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Posted: 12 years ago
geet is in love with aryaan and was forced to marry maan
now she plans to lead her own life
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Posted: 12 years ago
for now,it's bad,bt for future it's best.jst feeling sad for maan.becharek SRki saare sapne tut gaye,aur uske saath saath hamaravi...shochithi kuchh hot-shot milega,bt...u knw dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
new FF niceee...
Awesome CS n prologue..its interesting.. superb update.. loved it..
Geet is already in love with someone else, poor maan..
will be waiting for next.. continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

<font color="#ff00ff">geet is in love with aryaan and was forced to marry maan</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">now she plans to lead her own life</font>


ty dear and its AAYAN not aaryan
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Originally posted by: totinee

for now,it's bad,bt for future it's best.jst feeling sad for maan.becharek SRki saare sapne tut gaye,aur uske saath saath hamaravi...shochithi kuchh hot-shot milega,bt...u knw dear...



kabi kabi aisa bhi hota hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishi6226

new FF niceee...
Awesome CS n prologue..its interesting.. superb update.. loved it..
Geet is already in love with someone else, poor maan..
will be waiting for next.. continue soon..


thanx dear :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing fiction with superb concpt waiting for part 2
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PART - 2

MAAN entred again and saw slight panic in her eyes,which disturbs him coz he loved her from the day he saw her pic. He never felt as strong as he feels for this girl. Thats why he commit biggest mistake of his life. Without enquiring enough info or meet her before marriage,he said yes to her. If dont even bother the hurry made by her parents. Dadima also very happy because her grandson finally agreed on a girl so she quite comfortable with every demand of Handas. Maan cursing himself how he act foolish by drooling over an unknown girl about whom he hardly knows anything else but her name. Maan's dream shattred completely but he doesnt want to destroy his family name in from his relatives and media. So he decided to spend this night calmly and then find some sol of this prob.

Maan:look right now KM is full of our relatives and some media pesrons. So dont make a sce here. I promise you we can talk and find some sol about ur prob.but right now its too late,so come and sleep.

Realizing with sinking heart that he was making prepration for bed time,she bite her lip. Resuming his seat,he assured her.

Maan:there is no need to look quite so alarmed. Though we 'll have to share the bed its plenty large enough.

Geet:i dont want to share a bed with you. I cant even bear the thought of laying next to u. And i meant what i said.

She confirmed with a panic in her voice. Hearing the panic in her voice,he assured her firmly.

Maan:dot worry,i wouldn't dream of trying to force you. In fact,i promise not to lay a finger on u unless you want me to. If u come to me it has to b willingly.

Geet:i will nvr do that.

She said with a conviction. His jaws tightend as though she had strick him. Then he shrugged his shoulders.

Maan:ok relax.if u r as much sure about urself then come and sleep. I promised i 'll nvr broke my promise.

Geet was not in mood of trusting him,but seeing no other choice she stepped slowly2 towrds the large bed and sat at the corner. Maan sence her hesitation and fear. He quickly flip to another side and turn off the lights. Geet scared at once then composed herself. Laying next to a complete stranger gave him a detest feeling. She thought as she betraying by doing this. So she took her side pillow and come to a floor and slept there. Maan slant his head and glane her. She is not there on a bed. He raised himself in her search and found her laying on a floor. He falls on his back again without any mor argue with her. Both were laid but sleep is fa away from their eyes. Both were disturbed and impatient. Staying away from their love is tortureos to both. Next day when Sun dawn andd its light start coming from the windows,Maan get up quickly and straight went to washroom. He fresh n up quickly and come out,saw her cuddling in herself. First his heart forced him to scooped her and made her laid on a bed,but then realize about his promise that he wont touch her without her will. His raised hand automatically moved back. Then he took his comforter and tugged her inside its warmth. He leave the room for his gym session. Maan daily follow the same routine. After spending a sweating session he dressed up for his office. Its 9am when he all set to go to a office. Dadima also joined him on breakfast table.

Dadima:good mrng beta wake up on time.(she teased with a wide smile which wrenched his heart more).where is Geet? Abhi kuchh rasme baki hai.

Maan with a fake smile:dadima she is sleeping.

Dadima:abi tak?its alredy 9. Kuchh hi der me relatives aane lagenge mu-dikhai ki rasam k liye or firr pag fere k liye b to jana hai unhe.

Maan:dadima i dont know much about this. Handle this all at your own.

Dadima:ok hum abi jate hai or unhe leke aate hai.

Dadima went from there to awake her,while Maan is losting himself in his office file,biting a crispy toast. Dadima knocked on the door and this sound awake her. She get up and found his comforter on her. She threw it in anger and reached to open the door. Dadima wished her lovingely but she ans her coldly. Dadima feels the coldness of her but she avoids.

Dadima:Geet beta hum apko baki ki rasmo k bare me inform krne aaye the so jaldi se ready hoke neeche aa jiye.

She said ploitly.

Geet:excuseme.shyad apko Apke pote ne kuch btaya nai but i m not intrested in taking part in any ritual related to this marriage. For god sake you both pls leave me alone.

