MG OS : Iss Dard Mien Bhi Rahat hai ..!!

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hi all,
kaise hu sab log ...

chalo mera thora dimag na kharaab huya hai ..
i forgot to post this UNEDITED version on IF ..

so here i am posting it
who ever has read it ...plss do have a look again ..as thr is some more to it ...😉
hope u will enjoy this OS ..

n the font in blue in representing the flashback ..

MG OS :

Iss dard mien bhi rahat hai ..

Love is eternal sacred light

Free from the shackles of time

Evil is darkness, sight without sight

A demon that feeds on the mind

the most powerful angel that rules the hearts

still the biggest weakness one can have

yet it gives the strength to stand midst of all odds

the eternal sacred light which enters one time and lasts forever ...

(poem edited by me)

Love an eternal bliss 'a feeling soo beautiful 'a relation soo strong ..which ties 2 people in an un known sacred bond which does not need any explanations ' the soul of this relation is trust ..faith 'n' un-conditional love 'three things that makes a relation worth living for 'three things that can win over every fear ..every question 'every rational logics 'it just the heart that guides u 'a point where brain seems to be out of working order '.when u trust a person beyond any limits 'is whr u can love him un-conditionally '.the moment of life whr everything seems to be nothing more than a mere dust particle in front of his one single smile 'n that rage within u to see his tensed face ' is love ..love where every pain is blissful if it makes ur beloved happy ..satisfied ..

Love whr nothing matters in front of his words 'be it ur own heart 'whr his single look is enough to make u bow urself in front of him 'whr u lacks the abilities to fight back with that person '.where u r ready to give up every single happiness just see them safe ..

A night full of silence 'but it was not un usual 'after mid night it was normal in the residential area to be isolated n pitch dark but the fearful thing was the scary sounds of stormy winds blowing 'making the dark night even more fierce '

A girl may be 26 ..walking towards her house ..in a dull pink saari clutching the files to her chest 'walking as fast as she could 'with a sweaty face ..n suddenly came to halt listening to a gun shot ..as if the sound paralyzed her 'her heart beat stop for fraction of a second 'n soon some bruised persons ran 2wards the exit of society in a high speed 'n she saw someone going behind them with a gun in his hand 'chasing them 'scared she made a run to her house 'n covered the 15 min walk in less then 10min ..panting she opened her door with a bang ..n closed behind her leaning her back over it 'eyes closed she was mumbling something '

Girl : raksha karna babaji ..plss unki raksha karna '.that shouldn't be my MAAN plss that shouldn't be him 'unki raksha karna '

Moving ahead after some time to have a glass water she stood at the counter of her kitchen watching the picture of her students frm the dance class ..

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Sunday 'a sunny morning she was as usual here teaching the little girls an Indian dance form '.something which gives her peace after a long busy week 'dancing KATHAK ever soo elegantly she was lost in her own world oblivious to her surrounding 'unknown to the intense deep dark pair of eyes a male figure well built may be 27 'watching her intently but then she tripped after a long time 'n felt something in the mid of cheers '.

Boy : GEET ...!!

a gasp hardly audible still she recognize the change in the air NOW 'turning around looking for the most desperate view 'wanting to see that person 'its been whole 6 months she met him 'n now the desperation was seen in her face as well 'just the way her pain was reflecting from her dance ...the pain of his departure 'the pain of his drifting apart 'the pain of thr broken hearts 'the pain of THAT LOSS ..

Geet : Maan 'maan kahan hu aap ..plss bahar aao plss 'just once ek baar maan plss bahar aao ..

running madly through the corridors of the building screaming his name '.she was soo desperate to see him 'feel him 'just once 'only once ..just to be in his arms for few minutes 'few minute of togetherness just to breath few more days 'just to get that strength to live without him 'but he was still hiding behind the pillar clutching the keys in his fist making it bleed 'his eyes full of fury 'fury on his own helplessness 'rage to see her tear ..something he never wanted 'something he can never bear .. may be the only thing ..

