yash had been depressed a lot by the departure f his son ...not only he left but coz ow he made him leave ...maan has not even lked to him once ...even though dadi maa tried asking maan indirectly to call his father he refused saying he'll go infront of him once he'll prove his decision right ...dejected he old woman now spends her whole day seing old pictures ...yash has also planned a long business trip ...since dadi maa wished to go for the visit of holy places in India ..

Its easy to place a challenge in front of your children but difficult to let them face it all alone ... n yash was having a hard time letting that brij mess with his son's life ...the more brij troubled maan the more he felt hatred for the girl maan has fell for ..

He walked in KM saw his mother crying sitting in the hall holding thr family picture ..he came ipto her n held her while she cried over his shoulder ...missing her grandson ...

Akhir yeh sab kab tak chalega yash ...abbb aur maan k bina nahi reh sakte hum ..

Maa apne bete se door rehne ka dukh mujhe b hai ...but maan ne apne liye koi asaan rasta nahi choose kiya hai ..as much as I want to ..i can't help him ..He won't like me helping him ..

Par beta ..

Maa ...aap sambbhaliye apne aapko ..mujhe yaqeen hai sab jaldi hi theek huga ..

Hum tu bs dua karte hain k maan ko unki khushiyan mil jayen ..aur who jald se jald humare ghar wapi ajayen ...bas abb sab theek hujaye ..

Yash (st) : huga maa ..abb sab theek huga aur agar nahi huta u mujhe pata hai k unn handas ke saath kaise deal karna hai ..

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It was an odd day ...geet had just completed her trainy period in Handa Industries n now was assisting in finaince department ...but today her father has called her in HOD meeting ... taking a deep breath ..she stepped in the conference room ...

Whereas maan sat infront of the person who owned a small firm in India but is expanding itself fastly .. Mr. Murti ...he just presented his project to him ...gave a presentation to his people in his conference room 30 min back n now he has been called to inform what has been decided ..😊

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PRECAP : What do u think ...??? what is it going to be for them ...😉

P.S : i m not ending this story in another 10 updates as well so consider this before giving ur answers ...😆 😛 😉😉 *Devil me*

hope u enjoyed this ...😊 please please please people u not telling me if i am lacking anywhere won't help me ...so please if u think the story is being dragged please let me know ...however its entering in the last phase ...😳

waiting for ur reviews n likes

luv ya
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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh double updates for this one...great...
haye her explanation of maan was so dreamy..this girl is so much in love...good that her father observed everything...
cont soon
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Sobia it was awesome. Simi was trying to know all Grey's hear and about maan. She get to know profound feelings of geet for maan. She is madly in love with him. Mohinder also heard geet conversation with simi. He got emotional and decided to know about maan. I guess now he is getting positing thought about maan.but yash is getting angry as he.can't able to near that distance from maan. I think he would do something which would not be pleasurable. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n double updates! Well written! Simi asks Geet abt Maan! Geet loves him immensely! Mohinder hears the convo! Yash wants to keep Get away frm Maan! Geet starts at HI! Maan presents his project! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! fantastic updates dear...loved it
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both parts are awesome
geet telling about maan
n how she fall for him
how he came out leaving his house for her
her dad hears everything n he knew the love n fear in her
he secretly checked them too
n came to know maans gud character too
maans family is the one sufferring so much
atleast handa has his daugh with him
poor dadi n yash
missing maan
geet n handa in meeting
i think maan will get the project
nice parts..
well done
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Posted: 10 years ago
Both updates are superb dear plz give next update soon.

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