Her words r harsh,rude and loud enough. Maan hears all this and rush to his room. Dadima was in shock too the way she treated with her.

Dadima:kya baat hai beta? Maan ne apse kuch kaha kya?

Geet:for god sake pls can u pls stop torturing me?i wont talk to u.

Maan enters and hear evrything she saying harshlt to dadima,which made his blood boil and towred his anger 100times.

Maan:Geet...

He roared like a wounded lion. Dadima saw his fire smitting eyes and siglned him to stay calm. Maan fist hard but shut as Dadima dont want to create problems btwn them,bcoz of her...
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago
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PART - 3

DADIMA behaved maturally and placed her hand on his stiffed shoulder to make him calm.

Dadima:koi bat nai beta. Naye log hai unhe adjust hone samye to lagega hi.

Geet againg wants to cut her,but Maan's dreadful glare stops her. Dadima left the room and Maan grasped her both arm and shake her badly. He squeezed her as hard as he can to gave her pain.

Maan:how dare u talk like this to Dadima?aaj tak maine kabi unse unchi awaj me baat nai ki and u misbehaved with her. Dont test my patience Geet. Dont take my silence to my weakness. Agar tume kuch keh nai rha hu to iska ye matlb nai hai ki tum sai ho or main galat. Tume itni hi takleef thi to pehle bolna chahiye tha. Main koi tume zabardasti utha kr nai laya hu. Samjhi tum. Chahu to abi apne pati hone ka haq le skta hu. But i m not like those men who take overpowering women as their right. So cooperate with me until i find ur lover. Dont make sce before Dadima. Now go get ready fast and do whatever Dadima wants or else i show u my true colours.

He threat her dreadfully and shaked her to put his words flows in her whole body so she dont make another mess. Somewhere she scared of him and silently moved to washroom. She changed her clothes and came down stairs to attend the remaning rituals. She came with a dead heart so their no sign of happiness and enthusiasim of taking part in any activity showed on her face. Her face is faded and eyes having pain and anger only. Sepration from Aayan killing her every sec. Dadima take a relief breath. Rital of muh dikhai is done peacefully,but with some distraction as many of them noticed her deadly silence and taunts in their style. After they gone Dadima took her to kitchen for some pooja. She followed her but silently.

Dadima:thanx beta aap aa gaye..

Before she completes Geet cuts her words in mid way.

Geet:thanx mujhe nai apne pote se kahiye jisne mujhe yaha dara dhamka k bheja hai. He clearly warns me if i dont follows ur instruction then he will make me pay back.

She said in a taunting way. Dadima's heart sinks at her revelation. She dont understands whats wrong goin between both of them.

Dadima:dekhiye beta hum nai jante ki apki kya narazgi hai.lekin apko yaha koi b kaam kisi dar ki wajhse karne ki koi zarurat nai hai. Maan se hum bat karenge.

Her throat is filled with grief and pain. Her all happiness vanished in air.

Geet:oh yani ek or shikayat.taki wo mujhe ek bar firr se dhamka sake. Bas keejiye aunty. Ap yaha pyar se bolne ka natak karti hai or wo apka pota Maan mujhe aake dhamkiya deta hai. Bit i m not fool who can bear all this silently.

She ans her back harshly and moved from KM to her mansion back for pag fera rasam. Dadima's eyes poured tears. She accqusing her self.

Dadima:hey bhagwan kahi humne apne bachhe ki shadi ki jaldi me koi galat faisla to nai le liya. Itni badi galti humse kaise ho gai.

Whole day she only thinking about Maan's future. In eveng Maan went to HM to pick her up. Geet locked herself in her room. She even dont talk to her parents. Maan enters and met with her parents,who was not able to made eye contact to him.

Maan asked politely:sir sirf ek baat puchna chahta hu.when u know about her decision then y u spoiles our life like this. If i have any idea about this,i 'll nvr say yes for this marriage.

Saksham Handa:i m sorry beat. I know i have done very wrong with u.but my intensions are not wrong.ab ise ek baap ki khudgarzi keh lo ya majbori.apni beti ii zindagi khrab kaise hone deta main us do kodi k ladke Aayan k sath. Mujhe apni beti k secured future k liye jo theek laga wo maine kia.

Maan:lekin in sabme mujhe kyu pees diya?or firr ye zaruri to nai ki Aayan agar paiso me apko match up nai kar skta to wo achha ladka nai hai.

Saksham:dekho bete,ye tum abi nai samjhoge.jis dinn khud ek ladki k baap banoge us dinn tume khud hi samjh aa jayega ki kon achha hai or kon bura. Bas ab main itna chahta hu ki Geet ab tumhari patni hai or rasam k mutabik tum ab use apne sath le jaoge.

Maan:wo to main leke jaunga hi.or ab se uski puri zimmedari bhi meri hai. Aajse apka koi b faisla uske liye manye nahi hoga.

Geet heared everything. She felt more hatred for her parents who forcily imposed this unwanted relationship on her. She came down to went with Maan coz she dont want to live with them also. Mostly girls cried but she felt no pain in leaving HM.

Geet:lets go Maan.

