If Only You Saw Me (6) - Page 111

Originally posted by: patikaddi76

nice and very good ff, thanks for writing this ff, waiting for more chapters, and more ffs from you,
all the best, thank you so much😊

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

I just realized I never edited this comment. Shoot me.

Never mind!
Edited:

So, Ranbir didn't run away after all. I don't know why we thought him to be a run away groom but oh well seems he's smarter and faster. While Maan blushes at the mere mention of Geet or teasing by his family, Ranbir on the other hand seems all the more eager to be a part of teasing which by the way never comes his way. 😆
Maan should be whacked on head, situation ka faida utha ke thoda leg pulling karna bhi aata nahi isey, buddhu kahinka.
Yeah, he definitely needs to learn something from his elder brother!😆
The anxiety he felt at the mention of his mother's accident was palpable. Though knowing that the other person is fine, you still wish to see them once, and have them around to make sure, and that feeling is portrayed beautifully here. I loved when he snuggled next to her and slept. That made me aww.
You're the only one who has mentioned this sleeping incident. 😊
So at last we have Anaya and Geet talk and yay yay yay, I am right all along. And guess what I am surprised to see Anaya not even able to complete love word. Trust me had it been one of my friends they would be happily and freely talking about these things, and worse things😆 but maybe that's us besharams😆
Yayy!! You were right awwll alawng! 😆

I'm only happy because Ayush won't have to face a heartbreak, I tell myself. There's no other reason. Or... is there?


No wonder I was grinning like a stupid fool like always😆
Now at this point of the story I am really glad that you continued this story not leaving it as a OS, or not posting at all. You see this story, more than a story would always be a learning lesson for me. How fiction isn't far away from life, and how things can be kept realistic and kept beautiful at the same time. The way you showed a slow progress in their relationship, the way she bonds with his family and friends, being a major part of his life in every way, is beautiful. Thanks for writing this Yummy yum

Thank you all for putting up with me! 🤗

Originally posted by: heytal

That was a shocker

first I thought arre yeh kya hogaya😲

Maaneet ke budding romance mein break na aa jaaye

but they say na troubled times make your relation more stronger

Geet's support and did stir something deep in him😳

Yes, troubled times test and strengthen relationships...

All of them go home was so touching their moments with Maan's mom

Geet's ease around his mother all so well penned down

Ranbir finally gets his girl and Maan's mom instantly gels with her

so all is set😉

Ranbir was fast! 😆

Truly this accident did bring them all more close

Geet has let her guards down and taking an initiative to interact freely with everybody around.

Whatever happens is for the better...

I'm glad that Geet spoke to Anaya and helped them to resolve their miscommunication

Finally Anaya - Ayush will be together😊

At least there won't be any Anaya between Maan and Geet! 😆

The brother to brother talk was cute😛

So party time

😉

Maari no redwala face for this update check

but I want some Maaneet moments in the next update

that too romantic☺️

Maaneet moments are real tricky to write! I don't know how you all do it! 😆

Superb update Maari

Loved it very much

😃

Thanks Heytal!

Continue soon I'm waiting

Just updated! 😊

Originally posted by: Susegad

Finally, finally I made it here. Phewww!! Man trying to play catch up on all the stories. But its fun, coz i get to read 3-4 chapters all at once.😃

Aaj aram se baithke padha maine chapters padhe.

I know how hard it is to play catch up! I've been doing that going around the stories that I read and I still have at least two more updates. 🤔

Ok going to give short comments ...I think

Chapter 11

I think I have ranted enough about Jesse, so I'm not going to say much about her.😆

But on the other hand I loved how you compensated for that by giving us Maan and Geet' first meeting😳

Phew! I was almost prepared for another scolding. 😆
But now you know why the girl he fell on couldn't be Geet. 😃

'If I weren't married, I'd wish it was me rather than that girl.'

G honey, I totally understand and emapthize with you.

I love G. I breathe G. I think I am G. Am I G?😆

Khud toh kuch karti nahi, mauka mila toh bhi bhaag jaati hain, then why does Geet have to glare at G for her awesome comment.. Huh!!

Not only you, even Avi and Onir can relate you and G. 😆
About Geet, she works on the three principles: 'bura mat dekho, bura mat bolo, bura mat suno'. 😆

I love Ryan. Kids are the best icebreakers and infamous for putting adults into the most awkward situations. Talking from personal experience.

I don't remember the circumstances under which it happened, but I remember my cousin's 5 year old,(hated her in that moment though) flipping my skirt in front of the man who is now my husband. I thought I was going to die of embarrassment and my husband doesn't let me forget it, to this day.😡

That must have been hell embarrassing. To this day! 😆
By the way, kisi doosre pe aaye toh 'kids are the best icebreakers' aur apne pe aaye toh 'hated her at that moment'. 😆

Ahhh, I loved how you described, every feeling, every nuance of emotion that they are going through. It makes the characters come alive in a whole new way.

