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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

thanku for the part dear...loved it

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Downhill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

i was waiting for this ff for ages and u update it now..and that too with geet not being happy 😡..abhi geet ka mood theek karo...😡

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soniaz121

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

love to see u back with an update but it did'nt make me as much happy bcs it was short for me and maaneet part is so less so plz give another update soon plzzz and one more thing i want to share is this that today i saw a song on tv of an old indian movie and that reminds me this story , the song was abhi na jao chor ke which u used in it and i m waiting so much to read next part for this part thanx a lot for making my day happy

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bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

I can relate to geet.. People think its ok to play suc pranks, but imagine what geet must be going through in the meantime. Her inner turnimol about veer and maan must have confused her so much.. Maan needs to make up to her for the prank..

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gurti30

@gurti30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

beautiful dear

so it was a prank played on geet but she is really hurt with this

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sobia4maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Well u weren't actually wrong about the fact tht the mere news of ths being updated brings a smile to me ..

So thanks for the update ..

Really nycly written one ..but feel if u can plss explain this part of geet's not connecting with maan as her fiance ..couldn't really connect ith tht flavour of update ...sorry if i sound offensive ..

But really the way u r narrating it makes it really iinteresting one ..

Update soon plss me waiting

Sobia :)

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

I can understand her reluctance at this moment.

She feels betrayed and perhaps unsure. Someone she thought she knew had kept himself hidden from her. There is a deception though not to hurt. It makes her feel like a fool.

I like the part about journeys and destinations. For me it is always the destination and I have been told time and time again to stop and smell the roses😃

Thanks for updating.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

hi js sw u updated nw! Thanks 4 updating considering ur hectic schedule! Really appreciate it! Indeed it makes our day! U r an excellent writer! Terrific update! Wonderfully written! Geet still upset abt the prank! She is hurt! Understand her feelings! She feels like she does nt knw him! She is getting married to him! They r on their way to India 4 their wedding! update soon! Thanks