MG SS : Ishaqzaade *pt 35 @ pg 148* LINK OF 2ND THREAD @ PG151 - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
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SUPERB UPDATE👏
THNKS FOR GEET'S DRESS😉
I M VRY CURIOUS TO KNW THT HOW MAANEET WILL GO FRM THE PARTY WHEN MR. HANDA N HIS SON IS PRESENT THERE ONLY😆😆😆😆😆
PLZ CONTINUE SOON😊
WILL BE WAITING😃

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hi thanks 4 updating! Lovely update! Geet getting ready 4 da party! Geet looking gorgeous! Simi aunty seems ok! Geet restless! Hw will she meet Maan! Maan massages her n says he is at the party! Geet tensed! She goes down! She sees Maan n Armaan der! Her dad is angry! Geet worried bat wt Brij wil do! update soon! wonderfully written
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part 12
awesome dear...
lovely...
oh ho Maan is here...
what is gonna happen...
that Brij grrr...
cont soon dear...
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hi all,
kaise hu sab ..😃

well i did said ill be updating frequently but unfortunately fell ill ..n then couldn't get the flow to type ..sorry for the delays who were waiting ..here i m back when DOUBLE UPDATES ..😳 😃

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MG SS : Ishaqzaade



PART 13

Geet came rushing towards the staircase decending down scanning the whole hall ..nervously sweating n saw maan n armaan standing thr cooling like nothing happened n her eyes went towards her father who was thr in his not so pleased posture but defenitely he won't do anything in front of so many guest ...but brij ... She wasn't sure of seeing the rages expression on his face all she was fearing for some high voltage drama created by her oh so lovely brother ...

Tensed scared she stood thr seeing maan still searching for her ...but be4 she could think of anything a loud sigh was heard n thr her dearest simi aunty was actually checking out maan in his simple yet elegant kurta ...

Simi : my my what looks ... Totally out of this world ..finally koi tu handsome munda dekha mujhe iss boring party mien ...(geet didn't responded ..oh well she was lost seeinghim in Indian attire it was only once she has seen him in kurta before n he looked even more breath taking today she couldn't come to voice out anything for a moment n then simi broke her trance).. Geet tu kya aisi chup chaap khari hai .. Waise teri bhi galti nhi hai ...itna handsome munda dekh kar tou koi bhi flat hujaye ... Hayeee

Oppssii thr was ths clear jealousy in geet eyes n that red flaring face .. Good or bad maan found her that very moment n geet gave him a fuming glare looking around every girl in the house gaping at the two hunks glad in punjabi kurta looking irresistibally hot n handsome ...

Geet (st) : yeh duffer yahan kar kya raha hai .. God babji pata nhi aaj kya huga .. Upar se yeh sab bhii .. plss bacha lena apni bachi ko ..

Simi (shooking geet out of hour trance) : geet .. Geet .. Kahan khooyi hai ..bata na kuan hai yeh handsome

Geet (J with the way simi n all wr drooling over her maan) : koi nhi mera clg mien senior tha aur ridz ke fiance ka best frnd hi ..

Simi : dn't tell me yeh tera senior tha aur tum dono ka ek saath kuch .. Kuch bhi nhi huya ...geet baby u seriously should work on ur looks now I feel ..itna handsome munda aur tu ne ..

Geet (offfended n irritated) : oh plss simi mjhe kuch nai karna ..waise bhi ek no. Ka flirt hai .. Casanova .. Mujhe tou isski shakal bhi nai dekhni bandar kahin ka ...

Simi : god geet plss ...apne dad ki jaise bore mat bano ..n for heaven sake he is such a cutie

Geet (murmuring) : cute my foot ..ek no. Ka lafanga hai .. Dekho kaise saari attention enjoy kar raha hai ...pervert mujhe dekh liya fir bhi yeh nhi ke upar akar mujh se mile neeche khare hukar sab ke samne show off karna zarori hai ..

Here busy in her cursing program .. She missed simi who was now heading towards maan n armaan ...

Simi : hi amy ...

Amy : hi simi aunty ...long time yrr

Simi (pouting) : uff mien tumhain aunty lagti hoon ..kyun handsome (gaining the attention of maan who was lost in his sexy hitler) tum bolo do I really look like an AUNTY

Maan (smiled) : no ways beautiful infact mien tou sooch raha tha yahan abhi tak koi charming smart larki dekhi nai ...abhi pata chala mene apne side mien nai dekha na ...

