Originally posted by: daredevilisback
Hey sis..
found it now..readed it in one go 😊
This is awesome I tell u..
luv u maan 😃
will b waiting for next part...
jaldi update karo ok
luv u sobi😊
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Originally posted by: daredevilisback
Hey sis..
found it now..readed it in one go 😊
This is awesome I tell u..
luv u maan 😃
will b waiting for next part...
jaldi update karo ok
luv u sobi😊
Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan
haayee loved the part so much dear so maan wants to become responsible to get geet's love..waah kya tarkeeb nikaali geet ne..let's see what happens next!🤔
Originally posted by: Rajshree12
Lovelyyy update Sobi...
Hmm...so Geet was avoidi.g Maan bcoz she knew tht Maan has feelings for her & she didn't want her father to hurt Maan regarding his irresponsible nature...
But Maan is our MSK after all..he will definitely himself capable of Geet's love..
Eagerly waiting for nxt part.
PART 4
That same night … geet was still wondering if what she did was right …she didn't meant to say any of it .. It was all her angerher frustration that helplessness she has been feeling ever since her dad said about maan being a non-serious person n the way she didn't had anything to say in his defence everything was eating her up n than her furtile attempts to break every single hope maan had for them being together but now what will happen …?? She isn't sure of anything …anything at all ..!! ..knowing how non serious maan have been .. it was difficult to believe he will take all what he said seriously …
but than his eyes…!!!
The love n that stubborn determination … shaking her whole existence n her mind as well .. everytime she thinks of a negative thing with her calculative ming her heart will come up to justify .. tired she retired to bed .. but be4 closing the bed side lamp saw the half opened drawl n took out the college album …
A smile adorned her face with the first pic it self ..it was maan at a college picnic his last college picnic covered with mud from head to toe by who else than geet ..turning another page thr was the best friends ..armaan n maan … than it was geet with ridz ..n thr came hers n maan's pic ..from the farewell party .. she caressed the picture ..taking it out of the plastic folding ..leaving the album a side …she kept adoring it ..looking at the shinning eyes oozing with happiness …
Be4 she could drift in her thoughts deeply thr came some faint noices .. alerting her ..n than a bang of some flower pot being broken it was late at night past 11 the whole handa house at sleep .. n thr the noise ..panicked she look every whr around to grab something for her defence .. but be4 she could do anything the person jumped in her room from balcony door struggling with the curtains n geet grabbed some stick thin though hitting that person ..who was still struggling ..screaming now actually ..n held geet's wrist ..
Geet (shouting) : choro mujhe …choro u bloody thief ..PAPA …Veerji …leave me u …//
Be4 she could scream anymore he placed his hands over her mouth shutting her …n threw her on her bed ..coming out of those curtains ..
While geet stood up fuming scared a bit as well n was about run outside when he grasped her hand n held her back ..
Person : madame ji pehle dekh tou lo kuan hai ..
Geet (turned back jerking his hand off her very well recognizing the owner of the voice) : what the bloody hell r u doing here ..
Maan (said innocently) : tum se milne aaya hoon obviously hiking ka tou mood huga nhi iss time mera madame Hitler ..
Geet ( pushing him off with a jerk) : get off u moron ..tumhain pata bhi kya pagalpan kiya hai tum ne …kisi ne dekh liya na tou .. hiking choro chalne ke kabil bhi nahi bachoge …niklo yahan se ..Abhi ..!!
Maan (coolly sat on her bend resting on the bed post) : arre thori tou sharam karo ..apne hone wali pati ko ghar se nikal rahi hu …chi chi chi ..geet kuch tou manners dekhao ..
Geet (confused at first than fumed with his words) : maan just shut up n leave ..tumhara yeh mazaak ki timing buhat hi gandi hai jao yahan se ..kisi ne dekh liya na tou ..///
Maan gave her an look arching his brows stood up making her stop in her speech n looked at her boaring his eyes into hers giving her his intimidating look .. making her bit nervous .. n took calm slow steps towards her ..
Confused scared basically she was taking steps back with each of his forwarding step .. She couldn't understand what was he upto .. this was diffirent ..in any other time she would have simply kicked him out but after what ever happened this morning …it all made it so diffirent n she didn't knew how exactly she should react .. with her heart beating exceptionally high …a part of her heart rejoicing his arrival contrary to her mind which was screaming to throw him out .. her steps going back yet her eyes unwillingly locked with his … the love in his eyes has its own set of language like binding her in a strong thread with him ..
