SS : Raison d'etre (Chapter 13 - P 63) 25/03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Very well written. Seems like an interesting story in the making. Do PM when you update. Thanks!

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palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Very interesting "meeting"...😃

Is there a misunderstanding or Her boss is Suraj Uncle's son??? It might be possible,he is someone's else and Its destiny's plot to convert a "professional" relation into "personal"...😉 By the way,you stopped at a pretty wrong moment for me as a reader and a pretty right moment for you a s a writer as you have left me a craving of reading more and more ASAP...!!!

Anyways,Geet's papa is really cool..I wish,my daddy was like him..😛

You write "AWESOME", girl !!!and your vivid descriptions of the scenario are endearing and puurrffect...!!!

You don't have to give the website link of the restaurant for your readers..your words are more than capable of making them imagine everything very clearly..

Waiting eagerly for next instalment...😃

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

wonderful update awesome...so she was on her way to met a guy of her father's choice Me thinking is this the same guy or her boss...Is Maan her boss ? If yes she knows him just as boss not a guy her father sent. Or only me thinking that he(maan) is same guy her father sent...Or Geet misunderstood just by finding an Indian guy she took him as same man.Confusion confusion..have to wait...Interesting update

Plz update soon 😳

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Will post my comment after reading on reserve place

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

oh it was Maan her boss only with whom her father has arranged for blind Date...or is it misunderstanding...

yeh to bada hi surprising hai that he is her boss and being in front of each other daily he didn't feel anything for her or she also ignorant of her hawt boss...chalo ab to mile...

waiting for further story...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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Mansi Tripathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Nice part
Geet on blind date coz of her dad
Geet meeting her boss in date
continue soon

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Amazing part :D
So geet loves her work :D
Aww loved how u described their first meeting and her dad fixing her first date.
Lol even in the restaurant our lady is busy admiring the architecture.
Loved it. Cant wait for more :)

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Ubiquitos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Love story of workaholics it looks like :D. Well written.

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Aatiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

interesting update.. hope the man her father choose is maan.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

hi dear..congrats on the SS! All da best! The title is different! Awesum start! Love chap 1 n 2! Psl add me to ur pm list! Superbly written! update soon n do pm! 😊