Amy (gave a teasing smirk to maan which he reciprocated with a wink) : sahi jaa rahu beta maan .. Pita ji nai tou kya geet ki aunty ko hi apni side karlo ...

The funny flirt continued while maan was looking around the hall to see whr geet went as she had changed her position but instead saw the glaring Brij who was thr on the stair case like a body guard as if warning him, shooking his head over the funniest creature maan looked away smiling ...n turned to simi ..

N geet came thr with her red flaring face ...she was really very angry at him ..first he came here without informing her ..then he was standing in the mid of all those despo girls who were actually oogling at him ..n now he was flirting with simi ..uff this guy know how to test her patience .. while maan knew she was pissed coz he didn't inform her of his plan but was clueless abt her other reasons .. with a smile he continued with his plan ..n gained simi's attention ..

Maan : gorgeous ..(simi smiled delightfully).. umm yeh party kuch boring types nhi lag rahi ..i mean sorry I know u r host but fir bhi ...no music no dance ...no fun ...

Simi : arre handsome mien hoti tu itni dull party kabhi hone deti ..but yeh tu iss boring dad ki meherbani hai ..

Geet (pissed seeing maan flirting so openly in front of her) : can we please keep my dad out of this convo simi ...

Armaan (smiled seeing his both friends throwing dagger at each other just that geet was trying to kill maan while maan was just trying to tease her) : arre tu maan problem kya hai ...hum hain na ...abhi iss dull party mien jaan dal dete hain ..

Maan (smiled seeing his plan taking shape) : nice idea ...actually amy ..

Brij (heard thr convo n decided to stop maan) : bad idea ...(all thr attention turned to him n ridz joined them as well from back bit worried) ..aap mehmaan hain humare ...iss sab ki koi zarorat nahi hai ..plss party enjoy kijeye n we'll take care of the rest ..

Simi (not understanding the fierce expression of brij) : oh ho brij ...u should have taken care of it all before ...abhi tu dekho sab guests bore hi hu rahe hain ...

Ridz (meekly bit scared) : I think simi aunty is right ...I mean chand nikalne mien abhi bhi 2 hours hain ..so y not ..

Maan (smiled his wicked one n looked at him with his poker face geet knew so well) : veerji wohh kya hai na ..aapke saare prep.s buhat wadhiya hain ..but agar kuch gana wana hujaye tu aur bhi wadhiya hujayega ..
Brij (tried to stop him) : but yeh ..//

Simi (interrupted supporting maan) : uff brij ..bache hain ..thora masti karenge tu sab enjoy hi karenge ...waise b its 2 more hour left for the pooja ... I think ek wadhiya sa dance performance tu hona hi chahiye ...

Ridz : great ..tu mien sab girls ko bol deti hoon ... we all youngsters will perform ..

Rohan : kya huraha hai ..

Geet rolled her eyes seeing this chipko who has been trying to stick with her ever since she entered the party n here he is again🤢😡😡 ...looking her face maan knew its another guy he wants to get away ...it was so difficult to smile at this bas***d but maan managed n answered him ..

Maan : dance performance ..girls n boys ...plss aap bhi join kariye ..

Rohan : oh sure ...geet tumhain pata hai college mien I was the member of rock band ...n ..

Geet (before he could conti she interrupted) : great ..rohan batane se better hai y don't u show us ..i mean ...join them plss ..infact yahan jitney boys han sab ko bol do ..hum sab perform karte hain ...

Maan smiled at her irritated smile ...but unknowingly she has helped him execute his plan .. even if it was to get away from this chipko ...but she has helped him ..

Rohan left ...n Geet saw maan smiling at her ...she didn't knew what was in his mind ..but at least for some time these boys will leave her at peace ..

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All the boys n girls gathered ...with maan n armaan sitting on the steps with everyone at the upper steps as well ...starting the song with a chorus

Aa aa aah.. hor hor wadhiya
Aa aa aah.. hor hor wadhiya

Geet was standing with simi but ridz came n dragged at with everyone ...n all the boys n girls stood up .. maan n armaan circled around both thr beauties ..

