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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-





hai indira...

but y r u feeling bored in holidays???

wlcm 2 our gang yaar
hamare sath rohogii to boryat word ko hi bhul jayogiii😉😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

wlcm 2 our gang yaar

hamare sath rohogii to boryat word ko hi bhul jayogiii😉😛😆

thanx for adding me in ur group
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati


hi laxmi 😃
actually i am at my cousins village for some festival and some family function yaar
my bro and mother brought me here
oh this irritating customes and rules
so i am not able to enjoy



hotha hai yaar,... these marriages and functions can be enjoyable only to an extent... but after that we will be fed up with it... mera hi dekhlo... as its holidays time, its just like funtions ki baad aa gayi ho... ek ke baad ek... even tom have to go for a marriage...an as its in an another city have to early wake up and leave ... hayeee...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



ghar main hajmola haina??? hai tho voh bhi khale... tujhe uske zaroorat padegi...


Hiyo Rabba !!! kitne besharam ho tum sab..
Akele - akele kha rahe ho ..mujhe poocha
bhi nahi...
Katti...
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Posted: 12 years ago
but with gf and freinds am sure u will never feel boredom... haina friends...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Hiyo Rabba !!! kitne besharam ho tum sab..
Akele - akele kha rahe ho ..mujhe poocha
bhi nahi...
Katti...



poochne ke liye ladoo bhi tho chahiye... aur voh jiske paas hai voh tho dhenga dikhake chali gayi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hotha hai yaar,... these marriages and functions can be enjoyable only to an extent... but after that we will be fed up with it... mera hi dekhlo... as its holidays time, its just like funtions ki baad aa gayi ho... ek ke baad ek... even tom have to go for a marriage...an as its in an another city have to early wake up and leave ... hayeee...


ye loo tum bhi meri tarah functions peedith ho
y this marriages take place at nightyaar


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati


ye loo tum bhi meri tarah functions peedith ho
y this marriages take place at nightyaar




chalo is maamle main , me bach gayi...

am south indian... and marriages hamare yahan day time pe hotha hai...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



poochne ke liye ladoo bhi tho chahiye... aur voh jiske paas hai voh tho dhenga dikhake chali gayi

Aur jo mai laai...tum ne dekha hi nahi..huuhh
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Posted: 12 years ago




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Part 72


Geet felt herself releasing conscious and then darkness took shadowing over her mind. Brij smirk carrying her unconscious body in arms and came out from backdoor. A waiter on way asked him about Geet, he said he is her brother and she is not keeping well, so taking her out to the hospital and also ordered him to inform Maan about it. Waiter worriedly nodded and runs to look for Maan while Brij put Geet in a window-closed car and drove off.

"What!!!' was the only reaction came out from Maan when he came to know from waiter and hastened out to look for Geet but he knew, something was no so correct, something was terribly wrong happened with her but his heart wasn't supposed to accept it.

"Why the hell did you let him enter here!!!!'

Finally when he guessed that who was the man behind his misery by waiter statement, he wracked on security guards on entrance.

"I'm sorry sir but he showed Madam (Geet's) photograph with him which was showing so much familiarity between both. I thought he was Madam Brother so let him go inside' Guard spoke alike whisper, bowing down his eyes to the floor, scaring and shivering.

There was no use to argue with this man so Maan immediately called Madhav and let him know everything while had already started his car.

"Brij.. I will kill you, once get your neck in my hands!!!! ' his furiousness was increasing with every passing second but the only hope he had to get any call from him.

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Geet was where, she didn't know. It was deep dark there. Everything was so messy that she could guess easily, she was not in safe. Her eyes fluttered umpteenth times to get clearer view of the place. It was godown which had only few source of sunlight. She was alone there. She tried to stand up from her sitting on floor position but found it difficult and then she realised, her hand and legs were tied tight. Now this hold started to pain her soft skin. This dried coconut-rope was so pricking that made her feeling ache. Her struggle failed for being free from it and the first word came out from her mouth in suffer.. "Maan!!!' and the first drop of tear fell down on grimy floor.

