Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love - THREAD 3 - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww!!!
maaneet first kisss😉
waiting!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hot hott teaser.egarly waiting pls update tommrrow soon.
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Edited by Ru_21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi Sam :) im back from my long break
read all the parts i had missed out ,and thank u so much for the PMs every time girl 🤗

i got hooked to ur story a few months ago and i remember i probably mentioned to u earlier as well that i read all the parts posted till then, in just one or two days . you were not giving updates for a while still the concept was so good it stayed in my mind. i have been following many other MG FFs but i remembered yours even if no fresh updates were coming. only because of the concept and the storyline. i loved how Maan went with a fake identity to Geet's house and how he and Geet grew closer and she finally found his real identity. and when they met again in Mumbai. and how things are proceeding from there onwards

you will be going next month for ur studies and you wont be able to bring anymore stories to us as u mentioned. but i have to request u girl, please dont give me a sad memory :( i know its ur story u might do anything but believe me, i love it and will love it more and will remember it if it meets a happy end. the exact thing which kept me glued all the while is the apprehension i have with regard to the reaction from Geet's father when he finds out Maan's identity and im so happily looking forward to Maaneet happily uniting forever.

i loved the teaser as well. indeed full of suspense 😉
so Maan is trying to make Geet happy before she leaves for Delhi again with all the fears in her heart of her father's reaction and the sadness of going away from her love.

please make it end happily 😭 i request again

looking forward to happy times for my Maaneet

update soon please😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all, i was too honest to unfold that i was thinking about changing the story plot with a sad ending, but my readers are too gunda type to threaten me with so many statement. come on guyz i just told u my plan and asked what u all want, and you guyz were ready to stop reading, well its not a good reply, thts all i can say
Thanx to all of you who commented, here replying some of your comments...


@rashmivaish: its totally up to you, i can't req u to reading my story dear, u r free to take decision 😊

@deepthich: Nice guess honey 😃

@...RIDDHIMA...: ahhh, that what reaction i wanted from all of my readers 😆to trust on me, but alas, people here are too bad to think that i will do something bad with my own story

@sweetsampa39: i can't write after this month even if i want to sweety, cz i will be in my last semester as well as will be stuck in all the procedures for gng abroad 4 my post graduations

@HNosheen: im glad tht u r back n reading sargoshiyan, will be looking forward for MORE big comments in future 😆


Apart from them, ALL OF UR COMMENTS WERE FOR HAPPY ENDING, SO WILL STICK ON MY PREVIOUS PLAN WHICH MEANS A HAPPY ENDING 😊

Thank you ALL who pressed the LIKE button as well 😃

The following 67 member(s) liked the above post:

LACHUMANEET, LilMissPerfect, honeyboney1, kashmaaneet, maltisokhal, Adheenadon,


Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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From onward , will not send any PM, its time consuming for me to send PM to 140 people n in return getting only 60/70 likes, Anyways, as i have only one month left, so i will update every parts within 2 days of previous update, that means you guyz will get 3/4 updates in one week. the parts will be not that much big, but u all will get updates regularly 😊
So check my story thread, or for FB user, check MG FF Writers group or Geet-Beginning of a new Era Page




Thnx a lot Shruthe Diii for this awesome blossom banner... its just what i always tried to portray my story in short 🤗

Part 45

They started to talk about many things, in one topic where geet said that she started to love romantic novels, maan whispered near Geet's ear hoarsely

Maan: I wanted give you something jaan, will you allow me?

Geet could feel his breath on her earlobe, she didn't reply in shyness and just nodded her head in acceptance

Maan smiled to see this avatar, now days the bold Geet Handa who used to say loudly that she will marry the Maan Singh Khurana, is even shy to talk while looking directly at him, when she is actually his girlfriend now

Maan: I'm waiting Geet

Geet: waise what are you going to give me

Maan: you need to leave your shyness behind and look at me, only then im going to give you that

Geet: ye kaise baat hui

Geet asked while turning towards him while making a confused face, she looked at him and saw his darken eyes looking at her lips. Geet smiled shyly and started chewing her lower lips absent mindedly.

Maan: geet don't do it, or you will regret

Geet did the same thing more seductively while smiling naughtily

Maan put his hands inside her tops and caressed her waist lightly while gluing her soft chest with his hard one completely

Maannn..nn, Geet moaned feeling his body this much closely

Maan cupped her face with his one hand and slowly stroked her right cheek with his thumb, while other hand was still inside her tops softly creasing.