Aa aa aah.. hor hor wadhiya
Aa aa aah.. hor hor wadhiya

Maan glanced at her from top to bottom for the first time ..seeing her so beautifully dressed up he couldn't help but to get lost ..geet looked down not wanting to give away her blush seeing the appreciation in his eyes ..n before he could step ahead toward her ...some girls came n circled him urging him to start the song ..

Punjab da puttar, hai pind Jalandhar
Yaar wai wai ankhiyon se kill karda

Geet made a haw face seeing him going all those girls even ridz fumed seeing armaan joining them n they started the song ..with powerful steps ...making all the girls go ohh n ahh ..completely mesmerized with thr voice n manly demenour ..a girl actually fell over other dramtically fainting when maan winked according the lyrics ..
All the boys came behind them n armaan took the song forward ..

King type da, hai tang life da
Yaar wai wai khetan vich chill karda

Maan joined him with the next beat n they both rocked it with thr charisma ..rohan was trying to match thr steps but he actually fell making geet n ridz smile for the time in between thr anger ..

Do it my my way, nahi te Highway
Inko farak yaaron ki penda

N then they did the signature step ...n the whole crown joined them ...after all Punjabis are famous for thr two things ..Khana n Gana ..
(no offence to anyone ...just a general saying ..😊)

Iski uski kaun kiski yaaran da imaan whisky
Uspe chicken ho to hor wadhiya
Pretty Pretty face jitthe jatta always utthe
Maamla done ho to hor wadhiya

Geet n ridz looked at each other n they both knew what other was thinking ..they nodded slowly n came in the centre of the hall with all the girls behind them ...n danced with grace that every eyes was on them ...maan n armaan for a moment were lost in thr elegance n with the way thr waist grooved in the beat ..maan never saw his sherni in such a avatar ..she wasn't exactly a boring person but didn't enjoyed attention so always kept low profile in every party n today seeing her grabing all the attention made him realize how lucky he is ..that this angel belongs to him ..even if she don't say it ..her eyes speaks volume ..

Aa aa aah.. hor hor wadhiya
Aa aa aah.. hor hor wadhiya

Maan was standing emobile when armaan nudged him n they both came forward with all the other boys as well .. it was a fun time ..every elder was enjoying it every bit as they were ..n thr was no point any one would take maan's word seriously ...well they all knew every guy was here to impress geet handa .. n here maan was taking charge of the steps ..making geet smile with his words ..

Punjabi idli, na pate easily
Yaar wai wai ungli pe nachaundi ai

Geet looked at him shocked ..when he winked at her .. his eyes had so much love she forgot all ...every rational thought her dad being thr ..her family ..everything went at the back of her head ...n she kept looking at him ...when he danced beside her ...she was actually amazed with his language n his guts saying it all in front of her family .. even if all the relatives were taking it as a dance performance only ...her family ...her father ..her brother knew what he was saying ..n he meant every bit of it ..

Point-blank te encounter kardi
Yaar wai wai jab lakk matkandi ai

Maan took her hand n cirlcled her with a jerk n left her with all the girls n joined the boys back leaving a baffled geet with a wicked smile that could kill any girl ...n Armaan came from behind the girl's crowd n swung one girl in his right hand then maan swung another of geet's cousin by his left ...
Left te dinky, right te pinky
Kudiyan di fashion parade lag gayi

n with a smile .. they moved forward with the crowd towards geet n ridz n eyeing them meaningfully they continued the song ..
Ridz although was hell angry with her dearest fianc but danced with them 3 ...n they grooved on the signature step .. bebe had a smile on her face seeing her lil girl so happy ..while simi looked at geet intently ..she knew thr was something up between the 2 😉 ...she knew her coconut too well ..

Iski uski kaun kiski yaaran da imaan whisky
Uspe chicken ho to hor wadhiya
Pretty Pretty face jitthe jatta always utthe
Maamla done ho to hor wadhiya

Mohinder handa was looking at his daughter it seemed to him he was seeing a new side of geet al together ..for him his daughter was a silent girl with brain ..she was a practical person just like he is ..but lately she has shown so much emotions in her that now he no longer is sure of his own daughter ...but he was happy seeing her care free ...smiling .. laughing ..enjoying herself ..when she always use to hate such parties ...could maan have so much effect on her he wonder ..?? n then he saw geet n ridz performing together thr classical steps .,..they weren't trained but they did too well .. n all the boys cheered for them ..