Geet : plss maan ..ek baar mujhe aapko dekhna hai ..plss maan ek baar mujhe se mil lo plss bas ek baar 'plss bahar aoo 'aap jo kahoge mien karongi but plss bas ek baar bahar aoo 'I beg off u maan 'mien mar jaoongi 'plss mujhe milna hai aapse plss ..

but damn this destiny he is the soul reason of her every single sorrow 'but still he have to hold on his steps to again enter her life '6 months back his heart took over his brain n they had lost thr most prized possession 'but nt this time ..he will nt become the reason of another danger in her life 'he just cannot ..

lost in his thoughts he lost track of her 'restless he made his way to search her 'only to find her running in different rooms madly '

searching for him n his heart skipped a beat seeing her tripping on the wet floor n next she found her self in the most safest place 'her heaven '.the only place she could gain solace from 'his arms ..his warm embrace ..enveloping her against his thudding heart .. wrapping his arms around her 'hiding her from the whole world 'making himself believe she is fine ..yes she is fine ..fine in his embrace ..fine to be with him 'the dead soul has gained its life again ..the bleeding heart was at peace 'the aching of longing ness was now lessened 'hugging him she smiled with tears continuously flowing from her hazel almond eyes '

Geet (crying) : plss maan aisa kabhi mat karna ..plss aap nahi jante aapke bina yeh 6 mahine kaise bete 'har pal ek maut ko mehsoos kiya hai mene plss maan aisa kabhi mat karna '

Maan (tightening his grip over her ) : shh mishty 'don't u ever say that '

Geet ( feeling something wet over her waist ..came out of his arms n looked at his hand bleeding furiously ..panicked ) : maan yeh ..yeh kya kara ..dekho kitna khoon

Maan (knowing she is scared of blood ..snatched his hand from her grip n hid it behind) : nahi kuch nahi mishty ..its just a minor cut ..

Geet looked at him with tearful eyes 'n then tearing a piece of her dupatta ..getting hold of his hand forcefully tied it over his wound 'while some tear drops were about to fall out of her hazels which got socked in the skin of maan's palm of good hand 'completing her task ..she looked back at him ..n hugged him tight as if he will vanish if she didn't 'while maan sighed knowing she must be tiered running like this ..so only he slipped down on the ground to make her sit 'embracing her 'silence prevailing in the isolated area of the old building with no one to disturb thr moment 'while the 2 love birds sat thr living that blissful moment 'feeling the warmth of each other after such a long time 'n then he spoke ..

Maan : mishty tum apni dawai nahi lee rahi time par 'docter ne bola mujhe u r still very week ..( geet looked at him confused as how he met with doctor ..n he continued guessing her ques. ) 'woh I called her 2 days back ..

Geet (snuggling closer) : aapko tou humesha se pata tha ke mujhe apna khayal rakhna nahi aata ..

An awkward silence prevailing 'he knew he was wrong in some places ..he ran away from his life with his family needed him ..when she needed him the most 'he broke every single promise 'every damn vow he took for thr relation 'he broke it .. but then he could not do anything better in that state 'nothing can be done now 'he can never get back to that beautiful moments of thr life 'neither can he take her with his dark dangerous life 'but this moment ..this moment was thr n he can live in this moment 'breath in her aroma 'feel the missing warmth of her love 'embrace her feel her hid himself in her 'be what he actually IS..or what he WAS '

Glancing back out from the broken window 'he saw some particular men hiding behind the parked cars ..parting her from the hug he turned to look back clearly 'n she tried to rose up fixing her dupatta but he jerked her from her wrist n she landed on his hard rock chest with thud 'eyes closed with fear clutching his shirt 'while he was mesmerized yet again with the pure innocent beauty lying in his embrace '

Removing the hair strands from her face he cupped her face in his large palms 'hiding them both behind the wall '

Maan (not meeting her eye ..bit guilty) : geet mujhe abb jana huga ..

The 1st reaction from her was simply flinch at the thought of him leaving again 'last few minutes or may be hours ..she was totally oblivious to the thought that he will have to leave in no time 'eyes full of ques. N hurt looked at him expediently ..but he looked away indicating his denial 'with a chocked voice she said

Geet : aapne wada kiya tha aap mujh se milne aate rehenge 'yaad hai na ..

Maan (guilty with the pain he felt in her voice) : hmmm ..