Geet entwined her hands around Maan's neck. Maan bumped his nose with her nose instead of kissing her and saw a frown occurred in her face

He smiled and slowly touched the corner of her lips with his. Both were totally naive on this matter. Geet felt small kiss in one side of her lips, then again on another side of her lips, and then maan kissed her more deeply on the middle of her lips.

Then Geet felt some butterfly dancing inside her tummy when maan's tongue touched her lips softly, she moaned and came closer while tightening her holds on around Maan's neck.

Whereas Maan's feelings were not less, just by the slightest touch of her soft pink lips creating havoc inside him and he felt himself getting hard

He bites softly which made geet to open her lips, and then both of their tongue came in contact with each other. Neither of them knew who did what first but both of their tongues played on their own way. Maan angled her face and deepened the kiss.


Her nails dug in his neck makin him groan and he hungrily suck her lips n tongue. she moaned and pull him by his hair pressing herself more to him. He caresses her lips with his tongue and last time with his lips before pulling away. Geet felt Maan pressing a soft peck on her forehead and shyly hugged him tightly

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Maan stopped the car near Geet's hostel gate

Geet: I'm late today, I just hope that hyper angry lady will not noticed me missing

Maan: relax geet, pinky will manage

Geet: haan, so that she can happily taunt me all night long

Maan chuckled at her mimic and pulled her closer to himself

Maan: now give me one proper good night

Maan asked huskily

Geet: babu control now, we are in public

Maan: accha to beach was private place

Maan asked in a naughty voice to which Geet nodded her head grinning sheepishly

Maan kissed on her forehead and wished her good night. She unlocked the door to go out when all of a sudden turned and placed one gentle peck on Maan's lips

Geet: Good night pucchu

She wished and ran away hurriedly making Maan numb. After like 5 minutes, Maan understand what his little woman actually did. Maan grinned like a fool at his Jaan's naughtiness

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Maan entered his house like a thief concentrated not to make any noise. He sighed in relief after reaching near the stairs and put his foots on the 1st stair when the hall room's light went on. He turned and found Natasha with an angry no no in a very angry avatar

Maan: geet ki babaji, today you are the only one to save me

Maan mimicked while started to walk near his mother

Maan: mom you didn't sleep?

Natasha: did you check the time Maan? And is it a right time of a good boy to return home?

Maan knotted his brow and said to himself,

Maan: seems like it's my dad, not my soft mom, jarur dad ka bhoot ghuss gaya mom pe

Natasha: shut up maan, and stop thinking against your dad for once. It's not like he shout on you for his own benefit

Maan: mom I just went with Adi and

Natasha: no Maan enough of you're lying, and yes I had a talk with Mrs. Kashyap and she informed Aditya was in home, not will you care to explain Mr. Maan Singh Khurana

Precap: Fass Gaya Maan Babu


So how was Maaneet's 1st kiss? liked it or not? its my very 1st time to write something intimate, so nervous while posting. muaah to my fluffy pie (Tich Mg) for helping me in chumbon drissho 😆

Will not for LIKES N COMMENTS anymore, as this is my last month here, now its up to my readers to prove themselves to be sincere enough to like n comment after reading 😉 😆


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Edited by Dipti_Sam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just fab update...
n i need a happy ending samhe >_<

n mein bolu want maan wants 😉

update soon

waiting :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww their first kiss was sho shweet. me blushing ☺️☺️

Maan is so naughty 😆 and poor Geet has to endure Maan first n then Pinky who teases her😆
i loved the way she gave him the goodnight kiss awww. heheheh

and finally Maan getting caught 😆 and his angry mom . tch tch! 😲
now im more apprehensive as to what will happen 😲

update soon
and oh, ur reply made me happy 😃 u liked my comment thankooo🤗

its ok even if u cant send PMs, i regularly check in at the thread. i wont miss the updates😃

continue soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh and one more thing

u said u will give it a happy end

thank u 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haayyeee...yeh update was full ahe ahem types...
shona writing Kissy wishhy ahannn 😉

maan bichara fassgaya
ab natasha ko kaise bilenge
lets c aage aage hota hai kya

waiting . jaldi dena.

luv
vanshi :*

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