first of all sorry being so late..my hand was injured so wasn't able to type..!!
Now comes to story i thoughrly enjoyed reading it..felt bad foe GEET that how she was feeling guilty for her frnd's death..!
MAAN's parents tricked him for marriage...and GEET being a child was lost in her dreamland hehehehe..
I loved the part where GEET was literally running while taking phere hehehe..
MAAN took care of GEET's innocence very well..he was always there for her..
Oh it was hillarious the way GEET told MAAN to enaft their SR ??
Poor MAAN was feeling embarresed ;);) hehehehehehe
Then came MAANEET leaving abroad for MAAN's studies..awww MAAN took GEET with him so she doesn't get depressed again..
then GEET k questions about kiss =)HEHEHE
GEET again made MAAN embarassed again..
Their frst kiss *wink wink* it was all b'fully described..
Oops! GEET's father got ill..then MAAN returning aftr five yrs and GEET meeting him after 5 years.?
I have a doubt GEET doesn't went bck for her studies.? She was staying in india.? Why.? Because of her parents death.??
I loved that airport hug wala scene where both were lost in each other forgetting about world around them..it so cute moment...it showed how much they missed each other ??
Awww...
Maan's teasing was on full swing it was b'fully written...
GEET's innocense is plus point of their relation...
Finally...
GEET ne sab kuch seekh liya SR k baare mei :P :P
i loved the thot of MAANEET's remarriage on their anniversay..
aggrrrhhh...
why the hell nikki was creating prob..
can't she understand that marriage cant happen in just 3 pheras..
finally MAANEET got married and left for honeymoon away from that witch nikki...
again HONEYMOON parts were beautifully written...
it showed how their relationship got stronger in these 5 yrs..
GEET's disneyland visiting idea was hillarious...
HONEYMOON pe Disneyland hehehehe...
i knew it this will nt let MAANEET live in peace even aftr dieing...
VICKY did all in self defence...hope now VICKY will nt go to jail..
as it will make GEET more guilty...she will think it all happen cozz of her..
GEET n VICKY joing KC thats good atleast nw their mind will be distracted from all this nikki fiasco..
I throughly enjoyed reading INNOCENSE...it was a kind of FF i was searching from so long...
Do update next part soon..will be waiting eagrly to read more in INNOCENSE.. :)
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Edited by tanvinangia - 12 years ago