Geet (with tear stricken face) : yeh sab kab tak maan '


Maan (with a cold voice trying hard to control in emotions) : tum ne bhi ek vaada kiya tha '.ke koi sawaal nahi karogi '

Geet (looking down remembering the promise she gave with the un breakable trust she had on him ..she leaved a big sigh shutting her eyes removing the tears from them she opened them ..n asked with a heavy voice ) : phir kab miloge aap '

The pain in her voice was only piercing his soul 'he thought for once she should argue or scold him 'or just get over it ..but he knew this is something impossible 'a little sarcastic smile appeared on his face knowing he was thinking about something which is not possible ..it didn't happened when he went away leaving her all by her self n then how will it happen he himself is unable to leave her 'still he wished she should .. she should get over him for her betterment ..

Maan : pata nahi geet ..pata nahi tumhain dobara dekh paaonga ya nahi ..pata nahi wapis laut paonga ya '

With no other thought she sealed his lips with hers 'stopping him to utter something like this 'sweeping him in the world of her love 'making him realize that he can't leave her ..not at any cost ..he have to survive ..he has no other option but to survive .. nibbling on his lips ..pouring all her pain n anguish ..she just wanted to melt in his arms feeling those rough lips against her after long 1 year ..it was a bliss ..he knew she did it to prevent him to say about his death but now this was healing his wounds 'making him forget all the problems 'just giving in the moment ..he grabbed her waist plastering her to his body completely ..sucking on those soft petal lips urgently 'feeling the heaven yet again 'treasuring the most blissful sensation she poured in his existence 'clutching a fist full of her hair he tilted her head to deepen the kiss 'n she gasped for air only to allow him enter his tongue in her mouth toying hers with his ..

The kiss ended As suddenly as it started 'n he stood up panting 'pushing his hairs back from his hands frustrated 'while she sat thr dipping her head down breathing heavy ..with tears flowing down her eyes 'n he made his way to exit but stopped with her cracked voice almost pleading to stop ..

Geet : maan '

But he knew he can't 'how much ever he wants he can't stay back with her ..n left with a single sentence ..

Maan : mishty apna aur dadi ka khayal rakhna 'aur abhi yahan se bahar mat aana thori dair ...just stay here ...

Its been 2years of them meeting secretly 'n thr every meeting was same 'sudden 'n words getting vanished b/w them with each meeting '

Now every word I carry is becomes another burden

I question whether it's really worth the trouble to bear

I tried to send you a message once

But how is the question to be asked

Desperate to breathe

Now speechless

Oxygen sucked out of the room as you left nothing but your words

With no warning

No clearer then the grey skies

As I close my eyes

Trying to look for you

but Alas ! not even a single sign of urs ..

and here i am still standing in that second of togetherness

waiting for u to come back ...

and envelope me in ur safe embrace ..

for i know there no other solace for me ...

but the the question is still un-answered will u ever come back ..

will i get my solace ever Again ...

too many un-answered question n i am still breathing

breathing with a hope to find the answers one day .

(poem edited by me)

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With a bang on the door her trance broken 'n she came running to the hall only to see HIM standing in front of her with a bleeding head ..bruised hand 'n scratched arm ..leaning on the closed door ..he was panting heavy ..while she was standing still seeing him after 10 long months 'she was not having the courage to move ..tears formed in her eyes ..remembering the day when this fate game started in their life making them go through worst ..

4 years back ..

She was heading 2wards his house Khurana Mansion after 4 days of her visit to her orphanage in manali '. KM owned by the King of Construction world Raghuveer Singh Khurana 'maan's father ..she was in a hurry to meet him ..scared ..worried like hell ..still a part of her was over whelmed with the feeling of that tiny life breathing in her worm ..her child .. thr symbol of love 'she was so anxious to meet him n tell him the biggest news of thr life .. the sweaty face was still having a kind of glow over it 'the 7 days pregnancy made her this much happy what will happen in next 9 months she wondered '

But the moment she entered Delhi'got the shock of her life time ..the one maan loved the most in his life his parents ..Raghuveer n his wife Shipra khurana met an accident n r dead ..it was shocking for her 'but the thought of maan made her shiver with the fear of him being in pain 'she knew he must be going through hell 'n will never be able to say his feelings out and will bury all his pains in his heart making it shut close 'but what amused her was his absence '

He wasn't thr 'not in his house no whr ..the moment he finished the last ritual of thr funeral he was gone ..where ..why no one knew 'not even his dadi ..