Aa aa aah.. hor hor wadhiya
Aa aa aah.. hor hor wadhiya

Geet came near maan who was standing mesmerized with her dance ...n she delivered the lyrics with all her attitude ...surprising him .. coming so close that her breath were falling on his exposed neck ..he was defo in another land ..



Haan tu te Punjabi teri yun na baja mundeya
Vaadon mein wazan kitna tere,
pehle bata mundiya haa..

Questioning him with her eyes filled with love only for him ...she smirked but in the next moment pushed him back ...it ws so sudden maan actually didn't saw tht coming the reason y he stumbled a bit .. n geet went away ..

Vaadon mein wazan kitna tere,
pehle bata mundiya

Geet smiled at his expression n then in the next moment it felt like her heart stopped beating ...maan has held her hand stopping her in front of everyone ..n swirled her making her come back to where she was ..close to him n he held her dancing ..showing her his power ..his dominance ...n his eyes expressed his comittement .. maan swirled her around n stopped her beside him ...geet pretended to be un effected n kept standing thr looking at him doing the steps beside her ..

Ho ho ho...
Jatta da commitment legal document
Stamp mar ke paper vich will karda oye

Maan stopped n geet looked at him smiling .. Armaan came with ridz ..breaking thr trance not wanting any suspicion to build here ...n they all danced ...the red hue never left geet's face ..she was smiling ...n her smile was the confirmation simi needed ...she smiled seeing the happiness sparkling geet's eyes ..n wished them all the luck ..

King type da, hai dang life da
Yaar wai wai khetan vich chill karda
Do it my my way, nahi te Highway
Inko farak yaaron ki penda

The all set the hall to a frenzy with the high beat ..everyone ws lost in the song ..dancing without any particular step ..just grooving in the atmosphere ..n geet as well was lost in the happiness when she felt maan was dragging her n she stopped confused ...n he smiled turning back to her ...

Maan (came close to her ...geet held her breath feeling him towering her ..n his lips touching her jaw line ..making her heart beat furiously n he said with a smile) : I m kidnapping u ..😉

The music was so loud she could barely hear his voice thanks to his proximity she was rendered senseless ..feeling his lips on her jaw ...it was just the movement of his lips on her skin that she could make out what he said ..n a smile spread across her face ..standing his whole idea of dance performance ...clearly everyone was lost in the music ..

Iski uski kaun kiski yaaran da imaan whisky
Uspe chicken ho to hor wadhiya
Pretty Pretty face jitthe jatta always utthe
Maamla done ho to hor wadhiya (x2)

Maan was dragging her out before armaan finishes the song ..when geet caught the eyes of mohinder handa he was following her ...every step away from him n with maan ...geet looked at him directly ...the look he knew was seeking his permission ..he could see how happy she was ...n in this one moment ..he could snatch all her happiness just by stoping her ..it would take him a minute to do this ..but he didn't ...he crossed his arms on his chest ...the posture was as stubborn n stern as ever but the sternness in his eyes soften now ...geet smiled ...she knew what that look meant ... she was soo happy ..this one moment meant everything ...her dad excepting maan .. she couldn't be any happier than this ..n she stepped out of her house with maan ..

Haan uspe chicken ho to hor wadhiya
ho hor wadhiya..
Maamla done ho to hor wadhiya
aa aa aah.. aa aa aah..

While on the other hand ..mohinder handa kept standing thr seeing geet leave with maan .. for the first time in his entire life he didn't listen to his mind instead did what his heart said .. it was weird how he could understand the plead in geet's eyes ...after Rano died he thought he lost all the emotions in him as well ...but guess not ...!! He still couldn't trust maan with his daughter but he could now understand the level geet is involved with him ... her happiness meant the most for him n always will ...but does that mean he should trust an enemy with his only tressure ..his reason to live ..??? he kept wondering ...

