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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



mona ko mood main laaane ka iraada hai!


Sachchi...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay all listen please ..

From tomorrow many guests are coming for Holi fest & for whole week they will stay. So can be possible that from tomorrow would not give daily update till they leave.
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Heartily thanks to those who read, liked and commented for me 😊

( As i will update this FF almost daily, i could not be able PM for it. so please check yourself every night. Its my sincere request )


(Please see above post for small note)


Part 54

Geet!!!!

Brij temper reached on extreme. In every room, every corners, everywhere he was searching her like insane. His eyes had madness, face had fume, and whole body was vibrating in anger.

Hearing his yell Daarji and Rano awaken and runs to him. Though Rano knew everything, she had to act as same as them. She too came out to Brij holding her head,

What happened Brij" she groaned with ache. Why are you shouting?

Brij who had sensed that Geet was eluded, his eyes fell on Rano and he walked to her in anger. Rano got scared seeing his fuming but she tried to be normal, for her daughter sake.

Brij knew Geet could not escape alone and must be there someone who helped her. it could not be any one else than Rano, who was Geet s only sympathizer.

Where is Geet Maa!!!!""

He leaded to her ravingly. His fury had no bound and Rano heart was going to come out in fear when they heard knock on door.

Brij Paaji!! Are you inside!!!"

The man with Dev was still waiting for Brij, called him again hearing Brij shout from inside. Brij legs stopped rising to Rano and he gave her deadly glare and left to open door.

Brij found his man with Dev. He gestured them to come inside when man indicated Brij to stop. He could not talk in front of Dev. Brij told Dev to head inside and he came out with man. When Brij had been told about Geet he shocked!! Without wasting a minute he rushed inside, said Rano to take care of Dev and he left for bringing Geet back.

He reached where another man was dozing, sitting on chair, before of closed door.

Oyee! Wake up!! "" Brij shook him. "Where is she!!'

Man unlocked door and let Brij go inside and in no time they heard his roar...

Where the hell she is!!!"

Both men run inside and found it empty. They were shocked as how it can be possible. He was there for whole night and it could not be easy to escape before his eyes but nothing could be done now. Brij came haveli back with empty hands..

##

In Haveli, Dev comes to rano and jointed hands in greet.

"namaste''

Before he could touch her feet she drew back in anger. Her eyes had hatred and Dev could recognize it. He understood she knew something but had no courage to ask or talk. He was stood silent bending head down where as Rano did not want to see him for a minute before her eyes. He was the man who made Geet life hell and she could not forgive him. Before leaving Geet had told everything to her and she hated his presence around, in her house.

"Thank you Babaji you saved my Geet from his dirty hands!!'' she prayed in heart for letting Geet escaped on correct time'

##

Brij came back and his anger had risen beyond limit. Geet had slipped from his hand and so was his deal with Dev and this made him mad. Without thinking a bit he rushed to Rano thinking she must have been knowing where Geet was and his hand was to raise on her when Daarji interfered in between.

"What are you doing Brij!!!'' he shouted.

Dev was hell shocked seeing this all and he had no idea what was happening until Brij yelled

"Daarji asked her where is Geet!!''

"Geet?'' Dev mind started questioning.

Before Brij could take next move Dev held his collar shouting..

"Where is Geet Brij!!! What you did with her???''

Brij eyes gazed his clutched collar and then to Dev'


##

Maan and Geet reached Delhi in morning. Though Maan insisted to go mansion but Geet was not ready. She wanted Maan to go hospital and take complete treatment what he had left in middle for her.

"Geet I am fine I had told you already. Why are you being stubborn haan!!" He said irritated.

"If I am being stubborn Maan then what you are doing haan!!" She was over irritated.

I will not go hospital and that is final"

"Alright!! I know you won't agree on me anyway so do whatever you like!'' She turned face aside in anger with moist eyes.

"I know she will again start cry'' Maan thought when saw her turning face away and quiet. He waited for few minutes but when she did not respond..

Geet!!" He called softly..

. "Geet!!" again he spoke when she was not replying..

"What!!!" She yelled.

Nothing!!" He dint say further sensing she was hell angry but least he knew it was not her anger but her worry for him.

