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sweetkj

@sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1081

Originally posted by: dqno1
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Good one Sweety

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sab aapse hi seekh rahe hai.!! 😳

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1082

Finally finished reading chapter 14 and the comments by Shika, Avi and Onir. Itna accha kaise janti hain yeh ladkiya mujhe. They all said that i was like G.😲

And I am. I was nodding my head throughout Ch 14 at G's parts thinking yep I definitely am the meddlesome older sister, always poking my nose into other people's romantic matters and even giving them a push whether its needed or otherwise. 😆 i am on the romance advisory committe of our family. All our cousins know that. Only difference is I always side with the women in the family.😛

This chapter was for me was a nostalgic journey down memory lane in the beginning. Remembered all the sleepovers with friends and discussing the fundamentals of life(at least then), as to who was hot and who was not though it was usually about the boys i college and not actors .😆

Loved Ranbir's dreamy proposal and finally A-A are a couple. Though that abbreviation of their name reminds me of Alcoholics Anonymous(AA)😆

They are totally adorable. Not overly sweet, that you can't bear them. That kind of sudden shift in their relationship would have been weird, and i am glad you did not change much of their relationship dynamics exccept for the kissing part😉

The revolving door, will he compliment or won't he, between Maan and Geet and with G egging him on was hilarious.😆

But I am glad he manned up, mustered his courage and told her she is beautiful Phew!! Now that's progress for our boy.😳

The whole chapter was about them drawing closer and my hear sank when I realized that they only had two months together

But on the other hand that means Maan will have to make his move soon, so I guess in a way that's good.

And Geet's diary makes an appearance again. And I couldn't help but think, what a difference in her writing from the first time when she wrote about Maan, where she was wondering what was so special about his eyes. and now she can see her parchayi in them Progress indeed for your Geet😃

Loved the poem and the shayari BTW.

Alright!! Finally done with commenting on all the chapters, before you post the next one. YAY!!

Now I can bug you for the next one.😆

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1083

THAP THAP THAP

for new thread and update...😊

Aaj mausam hai suhaana...

update aayega yeh hai bahana...

what the, what the, what the...😆

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1084

Originally posted by: dqno1
THAP THAP THAP

for new thread and update...😊

Aaj mausam hai suhaana...

update aayega yeh hai bahana...

what the, what the, what the...😆

😲🤢

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1085

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi
New Thread Khol De...

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Opening it in some time. Shayad. 🤔

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1086

Originally posted by: dqno1

THAP THAP THAP
for new thread and update...😊
Aaj mausam hai suhaana...
update aayega yeh hai bahana...
what the, what the, what the...😆

yeh kya tha ??? 😆

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mayyo

@mayyo

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1087

Originally posted by: dqno1

THAP THAP THAP
for new thread and update...😊
Aaj mausam hai suhaana...
update aayega yeh hai bahana...
what the, what the, what the...😆

Update toh aayega lekin thoda wait karna padega. All good things to those who wait. 😳