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ehehehe geet jealouse all girl droling over maan
opsss simi aunty bhi
well she is ooo cool type
maan sahi jarahai ho yaar dad ko na sahi aunty ko pata lo
aewsome dance
maan kidnap geet
n mohinder saw this listen his heart dinot stop them
awesom e agin waitng for next
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MG SS : Ishaqzaade



PART 14


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Geet smiled ...laughed throwing her head back feeling the air of freedom dancing on her skin ...maan was delighted seeing her soo happy ...he really doesn't remember if he ever saw her so full of life ever ...she enjoyed but always in limits ..n she never believed in breaking the rules .. but today he saw a different her .. n he truly loved her every shade ...she was happy n he could feel it with her grip on his waist n shoulder .. it was so difficult for him to concentrate on the road instead of turning around n kiss those dimples ...she looked gorgeous in her pink lehenga n silver top ..oh that figure hugging choli was his death .. he never cursed the bumpy road of delhi so much in his entire life than this moment while driving this bike when with every break her front was pressed against his back ..her heavily embroided choli n his kurta did nothing to hide the friction ...the heat was setting in thr body n both could feel it ...he could see her blushing red cheeks in the small mirror .. the temptation was so strong that he couldn't help but to turn his head n look at her ...n hell it wasn't a wise decision ..she looked up just in the every moment he turned n no matter how much she try but she wasn't able to tear her gaze away from his dark chocolate brown eyes n when he looked at her so intensely ..she could feel herself getting goose bumps all over herself ..the blood rushing down her body making her blush at her own reactions .. she was trying so hard to tear her gaze n maan knew it from her hardened grip on his shoulder .. oh how he wished her hands were somewhere else ..these few months with her have been amazingly beautiful ...every day he got to see a new side of her ... initially at every of his romantic talk she would get away glaring him or would go silent ...n then her silence was replaced by a smile n instead of her glaring big eyes he saw blush appearing on her cheeks ...he could see she was every bit effected by being with him in tht small apartment alone ...n he loved seeing tht blush on her cheeks .. right now he exactly know how she is feeling but he knows tht as well tht how she is ...all these physical needs these feelings r new to her ..n scares her somewhere ...he still remember when he first time hugged her in kitchen she actually screamed out of fear .. in that very moment he knew he would have to watch himself around her ...but he never left her ..he knew it would have hurt her ...it was so surprising for him to understand her so easily ..but yes he did coz she has presented herself as an open book to him ..unlike the whole world for which she is still a hard woman ...

A vehicle zoomed passed them breaing her trance ..n she lokked at him realizing what stupid act they were having on the road ..n she turned his face in front with a slight smile n faking a stern voice which he could clearly see ..

Geet : saamne dekho ..warna accident hujayega ...

Maan smiled shaking his head n looked ahead n drove faster ...

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Geet was awestuck with the beauty maan has decorated the whole farmhouse .. simple silver lights ..which probably were the left overs of some party here ...n the terrace ...beautifully done with red roses ...it looked so mesmerizing that all she did was to absorb the beauty of this place ... the now shimmering sky was the proof that moon is just about show from behind those black clouds ..but the black clouds of struggle was shredded from maan's life with just a smile of this angle standing thr ..shinning in the dim light of stars looking nothing less than a fairy in pink .. he always saw her as the most beautiful girl in the whole universe but today ...standing here she looked divine ..he couldn't help but to feel the pull ..almost unintentionally he started walking towards her when she was facing the sky giving him her back making him loose his sanity looking at her bare back with a thin silver band holding her choli with a hook .. he hugged her from back almost crushing her in his arms feeling her shiver in his embrace ..



her breath was caught in her throat with his intimate touch ..she could feel the urge in his hold setting the burning desires in her as well ..making her hold his arms on her bare tummy tight ..her legs turned jelly when he hid his face in the crook of her neck placing small pecks thr almost loosing himself in her fragrance he stood thr lost in her ..n she moaned feeling her voluptuous kisses making her eyes roll back n she closed them lost in him in his love ..almost surrendering herself to him ..trusting him ..making him own her toy her .. he pressed her closer moving to her other side moving away her hairs kissing his way down to her shoulder moving away the strap ..softly kissing her licking her n biting her ahh .. earning a moan n she moved closer to him feeling her insides melt with every passing second she could feel her tummy flutter with sensation totally unknown to her ..she pressed herself more to him ..wanting something more unaware to the whole world around them ..the thin cotton material of his kurta n her almost bare back did nothing to lessen the heat of thr bodies n she was loosing her sanity n she knew it ..he was not able to stop even after telling himself to stop n he knew he should stop or he won't be able to ...



