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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 10

The wet shirt then had stubbornly clung against her frame, forming around her natural curves leaving nothing to his imagination. He had tried hard to look away but this girl has her ways to irritate him. Oh dammit he hates her.

Geet looked at the flow of the river & walked in the opposite direction, along the side. After a long tiring walk she managed to reach some other camping groups. They helped her find her frds who where panicking looking for her. Next day she came around to return his shirt but found the camp ground empty, the fire lightly smoking. Probably he just left. She wondered how would she return that khadoo's shirt now. He probably would have tagged her with shirt chorni by now.

Geet was exhausted after the week long camping break with her frds. She can't believe she had so much fun just staying in woods, almost drowning, getting lost..sleeping on the ground being bitten by mosquitoes!!

The following week she joined her summer job. That week end she was to shift to her new place. It got late on Friday evening so she reached her new place first thing on Saturday morning. She was simply dressed in her blue jeans & simple lose white shirt with her white juthi's. She carried a back pack with her electronics & a trolly suitcase with her very few belongings. She paid the taxi & walked through main door. Her room mate had given her strict instruction not to make noise or ring the bell. She comfartably opened the door with the main door key & tiptoed up the steps carrying her suitcase & back pack on her back. She was almost at the final step when she hit his rock solid chest totally unexpected. She lost her balance with all the wait in her hand & rolled down the steps. He tried to get hold of her, alash he could only save her from hitting the head on the last step coming face to face with each other.. with her cloths flying all over them.
TUM!!!
both of them spoke together before she lost consciousness.
Dare u faint on me again
He closed his eyes in sheer irritation
he took a deep breath lifting her walking her to the coach. She wrapped her hand around his neck partially unconscious,
tum mujhe doonthe doonthe yanha taak aagayen?
He dropped her down on the couch with a thud!! why the hell would I be looking for u?
She cutely rubbed her butt & then her head that had began to swell after the banging on the steps.. ouch.
She painfully got on her foot reaching to her scattered cloths. She took his shirt from the pile of coths
yehlo aur javo yanha se
yanha ka landlord bahut kadhoos hain
ussen shor sharba bilkul pasand nahi

he clenched his teeth
aur waisen bhi tumhe bina chilyen baat karna aata nahi
no one has ever spoken to him like that, he was abt to lose his sanity & do something just at the fit of the moment when he heard pari running down the steps sorry sorry sorry MK
wo yeh meri new roomy hain
main ne aapko batya tha na
Geet was still confused why her roomy was saying sorry to this khadoos
pari slowly whispered in geets ears yeh humara landlord hain
Geet whispered back yeh khadhoos wo khadoos hain, she thought it was a whisper but he did hear it
Mk gave his typical threatening look to geet I want her out of my house in next 10mins
Geet immediately looked at pari having no hope from this guy
pari thought for a moment ' MK plz! main ne issen phenle hi ek mahene kya rent le liya hain
then just return it he spoke walking towards the kitchen
pari ' Mk I used to pay for my summer classes
plz MK.

He shot an angry glare at the plight of his otherwise calm & quiet house. Just in few mins of her arrival it looks nothing less than a chitiya ghar & he couldn't even imagine wat she could do it if she stood here a sec longer.
He fished into his wallet & threw couple of hundred dollar bills on the kitchen work table. Here get her out of here now. Pari looked at the him in utter shock. He is been her landlord for last 2yrs very strict & particular abt rent, having frds over, speaking over the phone even staying up too late. If she could she even call him a miser with him billing her for every small little things. Geet would have definitely rubbed him on the wrong side.. really wrong side forcing him to spend his money. Pari took the money & went to Geet making a sorry face.

Geet snatched the money from Pari & walked angrily towards him, she threw it back at him. U.. MK or Micky mouse or jo bhi ho tum, U can not ask me to leave without giving any notice, smajhe!!!
oh yah he looked at her like he was in for a fight
he held her elbow & dragged her to the door
this is my house & I can do wat ever I want to do. Just leave he tried pushing her out. She stubbornly marched pass him & planked herself in the coach I am not leaving
I don't have a place to go
she said as a matter of fact
I don't care he said as if it nun of his business
Geet took a deep breath & realized wat she is been doing. She used to be a calm & quite person. Total different from all this.
Pari who was looking at them fight like small kids intertwined.
Mk can she be here until she finds another place. Plz
Maan already had enough interaction with the opposite sex creature for life time he thought. He just left from there without a word.
Pari happily helped Geet to pick her cloths
tum iss khadoos ko janthe ho? She asked giggling
Geet was not sure wat to say.
Thanks for the lovely comments..
carving for more
lots of love
muskan
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Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🥳🥳Me second on your update for first time... party...
Ohhh wow... how swiftly you turned the table of this FF from all crying to typical Maaneet nok jhok...
Geet who had maintained her composure with everyone... maintained her decorum, when in front of him her guards automatically falls down and that old real Geet comes out and she is fighting him like a very normal girl...
I am dying for this khadoos to badly fall in love with her and then geet giving him no signal coz she is so devoted to her husband... but you must have planned the story more beautifully, I know...
This was a typical Maaneet treat... ohh this khadoos is that khadoos... loved this line
so Maan is a landlord, what he does actually... what is his profession...
So pari is already jheling this kanjoos...
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I go away for one weekend and not only do you update both the stories but start a new one...😲
What a pleasant surprise!😃
Also, your note said that you are not done with puchki yet...😊
Best note for me!!!😃😃😃
This is an awesome story.👏
The pain of Geet, the rituals, the white clothes and bangle breaking, shattering and sad!
Dev returning to a normal life after all of his sins and marrying Meera... there is some justice in that..
Daadi encouraging her for her future...👏
The journey of Maaneet begins...😳
Khadoos Maan..😆
Kanjoos bhi...😆, bonus...
Love their nok jhok
In sab se best part kya hai, do you know...
That we get to read Muskan's stories again!
Hugs to bacha party...
Thanks for the lovely story and the fat-a-fat updates!
🤗
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome and lovely part. So Maan is Geet's landlord and that Girl may b pari. Maaneet nok-jhonk made me remind of GHSP scene when Geet was nt ready to leave outhouse and Maan was forcing her to leave. M happy to c a bubbly Geet after long time. She is living her life and also enjoying it. Luv u di.
Edited by DevilClan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊



Hhyyoo Rabba !!! ye MK hai... 3d smiley 040
Fir wo kaun tha...????Super onion smiley 108
He is alive...Babaji !!!!! Super onion smiley 059
My mind is spinning...Super onion smiley 004

By d way Im so happy Geet is facing him ..akdoo..😡
He defo creats prob. for Geet...Sadoo..huuhhh..Super onion smiley 103
Lets see...what is coming next...??? Super onion smiley 074
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
muski di i read it i am the one ha ha i loved it
i am waiting for a big boom
nice start fighting spirits up wow
i am enjoying this
maaneet going to live together ofcourse with pari
i am excited di
convey my love to babies and kisses muahh
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Posted: 12 years ago
landed in his house 😆
now the funride begins...
waiting for next part...
r we getting more now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
Maan is the landlord...
Love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God everything is so confusing as of now, dunno what to expect as of now????
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
i enjoyed maaneets nok jhok beautifully written

so maan is alive

tho wo kaun tha

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