mg(os)~~lets check better half~~pt/2 pg/16 19/3 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
as you all know
if bychance you read my note
that i m leaving
so offically my last poem for my self

main jaa rahi hu
iss gulistaan se ek phool toodh kar
jo chal pada tha
murjhaane ke modh par
isse pahle ke
sab chale jaate , ussko chod kar
maine maana
yahi bahtaar hoga ke
chala jaaye woh yeh aangan chod kar


jab main aayi thi
kuch bhi to nahi saath laayi thi
par phir bhi
har roj ,ek naya dost
aur
dheer saari khuhiyaan maine yaha paayi thi
par lagta hai ,
yeh mere saath , bas kuch pal hi rahege
par inki yaade toh ,
banane mera umar bhar ka saath
aayi thi


main alag hu
nahi kaabil tumhaare saath ke
aisa nahi hai ,ke yeh baat
mujhse aaj hi takrai hai
aare yeh to kai baar ,
mere jahan main aayi hai
yeh baat aur hai ke
aaj maine yh apnai hai
toh yaha e chale jaane ki raah
mujhe bahtaar nazar aayi hai


ok guys
i you want than
please tell me meri lasst poem kasi hai
i willl read
and i really love you all
and
i will miss my friends alot
bye
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

as you all know

if bychance you read my note
that i m leaving
so offically my last poem for my self

main jaa rahi hu
iss gulistaan se ek phool toodh kar
jo chal pada tha
murjhaane ke modh par
isse pahle ke
sab chale jaate , ussko chod kar
maine maana
yahi bahtaar hoga ke
chala jaaye woh yeh aangan chod kar


u r making me cry 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

i know u r going to come back for us for ur poems for ur readers for ur IF family
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: lovesia

plz comment soon

ur not replying making me feel guilty
i was just trying to say ki yeh na hi aapka last update hoga
nahi mera last long comment


hy dear
don't feel guilty yaar
me ok
with no comment also

as i knew
you love my work

and please don't feel guilty
as my husband say
abhi main jinda hu mari nahi😉😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


hy dear
don't feel guilty yaar
me ok
with no comment also

as i knew
you love my work

and please don't feel guilty
as my husband say
abhi main jinda hu mari nahi😉😃


but i thought i made u sad with my comment

nd yes i love ur work too much

hey don't say like that😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: lovesia


but i thought i made u sad with my comment

nd yes i love ur work too much

hey don't say like that😡


tell you one thing
it' your jiju's punch line😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

😊did any one here want update

before i leave the if.

main tera sar phad dongi😡😡...
koi LAST TIME nahi hai😡...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
@ lovesia : poem complete
read it now
---nishu--- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sona-rai

main tera sar phad dongi😡😡...
koi LAST TIME nahi hai😡...


last page par poem read kar
kya mast likhi hai maine

mere liye😉😉

puri senti ho gayi thi main
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

as you all know

if bychance you read my note
that i m leaving
so offically my last poem for my self

main jaa rahi hu
iss gulistaan se ek phool toodh kar
jo chal pada tha
murjhaane ke modh par
isse pahle ke
sab chale jaate , ussko chod kar
maine maana
yahi bahtaar hoga ke
chala jaaye woh yeh aangan chod kar


jab main aayi thi
kuch bhi to nahi saath laayi thi
par phir bhi
har roj ,ek naya dost
aur
dheer saari khuhiyaan maine yaha paayi thi
par lagta hai ,
yeh mere saath , bas kuch pal hi rahege
par inki yaade toh ,
banane mera umar bhar ka saath
aayi thi


main alag hu
nahi kaabil tumhaare saath ke
aisa nahi hai ,ke yeh baat
mujhse aaj hi takrai hai
aare yeh to kai baar ,
mere jahan main aayi hai
yeh baat aur hai ke
aaj maine yh apnai hai
toh yaha e chale jaane ki raah
mujhe bahtaar nazar aayi hai


ok guys
i you want than
please tell me meri lasst poem kasi hai
i willl read
and i really love you all
and
i will miss my friends alot
bye

i hate it NISHU...
aur main tujhay BYE nahi kehnay dongi😡ker le jo kerna hai😡😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
sona tujhe saachi merti poem buri lagi

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