He turned her around with passion screaming from every fiber of his ..she looked so lost n vulnerable ..flushed ..still wanting ..he was lost in her beauty ..she was the most most thing on earth ..n she was his ..!! the thought was so overwhelming that it takes away every bit of his sanity n rationality from him ..he cupped her face in his palm ..n she opened her eyes ...her big duo shape almond hazels were masking the same desire ...love ...passion that he was feeling ...her eyes deep in love with him ..her lips trembling ..he wa mesmerized with her beauty as if a fairy as descended from heaven in this bright moon light ...n he was smitten ..smitten by her beauty ...smitten by her innocence ...smitten by her trust on him ..smitten by her love for him ...!!

He circled her waist not wanting any distance between them n she closed her eyes barely able to stand this near to him ..this moment was definitely the most beautiful moment of her life ...maan pressed her to his hard frame wanting to feel her all over again ..his body was completely out of control not wanting to stop even when his mind was screaming to ..she was lost in him moaned when thr lower bodies collided making them both aware of the heat of this moment ...her taunt buds were aching now ... with desires s o forbidden n his body seems to be on fire ..reacting to her every touch ..every moan ..her hands circled his nape caressing the small hairs thr arousing him ..making him feel his hardness ..n her as well ...!!



The moment she realized something hard poking at her stomach ..she opened her eyes almost shocked coming back to the reality n looked at him with flushed face ..only to find him lost in her ..caressing her burning red cheeks he was devoring her with his eyes only ..shying ..getting embarrassed with her own reaction to his touch she tried to pull away ...only to have him jerk her back into his embrace ..n she looked at him shocked when he held her one hand at her back ..holding her em-mobile in her embrace ...his authority ..his fierce passionate eyes held her captivated ..almost making her loose herself all over again ..he looked at her captivating her in his captivated gaze n started closing the distance b/w thr faces ...her instinct told her he was going to kiss her ...she just doen't know what she wanted ...her mind was screaming to stop him ..but the hands just couldn't move to .. a part of her yearning for him ..the other part shouting rationality ..n she closed her eyes trusting him ...what else she could do in that moment .. she wasn't able to decide n she trusted him ..she did ..so she gave him the choice ...



maan looked at her closed eyes parted lips ..trembling ..he knew how she is feelings ...she was never into any relation ..n this physical closeness is new to her ..he knew she is effected by his proximity ...he knew she loved him n would give in to his demands ...but he saw the flicker of confussion in her hazel eyes ...he wanted to stop but her trust ...her submission made him fell in love with her all the more ..now he know she trust him ..trust him more than she ever did ..smiling at her he moved to her ears n placed a soft kiss thr ..n whispered softly ..

maan : geet ...

geet (still lost clutching his shoulder with one hand) : umm ..

maan (smiled naughtily) : chand nikal aaya ..😆

geet (confused opened her eyes n looked at him ) : han ...😳😳

Maan (eyes to the sky behind her ..smirking) : chand ..

Geet looked back confused n saw the moon shining at them ..she shied thinking what the hell she was expecting n turned around not wanting to face him ..n he back from back ..crossing his hands at his back ..leaning a bit on her shoulder in a hoarse voice ...asking holding his smile ..

Maan : geet tum kya soch rahi thi ..??

Geet (looked down turning red with embarrassement n turned around said pushing him away) : kuch nahi ..mien thali lekar aati hoon ..

She went hurriedly n maan stood thr smiling ...looking at her speeding away ..n a slight blush formed on his cheek remembering all that happened here ...he could still feel her frangrance over him ...n he loved it ..

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Geet came back with the aarti thal ..her face was glowing in the dim light of diya ..he stood thr looking at her coming close to him ...geet could feel his heated gaze on her ..n she couldn't help the blush spreading acrpss her face ...the small smile that she couldn't hold back took his breath away n he stood lost niharofying her while she performed all the rituals ...she was offering him the Channi ..but our munda stood lost ..

Geet (rolling her eyes fighting a smile) : maan ..abb tum chand dekh kar vrat poora karne ki takleef uthaoge ..

Maan (lost with a smile) : chand ko hi tu dekh raha hoon ..😳

Geet looked at him wide eyes ...a slight blush appeared on her face with a shy smile looking down ..but she masked it with sterness n turned his head to the sky by her first finger ..pointing at the sky ..

Geet : chand wahan hai ..chalo vrat toro abb ..

Maan (nodded negatively n cupped her face) : mera chand tu mere saamne ..aur mien kisi aur ko dekh kr vrat nahi torne wala ..

