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Posted: 12 years ago
@lils: mine too.. ab busy schedule khatam ho gayi?
@neha: going to write dear.. hopefully today..
@maansee: Nice wordings yaar.. theer nishane pe lagi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

@lils: mine too.. ab busy schedule khatam ho gayi?
@neha: going to write dear.. hopefully today..
@maansee: Nice wordings yaar.. theer nishane pe lagi 😆



wow, hope that u'll complete at time an update at night...
waise me too going to update at night...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update... MG are totally a tom & jerry..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Remsss

kaha hai??


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Posted: 12 years ago
hello hello... koi hai yaha????


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Posted: 12 years ago
maan is looking at geet like this...


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Posted: 12 years ago




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16. The Art of Embarrassment




Is she like this since birth?

I heard maan asking to Chris. We were all chatting in hall after making the baby girl sleep and having biscuits. Chris was too lazy to cook anything so we had to starve. She was always a khaam chor and poor macho man has to cook.

Like what?

Like she is bearing the whole world's weight!! She is not at all fun loving and loves to glare a lot.

I glared him hearing his sentence.

See.. hence proved the theorem.

They chuckled making me furious.

No maan. She is witty and sweet. But me too surprised to c her like this. She is the greatest prankster I have ever witnessed. U noe wat she did in college to our professor? She burst crackers locking him in classroom at the time of his entry making him do a salsa.

Oh come on macho man.. he was a pervert.

Oh no!! she is so dangerous yaar.. But I love dangerous women!!

He winked making me roll my eyes. I took the plate and went to kitchen and chris followed me.

He is so sexy and yummy.. y r u ignoring him ??
I gave her a shocking look.

I think I should say his wife's admiration to my fianc.

Fake fianc ??

Whatever..

Jealous huh?

Y would I ?

Come on Geet.. u like him.

May be. But I m never going to admit that.

Y?

B/c he challenged that he will make me fall in love with him..

Clich… Touched ur ego part??

I gave her a dismissing look.

I noe geet. U r waiting to make u fall in love. U r waiting for his attention, pampering, rt?

I gave her a sheepish smile.

But don't make him wait so much geet. He is a gem..

After chatting for some more minutes we bid bye to them and she made me promise to stay in touch. While driving back my stomach started to grumble making me embarrass. Stupid stomach!!

Hungry?

No

Then wats that grumbling noise?

My stomach is practicing music.

Oh ya!! ur stomach is going to participate in American idol, rt? U r so stubborn.

I noe.

Come yaar.. we will have something from Mc Donalds.

I don't want anything. If u want then carry on.

After parking the car sideways, he took the key out and then jogged to my side.

U have 10 seconds to decide.

I looked at him questioningly but he concentrated on his watch and tapped the foot impatiently.

That's it. Now don't blame me.

I looked at him confused and next second he was kneeling in front of me making the crowd notice.

I m begging u geet... Pls don't make our child inside u starve. Forgive me for coming late. But don't let anger on food baby. I vl wash all ur clothings this week honey bunny. I won't repeat my mistake ever. But pls come with me. Pls guys tell her to give me a chance.

Embarrassment will be a small word for what I m feeling now. I could feel blood rushing to my cheeks. Crowd were looking at Maan sympathetically and then giving me angry glares. Urgh!! I hate him.

Maan.. Just stop it. All r looking…

Let them.. But pls don't say No honey bunny.. I vl die..

I inhaled the air deeply and clenched my fist controlling myself.

Okay.

Atleast give him a kiss.

What?

U forgave him, rt? Now there shouldn't be any fight b/w u. we think this fight should end with a kiss.

No way.

See.. she still dint forgive me.

He was wiping his so called fake tears. Kahaan phas gayi yaar!!

U don't have to feel shy to kiss ur hubby.

Stop!! I vl do it.

I looked towards maan to c him grinning in victory. Maan.. u r so going to regret this!! When I leaned, I saw him pointing his lips for a kiss. Instead, I grabbed his chin and tilted sideways planting a kiss on cheeks.

I heard some oohs and aahs and ignored it all along with a pouting maan. he grabbed my waist and thanked the crowd before heading to Mc Donalds.

Now u will never use the word No honey bunny..

Gritting my teeth but also thinking hw his stubble tickled my lips we entered the famous Mc Donalds




@all: Thanku Guys for the support.. Continue liking and commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first...yippie...

loved the update yaar... the talks between them... and the line, he is really a gem... don't let him wait much...

okay, her stomach is practicing music... but kaun sa song yaar?.


ooo... fake fiance...maan is too much... first fake fiance and now preggy... meri taraf se hone wale baby ke liye gifts.... loved it...


maan, , come with me... i'll give ur fav black coffee...

kissy wissy... koi baat nahi maan... abhi cheek par but later u'll get one on lips...

me all over fida on this maan...maanu, for u...
Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@neha: u updated?? i m off to read now..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

@neha: u updated?? i m off to read now..



no, going to update now... net dc ho gaya tha but i have updated epilogue of fanna...
http://nehasfantasies.wordpress.com/2013/06/19/fanna-hum-mohobbat-mein-teri-epilogue/

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