Broken she was at the point of her life where she had no one ..no one to live for ..no one who loves her 'no one in this whole damn world whom she can claim as her' 'no body but just her child ..thr 7 days baby ..who was then breathing inside her ..the only reason she didn't collapsed 'her promise to his dadi ...the only reason to survive ..


Geet : dadi i promise ..hum maan ko dhundeinge ..har haal mien har hadd tak ..par un ke aane tak aapko apne aap ko sambhalna huga ...aur tab tak aap sari problems mujh par chor dejeye ..mana maan jaise nahi sambhal sakti but i promise aapko akele yeh sab face nahi karne dongi ..


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Remembering the sorrowful past tears beamed in her hazel eyes n the moment thr eyes met they made thr way out 'the blankness of his eyes only made her feel the pain 'the place which was once filled with love n mischief is now void deprived of every emotion 'it was not him 'it ws not her maan ..the person she loved but still she can't see him in danger 'the thought of his life being in danger makes her experience her death in every second of her life '

Making her way towards the bed room wiping her face 'she came with a 1st aid box ..n made him sit on the couch 'dressing his wounds ..flinching while applying detol on the wound making him smile a bit almost after 10 months his lips curved into a smile 'but that doesn't lessened her rage 'n the only thing he got from her was an angry glare making him gulp his chuckle 'finishing her task she sat on the ground still 'his wounded hand in hers 'looking at it ..a tear drop fell on his palm ..n he pulled up her face with his 2 fingers ..but she lowered her eyes 'yet the pain depicting her pale yellow face was enough to tell him 'she was yet again crying seeing him bruised 'sighing he closed his own eyes 'n placed his forehead touching hers' '.they sat thr for a long time oblivious to all the world ..soothing thr bleeding hearts 'with lots of questions in her mind n a cheer guilt in his heart '

He was looking at the construction designs placed on her study table curiously 'while she entered in the room with a black coffee n observed him looking at the designs ..so stood at the door itself watching him in contentment 'just like he use to be 'n that's when he noticed her standing thr 'startled she straightened herself n handed over the coffee to him '

Maan : mishty tum pareshaan thi uss waqt ..i mean is anything wrong ..


Geet : han wohh actually yeh design ..


Maan : oh han yeh design theek nahi hai ..thr r many flows in it ..


Geet : yeah I know 'but kal meeting hai & we don't have enough time to make the changes in the design as the presentation is still left ..


Maan : but tum log ne yeh pehle kyun nahi kiya '?


Geet : wohh clients ne meeting pre pone kardi hai so we r nt prepared ..


Maan : but u could have told them 'hw can they just do this


Geet (lowered tone) : maan Khurana Cons. ki position abb wohh tou nahi hai ..+.. we want this deal so we just can't afford this type of behavior with Sinha's ..


Maan (thinking) : hmm ..okiee lets do one thing ..ill prepare the presentation n u correct these designs ..


Geet (surprised) : aap karenge ..?


Maan (stern) : kyun ..nahi kar sakta


Geet (with a baby face) : han kar sakte hain kyun nahi kar sakte ..but who aapka hand ..woh wound aap kaise type


Maan (least bothered he removed his bandaged) : fine ..ab hujayega ..jao aur lappy lee kar aao


Geet (panicked) : maan yeh kya kara aap ki choot


Maan : chup bilkul chup ..jao aur laptop lee kar ABHI ..!!


Geet (with an angry pout leave muttering) : DUSHT DANAV 'Ziddi kahin ke ..!!

Working together since last 2 hours they were in the same room oblivious to the fact that things were normal b/w them after 4 long years 'they were talking normally 'like they use to from the day they met in college first 'they way they use to be around each other helping each other 'for the first time in last 3 n half years ..

Geet was out to make coffee for him n tea for her 'n maan's eyes fell on the document while working having the sign of KC's CEO GEET HANDA ..a contended proud smile appeared on his face ..n he grabbed that paper in his hand caressing the sign of his mishty .. remembering the words of his friends 4 years back in college camping'

Sam : what .!! MK u r kidding me right geet kal poori raat tumhare saath tumhare tent mien thi ..i mean that typical desi larki ..she actually did slept with u '


Maan : yup tou iss mien itna shock hone wali kuansi baat hai ..u know we both r dating each other since last 2 years '


Sam : yeah but u never ..i mean I know u have a big list of gf but u never crossed ur line with them ..