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Maan was still not sure what to do. He had not got any call from kidnapper and here Dadi was also hell worried for Geet and Maan. After uncountable rounds in city finally because of the force of Dadi and Madhav, Maan had to return back in mansion but he was impatiently waiting for Brij call.

"Dadi why the hell did you call me back!!! My Geet is somewhere alone, she will be being fearing without me please let me go to her.. ''

His every cell was crying for her. His arms were aching due to not to feel her safe in his arms, his eyes were wondering in every possible direction to get a glimpse of her. He was feeling so much helpless. He had promised her that never let anything wrong would happen with her but he failed poorly.

"I failed Geet…. I failed!!!!''

He cried out loud. He was alone in their room, His and his Geet room where everything had bit of her touch. He dropped his suffering body on floor, he hit his head on floor, he pulled his hairs in anguish. It had been about a day time when Geet had gone missing and they had got no clue about Brij. It was making everyone frightfully worried.

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Dev was in his flat. He was giving final touch of his packing. In next few hours he would have left for airport and in further next hours, he would have been reached to London if, hadn't got call from Brij and this call felt him like been snatched out floor from below.

"What!!! Brij are you mad!!! How dare you to kidnap her. I am saying you Brij leave her otherwise bro will not leave you to see this world again you damn!!!!'

"No need to shout Dev as I have not called you to hear your lecture here. And what do you think that Your Bro will leave you alive if comes to know that you were the one who started everything!! It was you Dev who had called me here first and gave me the alliance in this scheme!!! Okay now leave it. Listen as why I have called you up. I want to meet you!!!'

"Brij don't do blunder. Do you really think you can do anything to her and would not be getting caught!!!

They talked for while and finally Brij threatened him that if he doesn't come for meeting, he will do that vicious misdeed with Geet that he and Maan wouldn't have any place to regret even after. He threatened for not to tell Maan also otherwise same, would happen. Dev couldn't understand what to say so he agreed to meet him. Brij told him address and without any delay, Dev drove off for there.

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Geet was exhausted with the struggle when she heard a sound in dark and then felt a touch on her shoulder. She moved back in terror. She tried to see his face but couldn't. She heard that person smirk. Her eyes widen in fright when felt his hand going down, through her arms. She felt disgust; she screamed loud and pushed him back with all her collected strength. She was hell shocked with all this. Her tears were not giving any relief of releasing pain of her heart. She did wait for his next movement with vibrating heart and shaking body. Her mind was praying to Babaji to send Maan when she heard Dev voice.

"Brij!'

And then Dev heard her loud fear-filled gasps and saw her moving back in terror..

"Geet!!' Dev was surprised and shocked. He walked to her in happiness that found her but stopped when Geet yelled in cry.

"No .. don't come near me!!! Don't Dev!! '' Her eyes had supreme outrage and panic to see him there.

"Don't dare to touch me Dev go!!! '

"Geet listen me.. you're mistaking everything ' unknowingly he stepped to her

"Stop right there Dev, Maan will not spare you!!!!' She started to throw whatever got in clutch. Wooden pieces, dirt whatever could be found in her rescue. The wall was rocking her way out behind but still, she was pushing herself back more in it.

Dev head hit by a wood piece and he moved near to stop her when she started battling more with screams. He tried hard to make her understand that he was there to take her out but Geet pervious wound was still alive and she was hell scared with him.

"Leave me!!!! Leave me please Dev you can't do this to me just leave me!!! Maaannn!!!!!

"Geet listen me please, we have to ecape from here.. Geet'

"Go away Dev don't touch me. I will kill you .. Maan will kill you !!! Just leave me Dev you can't marry me you cant even touch me.. Maaann!!!!''

"DEV!!!!!!!!'

And suddenly Dev stopped when he heard Maan voice with burning eyes oozing out fire, to see this sight….


Precap: Geet tells him everything about Dev & Maan reaction''



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