Geet realized car stopped but in frustration she did not see the place. She moved out thinking they were in mansion but shocked to see, it was hospital. She looked to other side instantly where Maan was trying to come out from car but his body was aching and he was trembling. She runs to him and held for support.

Maan aaram se!" She took his entire weight on her shoulder and tried to make him walk. Looking her struggling Maan eyes did not leave her sight for a second. He could see how much she was having problem to balance his heavy and masculine body but she was totally engrossed in his comfort. She held him from waist with one hand carefully and balanced his one arm around her shoulder, holding it with care.

"Are you happy now Geet!!' He looked her captive. Her worry for him, care for him was everything he always wanted to have in life and today it was being fulfilled. He could see the love in her for him and this was taking him on seventh heaven.

Geet stared him back. She smiled and nodded. " Ji"

He smiled back and they walked further. Maan tried not to give his weight on her but she wanted him to feel comfort, not to carry his weight himself when his whole body was aching. He trembled in between, she held tight from his waist and this made Maan become a little naughty. He knowingly was making his walk unbalanced and Geet hold was becoming firmer and more protective in result.

"Maan walk slowly na, why are you hurrying up!!''

"What I'm doing Geet! You are not doing your job properly!

"Ohh sorry!!'' she thought it was giving him discomfort and tried to enfold him more properly.

Wait a minute Geet!'' Maan stopped. She looked him confused.

"Look I show you how to hold someone in this situation okay!!' he stopped, made her stand straight.

"Now bring you hand here and held me Geet!'' He grab her both hands and settled around his waist. Her arms surrounded him on waist, fitted like a stitched material on his body.

"And now like this..'' He encircled his arms around her waist and pulled her closer in jerk..

"Now see!! This is the proper method Geet !!'' he whisper..

"Maan what are you doing!!'' Geet shocked to find them in almost hugging position. She revealed little realizing it was parking area and very less people were roaming around.

"Leave me!! Everyone is looking here only Maan'' she was feeling embraced

"there is no one'' he breathed coming closer n more closer made her bend backward with big eyes and then she pushed him back at once.

"Maan I guess you are fine now so walk yourself. I am going inside!!''

She said and runs inside almost grinning in shy when Maan followed her shouting..

"Oo Geet wait!! Geet '

"Nahi!!''

"Geet rukoo!!

"No!!''

"Oo Geet!!''

"Dadimaa!!!'' Both stopped at once on the spot..

Found Dadi was stood there, crossing her arms on chest and covering anger on face.. Staring them with her big eyes..


Precap: "Maan you take rest. Me and Geet will come back in morning ''


"Geet is not going anywhere Dadima!!'' he exclaimed ..



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Dear Mona ye aapke liye Ishaara hei...



mona tho lagtha hai pics ke maze le rahi hai... update ka naam o nishaan nahi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


hiii payalll .. how z exam

exams tu kab ki khatam hogayi na 😆 tujhi kya hua phirse bhul gayi kya 🤢
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😛

smiley: Smileyflowers - keystrokes: //flowers
Hmmm..Ab Brij kya karega...??? smiley: 13pensando - keystrokes: //scratch
Dev se kya hope karen...???smiley: 13pensando - keystrokes: //scratch
Darji bhi pata nahi kiski side hei...???smiley: 13pensando - keystrokes: //scratch
Rano act very well...
So Maaneet Delhi aa gaye...WOW!!! smiley: Addemoticons09735 - keystrokes: //party
Romance in hospital...smiley: 26 - keystrokes: //beeheart
Maan is in full mood ... smiley: Lol1 - keystrokes: //giggle
Dadima plzzz KMH mat bano...smiley: Thdoh - keystrokes: //doh
nice precap..smiley: Addemoticons0425 - keystrokes: //heartthrob
Waiting...smiley: Addemoticons09718 - keystrokes: //happyheart


Precap: "Maan you take rest. Me and Geet will come back in morning ''


"Geet is not going anywhere Dadima!!'' he exclaimed ..



smiley: Thankyoutextfadeout_take - keystrokes: //flashty smiley: Moon - keystrokes: //moonstar


Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomr update
waiting for next
dadi is angry with Maaneet
lovely Maaneet
Dev in HP
cont soon please

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