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Posted: 12 years ago


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Originally posted by: LILY111144

mona dekho aur samjho😉


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Aur kaun gaya...🤣


Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Mona , where r u...???
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Part 58



"Why you were there Geet!! Why you were alone?? Why no one was with you!!!''

Geet tried to speak something, any word which could give Him repose but, she was quite. Nothing came out from her mouth and this made Maan madder.

I knew it!! I knew it that you don't trust me. You don't trust me Geet you don't trust me!!! '' Bridge of his patience shattered. He could not accept that she was hiding her truth from him. He felt so heartbroken so devastated that made his heart a sallow in.

"Maan listen me' Geet tried to speak but Maan was not ready. He turned back, stole away from her.

"Maan please don't say like this!'' Geet hugged him from back, cried. "Don't say I don't trust you please don't say!! You don't know Maan but you are the only one in this whole world whom I trust on more than my own self. Maan If you will say that 'Geet, your life is over, I will stop breathing to proof your true. I can do anything for you but can't do anything without you' Please don't say I don't trust you please Maan..''

Her tears were wetting his shirt. Maan closed his eyes and let his heart be some calm. He could see, could bear anything but not her tears. It always made him feel weak even if he had possessed the most confined heart.

"If this much you believe me then why don't you tell everything? Why your trust is scared this time!! Why it doesn't find solace in me'' He said passively

She closed her eyes; let the last drop of tear come out. His stretched nerves were very felt to her that she could know how much impatiently he was waiting for her answer and for that she had to go through those memory lane again, which she wanted to forget and to choose out those few incidents which would not cause much pain to him.

For support Geet hold him tighter from back and kept face on his skin to absorb his warmth and let her mind do journey in past.

"there is nothing Maan which you should be worry for" Last try she did.

"Then why your voice has shaken. Then why your eyes are blinking more then its usual pace Geet, was it trying to hide your pain"

No, it can't and you know it. But my eyes are fearing to see those aches which would give you pain Maan"

"And you think now your eyes can bear the sight of my restlessness, what I am going through seeing you in pain, you cant even imagine Geet!!

He turned to her, cupped her face. Some strands were covering her eyes, he removed those and put behind ears, took her eyes in his assurance that those are not made to be lived in fear when his eyes were there, following them in every path.

"Bolo Geet"

"Brij Veerji had lied about Maa, he didn't want me to come back" She spoke hugging him, resting face on his chest.

Maan shocked hearing this. Caressing her hairs he rested hand there. "Hmm''

"Veerji forcefully took us away to our farmhouse. I was so scared Maan wanted to come back here, in your arms. But I had no way. That night with help of Maa I escaped but didn't know how to come out from there. And then..''

Her body shook with the thought of that Dhaba, how she could run away from there. She snuggled more in him and told how those men were following her and how she escaped. With every word of her Maan temper was increasing that she could feel with his firm hold around her. But amazingly that firm hold was giving her relax and her heart was also feeling burden free but not entirely because she knew, the biggest truth was yet to reveal which she did not want to tell now. She could understand Maan trauma that just to hear her suffer. what if he knows about Dev! No, she could not take this risk now and so hide this biggest truth.

Maan hatred for Brij reached to that extreme where no one could have reached till now. "I had guessed right!! That was all Brij plan but why!! Brij I will not leave you, you can't escape from me!!! I will never let you live in peace just remember that bas***d because now onward you will not be left to think anything more!!!!!'' Maan mind and heart were screaming like hell!!! Holding Geet in arms he was not there but his soul had already burst out in search of that bas***d.

"Maan!!'' Geet shook him when did not get any response. Maan looked her, her tears filled face and his heart felt alike had layers of emotions were forcing to come out. He hugged her tight.

"I 'm sorry Geet, I m sorry I was not there to save you, to protect you please forgive me!!''

"Maan please don't say like this you were only there who saved me. You don't know but it was you who gave courage me to run and I did only what you had wanted Maan!!''

"Maan if I ask something will you give me'' She raised head and looked. He nodded.

"Please marry me soon Maan I want to be yours only, for ever, so soon that no one can do apart me from you. Please..''

He didn't know what pressurised her to ask this at sudden but he had no heart to ask reason seeing, she was already so stressed.

"Haan Geet'' his one word gave her so much solace that a smile of satisfaction decorated on her lips. With closed eyes she cuddled on him in peace. But Maan had another thought that why Brij did that. Why he wanted her to keep there when he own had married her to him. But this time was no correct as Geet was looking tired.

"You should sleep Geet, you're looking tired'

She nodded with smile and a blush appeared on cheek thinking about passed moments.

Maan took her to couch and made lay down. "Good night '' softly said. She was expecting some more and this was obvious in her eyes. She bowed down lashes when saw Maan was already looking to her. He kissed her both red cheeks

"I love them most Geet because every time, it reflect colour of my love in you. It shows me that how much I am important for you, in your life. Sleep well sweetheart''

And he left to sleep on his bed..


Precap: Maan back in Mansion



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Edited wowww Mona love u yar amazing update
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

😊


hmmm . aaj bhi half sach hi bahar aaya...Super onion smiley 103
Poor Geet kya kare...???Super onion smiley 092
Me too want their jhat pat Shaadi...Super onion smiley 080
What'll happen when Maan get d big blow...Super onion smiley 035
Waiting...Super onion smiley 042

Mona dear.. aaj bhi dry -dry update rahi...Super onion smiley 006
3d smiley 032
theek hai dekh lenge...Cute smiley 078

Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

she told him half truth not dev's part

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Posted: 12 years ago
ithna chutku sa update tha aaj... but a lovely one...


maan being so restless to hear geet was nice... and geet too told him the part of truth which was appropriate for the time being...

sachi yaar... am thinking of maans reaction when he knows about geet...

yes yes jaldi se shaadi karado dono ki... me too waiting for it...



Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😊


hmmm . aaj bhi half sach hi bahar aaya...Super onion smiley 103
Poor Geet kya kare...???Super onion smiley 092
Me too want their jhat pat Shaadi...Super onion smiley 080
What'll happen when Maan get d big blow...Super onion smiley 035
Waiting...Super onion smiley 042

Mona dear.. aaj bhi dry -dry update rahi...Super onion smiley 006
theek hai dekh lenge...Cute smiley 078



dooji aane par bhadaaiya babie ji ...


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