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anky_s

@anky_s

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Short and sweet update. The commotion, the conundrum going in Geet's mind was justified. So maaneet got married. Great part. Awaiting next update already. Plz update at the earliest possible.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

hi wt a superb surprise! updates were worth the wait! Thanks 4 updating! Really appreciate it! Thanks 4 da pm n terrific updates! beautifully written! Pari is a wonderful friend! She understands Geet! Pari busy cursing Khuranas n Dev hears her! Pari is irritated! Dev teases her! Pari hurt by his words! So Pari n Dev! wow! Maaneet married! Geet taking a leap of faith! she feels protected by him! she feels his reassurance! Geet's inner turmoil well portrayed! 👏update soon

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

ver very well written. eager to read more. it was criminal of you to take such a long break from writing.

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2thless

@2thless

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Wonderful story... The name of the story caught my eyes and cudnt stop from reading... i somewhat thought that maan and veer are the same when he told about the meeting to her father... but covered it up soon...😉 I have listened to the song umpteen times now - abhi na j a chodke ... After reading it in ur story... it's one of my favorites... The monolog between pari n geets mom (photo) was very emotional... Loved it... 👏 also the convo between dev n pari... guess dev has taken a liking towards her... awesome update... plz continue...

Just 2 questions... did maan know about geet being the gal i mean father's friend.. coz he was very professional from the beginning of the meeting?? So did he intend to play the prank?? Also does he know that geet is hurt? Hope he does nt think of her downcast eyes n silence as shyness...

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

So from now on, they will be next to each other and that means they will confront. I don't know what Maan thinks of it. He assured her means he knew she needed assurance. Can't wait...

I can't make anything of Dev-Pari. I thought Yash would confess and they would be together. But this doesn't look like a jealousy prop. There is more to it and maybe Yash will get his own dose.
Again, that means waiting.

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Chapter 11

Dev is here😳 loved the moment with Pari.

Pari is the one who understands the betrayal Geet felt. In that moment when the joke was revealed, she saw Geet lose the confidence that she had with Maan. Friends know more and see more sometimes.

Nice to read you again😃

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

That made me relive the moment, that leap of faith, the going from me to us..

so much of life is just faith and hope, all in the gray matter😃

you captured it so wonderfully, the emotions of a bride

beautiful👏

I absolutely adore you!

Never stop writing🤗

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maancrazy

@maancrazy

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Absolutely loved it ! You portrayed Geet's feeling and emotions beautifully '
Eagerly waiting for more .

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

thanks for an update...loved pari n dev moments..finally maaneet r married

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Loved the update .pari and dev convo was interesting ,kahhi nayi kahani ki shuruwat to nahi . I love pari nd geet's bond .and finally geet got married and the way the emotions of bride was so so beautifully crafted nd majestically felt . Yes nd leap of faith , ek chothi asha ek chotha sa vishwas ki zindagi mein kahi na kahi diya ka ek lau jalati hai.shayad geet ke saath aisa hi hua hai.and big jadu ki jhappi for update 🤗

Edited by hermoso - 11 years ago