Savita Handa:Geet beta...

She stopped her showing her hand.

Geet:marr chuki hai apki beti.u both killed me on my wedding day. Kal apne meri doli nai arthi vida ki thi.ab mera is ghar se ya apse koi rishta nai hai.

She spit her bitterness on her parents and leave her house without glancing them for once. Her parents joined their hands in front of Maan and apolozising for makin him a part of this. Maan is in dilemma dont know what to say and leave behind her.
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago
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PART -4

BOTH reached to KM. Maan mind is banging with her words she said to her parents. Maan now knows she will not accept him at any cost so keeping her with him is all waste. Both entred and she dont even greet Dadima. Straight went to her room and bang the door behind. Maan and Dadima both hear the sound and taken it a warning. Again a restless night both spend. Next mrng when she opnd her dizzy eyes,some words piercing in her ears. She get up and trying to hear all clealry. Maan is on phone.

Maan:Adi meet me at airport. I m straight reaching there.

He cuts the call and again get involved in packing. Geet is staring him only and remebring last night. After coming from HM when both are alone in thier room,Maan promised her that he will help her in searching Aayan. At now today he is leaving. When he done with his packing he came to her.

Maan:i m leaving India.

He just confirmed shortly.

Geet:lekin tumne to...

She showing her doubts.

Maan:jo kaha tha wo pura b karunga.lekin abi mujhe business tour k liye jana hai.kam se kam 1 mahina lagega wapis ane me. Waise to mujhe tumse koi umeed nai hai lekin ho ske to ye ek mahin yaha ek ache guest ki tarah raho. Sirf itna karna Dadima se durr rehna. Main nahi chahta ki mere pichhe tum unhe koi takleef do.

He said everything without looking at her. Geet opend her mouth to ask somthing but till then he left the room hurridely with his luggage. Maan met Dadima an also make her mind so that she not talk much or forced her for any more rituals. Dadima still unaware of the real truth. But she thinks about Geet and think to gave her time and space until she find comfortable here. Maan left and reached airport,where his PA cum left hand is alredy waiting for him. He passed tickets to him. Adi is most relaible. He can gave his life for him.

Maan:Adi jo kaam btaya hai wo mere lautne tak ho jana chahiye.

Adi nvr met his gaze:ho jayega sir. Apko fikr karne ki zarurat nai hai.

Maan leave Delhi airport. Business tour he arranged only to stay away from her. He dont want to face her evryday. Dadima felt bad for Maaneet as Maan left her newly wed just after one day of marriage for a whole month. Slowly 2 time start passing and her patince level is giving up every day. Although Dadima make distance with her,but being a mother she cant stopped herself completely. Time to time she showing her affection to her. Geet irritates but compressed her feelings as Maan warned her. So most of the time she kept silence to avoid any mess in his absence. 1 month is passed but Maan dont came back. Geet now loosing his patience coz she only had a hope of Maan. She dont have any clue of Aayan right now. After 15 days Maan came back,Dadima is not in KM at that time as,she had to go some distant relative for some reasons. Maan entred in his room like strong stroam. Geet is sitting on bed that time. His face is hard and stiff.

Geet:kaha the tum? 1mahine k bol der mahine k bad aa rae ho.upar se koi contact b nai kiya.

She accqussed him,but Maan paying no attentions on them. He take 1 bag and start filling her clothes in them. Geet was stunned with his behaviour,not able to understand his actions. She asking again and again but Maan not ans her any que. When he done her packing,he clenched her wrist and start dragging her with him.

Geet:Maan stoppit,kaha le ja rae ho mujhe.

Maan still nt ans.her and push her inside the car. He drove car madly. Geet cribbing,scolding but Maan kept with her silence. In few mins they were at airport. Geet was all confused. Maan confirmed the tickets and both sat in plane.

Geet:Maan enogh now can u pls tell me where u r dragging me?

Maan:jaldi hi pata chal jayega.

He said only and again dipped in his long silence. Geet's heart throbbed badly unaware of the coming fear. In few hours their flight lands on Mumbai airport. They come out,where a huge luxurious car is waiting for them. Maan asked for d keys and Driver handover it to him. Maan again push her inside the car and sat behind the wheels. He starts the car and drove it madly again. His forhead is filled with many lines. Jaw clenched and shoulders stiffed. His veins occuring from his skin and knuckles heading hard from his skin as he tughtly gripped the staring wheels. Geet was so amused with his actions and staring her condition. Suddnly he stooped the car with a jerk. Geet's sences came back.

Maan:utro.

Geet:Maan hum kaha aaye hai?

Maan:utro.yahi tumhari manzil hai.

Geet:matlab?

Staring him with doubtful eyes.

Maan:matlab ye ghar Aayan ka hai.

She look outside and found herself in front of a house. After crossing mumbai-pune highway the reached to the final destination,from where her dreamz started and his going shattred down forever. Maan came out with her and also unload her luggage.

Maan:kaha tha na wapis aake apna promise pura karunga. Now go inside. Ab Aayan yahi rehta hai isi ghar me...
Edited by richadhami - 12 years ago

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