Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love - THREAD 3 - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb part...
Poor maneet...loved the update...
Wonder who slapped maan???
Geets dad or sm1 else...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow 😲

so much happened. first Maan became brave enough and decided to talk to his dad . Himself instead of pointing or looking towards daadima aur his mom.

his dad willing to listen. everything was going in favor but see finally it all had to come unveiled to Geet's dad

poor Geet crying and running to embrace Maan ,her dearest possession, her love and Maan trying to know the reason of her crying

and finally the drop scene. Maan facing Geet's dad😭 his reaction and the ultimate slap he gave to Maan

i dont know what u have decided. i think Maan respects Geet's family so he will not harshly or rudely react to the rude behavior of Geet's dad because probably that would make things go worse than they already are (as if they already are not 😭 )

this part made me really sad because yesterday i was really down when i read it. and today also was a very emotional day for me 😭 its not my habit but lately i have been crying like a teeny girl sad me :(

well written both parts and i hope the next one will also be a longer one

the precap seems interesting and yet im too apprehensive as to what will now follow 😲

waiting for the update. i hope it comes tmrw😊

keep up the good work .

plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
was missing dis FF a lot but all thanks to my net dat i had to miss d updates 4 a while... srry 4 d late comments... finally read both d parts...
i'm happie as welll as more sad obivously itna rona dhona hona wala hai & d precap OMG its 😭
d parts wer amazing ahhh loved d way natasha interrogated maan lolz... worth watching scene...
dadi is just gr8 yaar wat a plan to make maan confess... & wat a drama awesome it was too hilarious wen dey teased him with d name of pinky... & with d precap i thought sumwer maan's dad was going to slap him... but yahan toh sab kuch ulta hi ho gaya present kab aayega,... next part actually it was shocking to c maan talking to his dad i mean he really wanted to share dis thing all by him self...
hopefully his father will help him... fingers crossed... & jaldi ghum k badal nikal jayen...
👏👏👏 superb writing...

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 47
nice part...
oh no her dad is here...
OMG he slapped Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
watingwatingwating please update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Teaser

Natasha was in the kitchen, lighting the dia to take the aarti for the two, when she heard a loud shriek of her mother in law followed by her husband's shouting voice

She ran quickly with the aarti thali in her hand and came out of the kitchen, but stopped in middle to see person in front of her eyes. And there her aarti also all down from her hands


WHO'S THE PERSON, ANOTHER STORM COMING ON KHURANA FAMILY?


next update on Page 100


MUST , do check the note below


You've all known me for so long and stuck by me and hope to have your support. I want to explain my view on this.

Though i tried to skip the new plot, but its continuously coming in my vision, n trust me the concept is also disturbing me in my uni lectures and quizzes as well 😕

The main reason that i want tht plot to apply here is, i will not write anymore new stories, so vl nvr be able to write it and my idea vl alws keep poking me in near future. So yes I decided to keep that plot also in Sargoshiyan

I cannot tell with conformity whether the story will end with a happy or sad ending, but all i can say to u all that, trust me, more than u all, i love this story, cause its something that i can do for our maaneet, and its something i will always cherish in my lifetime as its the first time i actually pen down something regarding maaneet, well its my first and last story as well

I want my readers to have the faith on me. I will not do any injustice with my story, and will want u all to give me the freedom to pen down my ideas in Sargoshiyan.

Those who have faith on me, will tell u to keep reading, being a writer I think I do have the liberty to add twists and turn on my creation, so just trust me, you guyz will like the story, that's what I can say for now. and yes i do appreciate all ur views as i'm writing for u all indeed


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Posted: 11 years ago
ur teaser has created a suspense...whatever maybe the twist just wish to have a happy ending for maaneet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME TEASER

AND DONT WORRY - WE TRUST YOU AND LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEW TRACK
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you for the note...dont worry we are with you...please take the story where you want it to go...
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Posted: 11 years ago
dear...😛
4 Pming me dear..😛.
ur updates r just .⭐️..
me just .😳...
keep the job up dear..👏..





keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama



P.S.S.: I Give u all Dhamki Last Time.. if u guys not comment on my creations.. next time..if like or not..m not giving any comment on urs too...Yaar..m also Human..don't think me as only commenter also as friend😲😕 & Mean It






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