Thr was so much love in his eyes ..geet couldn't believe at her luck ...lost for a moment she looked away not wanting those tear spoil this moment n looked at him with a baby face ..

Geet : tumhain jo karna hai karo ..but plss abhi mera vrat poora karo ...(with childish pout) .. bhook lag rahi maan ..

Maan smiled n made her drink water ..n so did she ..with a small piece of sweet they headed down stairs to have thr meal ..

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After having thr meal they were sitting by the pool side ..the whole area decorated with dim lights ...nothing fancy but in the darkness of the night it looked so beautiful ..

Geet : itna sab kuch kaise kiya ..??

Maan : bas kar liya ..

Geet smiled n looked down ...she truly so happy today ..n she still couldn't point out the actually reason for her happiness ..maan's presence around ..his efforts to meke this karva chauth special ..or her father's approval ..the thought that somewhere he has started trusting maan ..whatever it be ..she would never forget this evening ...she glanced at maan with a smile n then her eyes fell on his watch n she grabbed his hands suddenly ..

Maan : kya hua ...??

Geet : kya hua ..?? maan 10 baj gaye ..utho mujhe ghar puhanchna hai ..jaldi utho chalo ..

Maan (Geet was about to get up when he jerked her back n made her almost fall on him holding her wrist firmly) : geet abhi itni bhi deir nahi huyi ...kuch time aur plss ..

Geet (trying to free her hand ..tensed) : dekho humare paas na abhi poori zindagi paari hai ..n abhi buhat saare aur karva chauth aayenge tu baqi ki lines na tum tb maar lena ...abhi plss mujhe ghar chordo ..

Maan (sighed ..bit irritated as well) : fine chalo ..

He stood up but geet remained still in her position n looked up with a child like face ..

Geet : tum ghussa hu ..??

Maan (looking away) : nahi ..abb chalo utho ..

Geet (stubbornly) : nahi tum ghussa hu ..sorry

Maan (calmed himself realizing her position) : geet mien ghussa nahi hoon chalo abb utho ..late hujayenge hum warna ..

Geet : tum pakka ghussa nahi hu ...??

Maan : Nahi ..

Geet (trying to tease him) : sachii mien ghussa nahi hu na ..

Maan (getting irritated) : nahi geet ..

Geet (hiding her smile) : tum ghussa nahi tu tumhari naak lal kyun hai ..?? (he actually touched his nose checking ..making her smile but she hid it well) ...wohh dekho tumhari naak hai ..

Maan look at her getting royally pissed n saw the little curve of her lips ..n he knew what she is up to .. he came close to her almost towering her ..

Maan : tum mujhe tease kar rahi ho ..

Geet smiled n nodded negatively ..maan made an angry face n turned around when she held her hand n came forward ..

Geet : acha sorry ..abb nahi karungi ..(he looked at her sternly n she smiled dazzling him).. promise ..(pinching her throat).. pakka wala ..

Maan (smiled) : tum na ..kabhi kabhi bilkul bachi hu jati hu ..

Geet (smiled seeing his smile back) : acha chalo chalet hain ...(she walked ahead n he stopped her) ..kya hua ..??

Maan (hesitant) : umm ...wohh ..actually wohh mien tumhare liye ..i mean wohh mien yahan aaraha that u raaste mien dekha n mujhe laga tumhain pasand aayega tu ...wohh ..(geet was still trying to figure out what he is trying to say ...he is never so hesitant to say something ..n just than he said it all in bullet train speed).. mien tumhare liye gift laya tha ..

****^^^^*****

pheww finally updated both parts ..sorry i m never really confident with my passionate scene ..so don't know if this came out well or nt ..sorry if i bored u ..
always in for criticism ...😊

okiee so people its just another 4 days of my holidays left ..clearly i wont be ablt to end this be4 that ..but the story is entering its last phase ...with an action pack climax i will be finishing this ss in another 10 parts ...hopefully ,,,😳 be with me ..plss let me know if i m going wrong anywhere ..😊

waiting for ur reviews n likes

luv ya all
sobia
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
double update eid ki eidi hai
love it
maaneet romanc sooo awesome
they broke their fasrt now tease each other
sooo cute way geet teasing him
maan gift laya apni mishty k liya
yaha q stop kiya
wrong timing now will think kiya lya hoga
Edited by fariya20 - 11 years ago

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