Lost captivated by him she hit the cold glass door of her balcony n he came hovering over her petite structure looking at him with his intense deep ocean brown eyes .. as if trying to read her inner most thoughts .. n said in a barely audible husky whisper fanning her nape with his hot irregular breaths ..
Maan : tou kya geet … kya huga .. (geet looked at him turning sideways with his slightly beared jaw pricking her soft cheeks ) hmm ..bolo kya huga tumhara who idiot cousin aakar mujhe marega …
Geet (looked away getting nervous with these new found feelings n his proximity creating havoc in her heart) : maan wohh .. wohh ..
Maan (with a teasing smile looking at her slightly red hued face n stampering words) : han kya wohh .. bolo ..
Geet looked up with all her might feeling thousands of butterfly dancing in her tummy ..n found him smiling with so much of mischief filled in his shinning eyes ..for moment she lost herself in his captivating eyes thr was so much of happiness she couldn't just simply look away …never the less he as well stood thr looking at her in that shinning moon light n dull lamp light .. even in that simplest night wear she looked the most beautiful angel .. he was lost looking at her if he could he would have spend his whole life standing thr looking at her .. but just when his heart prayed so she looked down blushing n pushed him away going to her room's door locking it .. just making sure no one will barge in n caught them …
Maan (teasingly) : geet ..tumhare irade kya hain …haye babaji kahin yeh larki meri izat tou nahi lotne wali na ..
Geet (struggling hard to control her smile n looked away) : shut up will u
Maan (placed his hand on his heart n left a loud sigh leaning on the wall in all filmy style) : haayeee ..abb iss smile ke baad humara kya huga ..
Geet (giving him her stern look) : tum adhi raat ko mujh se chit chat karne aaye hu …??
Maan looked at her than nodded negatively ..while she stood thr confused ..n she came forward looking at him questioning n he made her sit on her bed whislt he knwlt down in front of her ..
Maan : actually tum se kuch bat karni thi …
Geet : kis bare mien ..
Maan (bit his inner lip n she knew he was confused his typical act when ever he will be confused) : wohh actually mene kuch .. I mean
Geet (smiled n placed her hand on his shoulder n tilted her head a bit to look at his dipped face) : tumhain mujh se kuch bolne se pehle itna sochne kab se parne laga ..weirdo ..
Maan (smiled than frowned) : u knw I hate that word ..
Geet (smirked) : well u are a big one so I can't help but to address u that ..😛
Maan (twisted his lips nonchantly) : what ever ..acha abhi suno .. tum ne mere would-be F.I.L ko humare bare mien bol diya ..??
Geet (confused) : nahi ..abhi nahi bola ..wohh actually subha se ..//
Maan (cutt her off) : okie great …aur abhi tum bologi bhi nai ..
Geet : matlab ..
Maan : arre yrr tum ne hi tou kaha tha …when u'll tell him abt me u won't hv anything to say anything which is abt me ..(geet lowered her eyes recalling how rude n raw she was then ..but she never knew maan would become so stubborn all she wanted was to push him away ..Alas..he is way to stubborn) …so only I hv decided ill make some project n will settle myself first fir hi hum dono tumhare dad se baat karenge n until than ..tum kuch nahi bol rahi hu unko kuch bhi ..
Geet kept looking at him for a moment ..n than looked away with moist eyes ..what she was thinking a few minutes back be4 he came n here he is so serious about all this … she felt so low of herself …how could she simply doubt his feelings ..
A drop of tears fell on maan's arm n he at first lifted her chin up …getting confused …
Maan (wiping her tears away) : geet kiya huya …?? Mene kuch galat kaha … I am sorry mien tumhain hurt nhi karna chahta tha ..
A new trail of tear made its way down with all his care n she looked away feeling so guilty at her part … n he was loosing his patience with every second ..
Maan : geet bolo tou kya huya ..
Geet (wiping off her face roughly n said looking at him) : I AM SORRY ..
Maan (cofused he cupped her face in his palm n wiped off her tear lingering at the edge of her eyes n asked with all the love he possed for her) : par kis liye ..
Geet : mene wahan jo kuch kaha …I am sorry …mujhe nahi kehna chahiye tha na .. mien buhat bori hoon na .. I am really sorry mien aapko hurt nahi karna chahti thi ..
