THE LOCKET (1) - Page 82

Originally posted by: heytal

Unres my comment

in my first post

😉😆

Originally posted by: dqno1

When the MU is over the story will be over..😕😕

I promise to make it interesting, chalega?

How about lots of little flashbacks to get your Maaneet dose...

their 1st meeting, pehla everything... also Dev-tara... kya bolti hai?

😊

This early update is your compensation for letting me borrow from Winter Sonata.🤗

Originally posted by: dqno1

🤗 Tu humesha jaldi aa jaati hai...🤗

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thank u darling for the early update...

sab chalega jab tak is druggist ko uska maaneet fix milta rahega...

also, u can remove the mu partially na/...he may not know what she thinks of him but Tara ki entry toh ho sakti hai na😉

Originally posted by: heytal

Jhappi pa le Avi

🤗

Fantastic update

finally the puzzle solves

Phew!!!

So my guess was right that Maan had seen Dev and Dadimaa with _ _ _ _ and that was the reason for his pain

Jhalli Geet is a treat to watch

Her endless talking

I really want to see that scene where she goes on and on and Maan just does hmm hmmm😉😆

A slight glimpse of their past was very well mixed with her present updating😳

Waiting eagerly for Maaneet moment☺️

Continue soon

but take rest and don't stress

😃

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thank u darling for the early update...

sab chalega jab tak is druggist ko uska maaneet fix milta rahega...

also, u can remove the mu partially na/...he may not know what she thinks of him but Tara ki entry toh ho sakti hai na😉

Originally posted by: dqno1

oh yes...don't worry on that front...i love good romance between support cast...i am not sure if you read Love and Despair...it had beautiful and most profound Dev-Tara love and even when it was based on original story...butw riter extended beautifully to show Dev and Tara's redemption and rejuvenation of thier relationship...

well getting off track...but anyways I ma all game for Dev-Tara and other pair which is still to get introduced...but one request...we want Maan-Geet not only in past but in present too...so don't stop the story when Maan knows about Tara...let him relaise his mistake...let him try to undertsand feelings of his shy Geet...maybe a little angry and dejected Geet too who will be little mad and little sad at his akdu Maan...a little hide and seek and then their confession...throw in family teasing as well...

I am so excited seeing your writing style and potential of this story...take ur time and visualise ur scenes and please be in no hurry to close it...savour each and every pair...

Done...

but yaar Dev-Tara are very very cute... tikhi mirchi-cool dude romance...

I want to write them too...

Thoda jhell lena please...😊