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Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Update tonight in all probability 😆

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

@Madhu:

First of all Madhu,
to answer your every question, you have every right to voice your views. When you read a book, you tend to have difference of opinion sometimes and you don't understand why the author went about one way etc etc. At times like these I pick up my phone, call a close friend or sister and will eat their brains. Had I got a chance I would have told that to the author itself. The beauty of being a part of fan fiction is, you always have the freedom to speak your mind. Constructive criticism is what would make a writer grow. And I am more than willing to learn from mistakes. So if you think you want to say something, please knock it into my pig head. I give you all the rights and of course you don't need to go formal over me, you are a dear friend of mine too and in hell I am going to take anything seriously😆

By the way nothing in your comment was at least relatively related to the long disclaimer you gave😆
i know i realized that. that's the reason i added dont blame me if the comment contains nothing i mentioned 😳😆

First of all thank you so very much. What I had written two years ago, has been different from what I am writing now I agree, but if the progression is visible, then it is the biggest compliment I can ever get. And regarding your question, I am still the very old Shika (not much old okay?😆)

dont thank me darling. when i see something good i like to let the others know... be it good or bad 😆
I was trying my hand at variety and hence the theme. When I look back I don't want to feel that I wrote similar and predictable stories.

There were few comments which had kept me thinking. I have written a story in another forum just to test the waters there, to test my caliber. I am so much loved in this forum but somewhere I had this feeling that the readership is also out of love. So I wrote something in a forum where I am nothing but a new face.

After the end of the story, there were few readers who said on the lines of "...we have full faith on you...you won't make it a tragedy..." and all. Somewhere it kept me thinking.

Catching a pattern of a known author is easy but I truly felt as a failure when a person who barely got to read my works ended up catching the pulse.

So long story short, I am just trying to test my writing skills and see how serious I can get with this, that's all. I am truly honored with your concern but I am all fine. 🤗

okay darling let me tell u something. being predictable is one thing but to have gained the trust of your reader about ur future storyline is another.

i read this book "How to Read Literature like a Professor" as one of my summer reading back when i was in high school. one of their main points about the story about the hero heroine of any literary piece was that its got only two things really. if you get to the basics its always boy meets girl and either end up together or part ways. how, where, etc these two meet and end up is different but the essence in every piece be it amateur or pro the underlying plot is the same. so when someone says a storyline was predictable, i mean who are we kidding... for ages it has come to be predictable. i mean let's face it we are all humans and come with same set of primitive thinking and past experiences dressed in various avatars but you get to the core its all the same.

but on the other hand when a reader becomes confident of a writer's work and goes ahead to trust the author for shaping a wonderful story, it surely doesnt mean the writer has become predictable it just means he/she has grown to become trustworthy. there are so many authors who make absolutely amazing introductions and have promising storylines only to end up with the most sh**** (excuse my language) endings just because the author felt it would be different.

so my point is, there is really nothing to feel as a failure when a reader trusts you with what you are going to give them. gaining a reader's trust isnt easy as writing a story. its a slow process and in the end if you gain his/her trust, its the best achievement or compliment you can receive.

i felt the transition of present to past was a little abrupt (no dont go changing it i love it the way it is.)

🤣 I really am doing this at your side note in the brackets. You do know me a lot don't you?😆
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You were bulls eye about drifting apart part. You are right. Friendships from kindergarten won't naturally follow till your mid twenties. The transitions in you as a person will play a key role sometimes. While in this case, it was a slow process. First the snapping of a binding thread that was connecting them, second life's ordeals which had bought chasms between the friends. As I said it is a slow process. By the time they realized, the cracks between them had become conspicuous.

Vivan and Tweesha (Vicky and Tweety) are the only characters whose face seemed blurred in my mind's eye. I know how they look like. Just that can't find a perfect face for them. I do have faces for others including Laasya and Tanvi. Though I have another faces for Maan and Geet, I better keep them to myself lest I would be attacked with belans😆
as far as Maaneet are concerned i dont want to know anyone else for their faces. as childish as it sounds i love them too much to even think of other leads 😳😆

If you could please do find me one for Tweesha and one for Vivan. I will give you their description if you wish😆
PM kar i'll see if i can find proper faces. also PM me other character's faces pweese 😃

You asked me why so much melancholy in the story? I will tell you the full version of how this story is born and behind the scenes of this story sometime later, probably at the end of this story but for now I will tell you something. I know your belief about tragedies, I know life has enough tragedies to endure, why get them in stories too. But I always believed fiction is a friend, a teacher which would make you learn, because when you face a problem in your life, you won't every time can take the right decision for you are involved in it. Fiction makes you a third person and let you see sense. We often empathize with characters, sometimes we end up banging our head on the peculiar behavior or a wrong step taken by a character. So anyway long story short, my main motive of writing this story is to show few persons, some of them not tied by any relationships, each having their own demons they are fighting with, but who get tangled in a web of love, and would emerge from the difficulties life had thrown towards them.
Touche... but that doesnt change my theory about the whole sad/sorrowful genre 😆

Love of course doesn't necessarily mean about the ones between the girl and the guy😆
lol of course it doesnt. i never saw it that way. i just meant your definition was fresh 😃

Yes, Tweesha isn't doing it under sympathy or pity. Though there are circumstances which had took them apart, Geet was her best friend once and she can't stop caring for her. If it had been the case...these letters four years back, Tweesha would have gone and shook Geet out of her state and demand answers from her, but since the scene is different now, Tweesha had to adopt different things and means...though i assure you part of it is because of her selfish reasons too. More of it would be explained in the story it self as you go ahead.
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Ha can't resist thalaiva's dialogue now could you?😆
of course how could i... being a fan of super star i ought to show it na 😆

It is me who's honored and blessed to have such friends in life, and you know what Naan Unnai Khadalikkeren😆
ah naanum unnai kaadalikkiren! 😳

Love you so much Madhu🤗

i lub u more! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Added Sarani's picture :)

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

what the?? Rajat Khurana - Mohit Raina? 😲

I love Mohit Raina😆 Besides as I said Maan will be a splitting image of his father. Now showing that literally might be different so anyway yes Mohit is the one

sarani- kriti karbandaa 😳 awww...she looks very cute in this pic.

I had to add some effects. I wanted to increase the innocence hence black and white pic😆

Laasya- hahaha Padmini 😉

Ha, can't resist that😆

daman - 😕

Daman always has a goofy grin on him so this is the guy😆