Maan smiled at her …gosh she is one of her own kind … a chuckle left his mouth thinking if any1 frm college ever saw her like this the person will faint seeing the ultimate Hitler crying …n then AAP .. smiled n stood up in front of her very well knowing thisAAP is just a result of her highly emotional state ..otherwise she addressing him as AAP …bhool jao …😆
Maan : tum ne jo kaha mujhe bora nahi laga ..for that matters tumhari kooi bhi baat mujhe bori nahi lagti … I knw tum bas mere liye sochti hu ..bolti nahi hu wohh alag baat hai ..😆(geet looked away making him smile).. but sachi mien yeh sab iss liye nahi kar raha kyun ke tum ne kaha ..but iss liye kar raha hoon coz mien sach mien apne aap ko is qabil bana chahta hoon k eek angel ko apna bana sakoon …n any life u don't need to feel guilty EVER ..😳
Geet looked at him confused was he really not hurt at all ..n next came the commanding words ..
Maan : n don't u ever cry like this ..buhat boori lagti ho roti huyi .. ek dum cartoon jaisi ..mujhe tum wohh thicki mirchi jaisi hi pasand hu …waise hi rahu ..😳
Geet smiled first n than cartoon …she looked at him fuming n than thicki mirchi ..he is so gone .. maan looked at her frm the corner of his eyes ..
Geet : acha mien cartoon lagti hoon .. aur kya thikhi mirchi ..abhi batati hoon ..
N thr he was all beaten up with her pillow .. n he tried defending him ..
Maan : arre geet ..ruko tou ..(thr came the pillow on his face hitting him with a thud😆) .. shit yrr mien mazaak kar raha tha ..
But she was un-stopable n with no other option left he grabed her hand n pinned her on the mattress ..
Geet breath got caught in her lungs .. first the pillow fight n than him hovering over her .. the night seemed endless ..n thr the two person lost in each other's eyes almost loosing thr sanity in thr closeness .. the moment felt at pause ..his lips came down on her forehead ever so lightly kissing her .. the action felt so natural as if all they needed was to be thr in each others embrace close to each other n nothing else ..she closed her eyes savouring the heavenly feeling of his lips on her skin ..getting flushed with this closeness n he just kept looking at her red blushing face .. glowing with thr love ..her eyes close ..lips adorned with a small smile .. the urge was so strong to crush her iin his arms n feel her close to him like never be4 but be4 they could slip deep into that moment of bliss thr was a knock on her door ..startling them both ..
Geet (snapped her eyes open n looked at him shocked) : ab kya Karen ..
Maan (stood up scratching his head looking everywhr) : umm .. ek kaam karo tum jao aur darwaza kholo ..
Geet (whishpered) : pagal hugaye hu kya ..
Maan : geet tum jao jaakar door open karo mien balcony se chala jata hoon ..
Geet : but ..
Maan : no buts jao …ill be fine ..
Maan was going to her balcony while she stood thr concerned ..looking at him ..n with another loud knock she made her way to the door …n thr stood her bhabi brij's wife pammi ..
Pammi : geet kya huya tu soyi nahi aur kuchawaaz bhi arahi thi tere room se ..sab theek hai na
Geet (nervous confused) : han …han bhabi sab ..sab theek hai ..kuch nahi huya …koi bhi nahi hai ..i mean wohh ..wohh mien .. han ..woh mien apni friend se baat kar rahi thi ..
Pammi (confused) : iss waqt ..geet 11 se upar hugaya ..
Geet : han wohh aaj hi uski mangni huyi na tou usko neend nahi aarahi thi iss hi liye …acha bhabi abhi mujhe buhat neend aarahi hai …aap bhi sojao …good night ..
Pammi (looked into her room) : acha theek hai tu soo ja ..raat hugayi hai aur kuch chahiye hu tou mujhe awaaz de dena ..
Geet (smiled with grt efforts) : ji bilkul ..good night bhabi ..
Leaving a sigh of relief geet closed her door as pammi went away n she ran to her balcony ..looking all around for any traces of him .. n found him making his way towards the back of the house .. she looked concerned while he smiled at her giving a flying kiss he went away ..
Geet came in n looked at the picture still lying by her side … smiling she picked it up n kissed it shyly ..
Geet : ill be with u …in every step ..i promise ..
Unaware of the future the two souls now are lost in thr own world of love …but who knows what tomorrows is hiding for them ..
~~~~~***************~~~~~~~~~~
pheww ..finally it is up ..n meri devil varsha di ...hope u liked it ..😳
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luv ya all
sobia
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Originally posted by: mahimaneet
tumne bataya nahi u r updating
mai pehale last chapter reading...kuch yaad nahi aa raha story kaha tak pohchi thi😆
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