Let me take a bow. 😳

There are too many under currents and hidden glances passed at each other, for it to be a casual friendship as Geet calls it. Do casual friends have "strange buzz" passing between their eyes I wonder?

I wouldn't have called them casual friends. At least not at this stage. For Geet, they were then formal friends standing at the fork and trying to decide which path to take...

I knew the moment Anaya spoke so casually about her crush on Maan that she no longer feels the same. Waiting to see how Geet's misunderstanding will be cleared.

Can't present crushes be talked about casually? 😉

A college trip. How wonderful and nostalgic. I want to plant a smacking kiss on the deans balding head for this wonderful idea and smack Mayyo's bum coz I'm sure itne khoobsoorat mahol mein bhi she will.😡... I 'm not saying it. I might jinx it. Let me go read it.

Don't you know me so well! 😆

I love the Maan who forgoes doing the proper thing and eavesdrops on Geet's conversation. Goes to show how much he cares and is curious about her. It is easy to follow the rules when your heart is not involved and it is even easier to bend the rules when your heart is involved. We justify a lot of crazy things we'd never even dream of doing under normal circumstances.😳

Yes we do. Especially when our heart is involved, we can't seem to get our rules straight. 😳

Ahh this was supposed to be a short comment😲I wonder if I can ever write one of those. But such a wonderful update definitely needed to be slowly savored and reflected upon.

Loved it Mayyo, Mayyo.😳

Na na karte bhi lamba ho hi jata hai and I understand that too well! 😆
But really happy to know that you liked it! 😊

Originally posted by: dqno1

GM 🤗

Originally posted by: Susegad

Chapter 12

Let's see. This chapter made the feelings between Anaya and Ayush a whole lot clearer. at least to me,if not to Geet. Mayyo. I swear, this Geet is fashioned after you, no matter how much ever you deny it.

I never denied it. In fact, it was in reply to your comment that I accepted that she has a lot of things that I do but not completely.
"It's normal for friends to hold hands, isn't it?

If Geet feels that is so, than why does she,

"As we eat, my right arm brushes against her left and she pulls away slightly."

Isn't she "casual friends" with Maan, than why did she draw away. Hey bhagwan iss ladki ki tubelight kab jalegi.

Also, he clearly described the kind of girl he likes. Geet knows that it sounds exactly like her, phir bhiyeh ladki. Tsk, tsk, tsk.

That's what she likes to believe: that her and Maan are just 'casual friends'. Ab sach toh aap aur main dono hi jaante hain! 😳

I loved the adorkable, Ayush in this whole chapter. From his silly attention seeking arguments with Anaya, to his lift trick that he pulled for his friend, to his ghost stories and his pranks. He is one of those side characters, you don't actually pay much attention to at first and by the time you realize it, you have fallen for this crazy fellow. I think this is exactly how Anaya fell for him too.😆

Was tu meant to be 'adorable' ya you actually meant 'adorkable'? 😆
Yep, hard not to fall for such people.

Then there is Jess. You know, I was actually feeling sympathy for her after she fell of the horse, but then she opened her big fat mouth and ruined it all.😡Though I'm glad she was there at the trip. She only managed to bring them closer and I loved Geet's reply. I love the self confidence she shows, except where Maan is concerned, but that's understandable. She is not thinking logically as far as he is concerned.

There was only one person who was thinking on these lines all the time, that Jess' presence will actually be beneficial for these two, but thank goodness you accepted it too! 😆

Ayush gave them such a wonderful chance to be in the lift together, destiny herself gave them another one, by stopping the lift and all aur yeh dono, ended up playing word chain🤣

Though I loved the "chup bilkul chup"😳

Did you actually think that the shareef guy Maan will do anything even when they were alone and stuck in a lift? 😆

I once again fel for Ayush. His public spin the bottle confession was fantastic, though I guess Anaya needs sometime to digest that. Waiting eagerly to see how these two are going to resolve things between them.😳

Yes, the confession was sudden and so she needs time, but I couldn't stop Ayush from confessing in his own sweet way. 😳

Ahh! Mr. Darcy, The age old romantic hero, after whom all modern day romantic heroes have been fashioned😳

But for his imperfections there would be no Pride and Prejudice.

My most favorite part of today's update was the whole dialogue about Mr. Darcy. I loved how you put it, and agree with it 100%.👏

I wish I had consulted even crazier Darcy fans before writing that up so it could've turned out better.

Aww, finally some progress, though geet is unaware of it, She ended up sleeping on his shoulder and Ayush has the evidence. I wonder if that pic will pop up at some time.

You'd like that picture to come up again? 😉

Aah this was such a wonderful update, with Maan and Geet moving closer, slowly but surely.

Now running off to read why Maan was shocked.

Glad you liked it. I was very unsure of how the trip would actually turn out. 😊