Armaan : exactly ..tere wohh rule ka kiya huya 'bara kehta tha u will be giving this right to ur wife only then how all this '


Maan : dude its coz 4 the 1st time ever I am 1000% sure that Geet is the one whom I want to spend my whole life with 'n yes it was our last year ..mene KC join karli hai 'n next year geet will be done with her architecture than dadi will announce our marriage ..


Sam : maan plss think again 'see plss don't be mad at me but u knw these middle class girls ..n geet she is an orphan '.n honestly mujhe nahi lagta she deserves it ..


Maan (highly raged with her accusation) : sam aaj keh diya dobara mat kehna 'geet ke bare mien kuch bhi nahi bologi tum


Sam : maan plss I know she is just behind ur money 'after all ur dad is the living tycoon of business world n u r the only heir 'y won't she


Maan (fisting his hand his eyes turned red with anger ) : enough sam 'mujhe nahi pata mera saya kab tak mera sath dega but one thing is sure geet mera saath kabhi nahi choregi aur jahan tak baat paise ki hai tou its my mishty u r talking about 'geet ke liye yeh sab koi value nhi rakhte ..got that now go away ..

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Remembering the past encounter with his friends 'he smiled thinking about his life ..he has left his home ..his dadi all alone n the person who was once accused to be behind my money is thr all by herself supporting my dadi 'fulfilling every duty of mine with utmost generosity 'life will turn so terribly he didn't even thought in the wildest dream of his' 'the people he could never live without ..he himself left them alone but still he had to fulfill his goal ..n for that he will have to stay away from them 'n with geet around dadi he was sure nothing will ever go wrong 'nothing 'his dadi will surely take care of his mishty ..knowing what importance geet held in my life she ll always support geet n geet she is already doing what maan was suppose to do '

Finishing thr work 'maan was resting in the guest room while geet in her room ' life was soo beautiful with them together n now thr is nothing but void 'a void of love in thr life 'a void of togetherness in thr life 'a void of support in thr life '2 person who vowed to be together till death r now living life nothing less than hell '

Maan's was resting on the bed post with sleep no whr near his eyes 'the flashes of her laughter 'n then the thought of her fearful pale face is haunting him since last 3 yrs but her thoughts were always a bliss to have 'yet the shrieking sounds of car ..n that accident never let him sleep in last 4 years '

While geet was un-usually sleeping peacefully knowing he is thr ..the air around her was pleasant 'he has that magic in him to make her feel in heaven with just his presence 'but still some memories r thr which will remain in her heart burning her 'every minute every second ..

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It was a usual night 'she was going back to her home from KC but the calmness of air suddenly changed with the horrible sounds of gun shoot ..panicked she started walking as fast as she could ...within seconds she was hiding behind a pillar from the goons passing bye but then with a sound of gun shot her world frozen 'HE was standing in front of her ..after 6 months 'after finding him like maniac he was thr in front of her eyes 'but still something was changed ..the raged red eyes n blood stained hands shiver the hell out of her 'n next what she saw was the most unpredictable thing ..her maan ..her love killing a man soo ruthlessly 'even after emptying the whole magazine he wasn't satisfied 'clutching her heart tight in her fist she tried hard to stop those sobbing sounds 'she was successful till a moment he looked up to her direction SHOCKED 'both stood thr paralyzed 'n then his gaze went to her slightly visible bump 'tear made thr way out frm her eyes out of control but still she didn't had enough courage to take even a single step in his direction '

His heart pierced with the realization of the bitter truth of thr life 'she was pregnant .. but what made him feel like to kill himself was the fear she was having in her eyes for him 'she was fearing him ..his mishty 'his geet was fearing him '

Moments passed or may be hours 'n they both were still standing at the distance of 3 steps looking at each other ..her eyes still watery n his pleading forgiveness n guilty .. the only emotion they depicted till now ..but next 2nd his heart skipped a beat when she pushed him aside n the bullet hit her above her heart 'n she fell down '

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She woke up screaming his name 'looking for him covered with sweat she was panting remembering the most dreadful moment of her life ..the time when she lost her most precious relation ..the symbol of thr love ..thr child ..

N next she found herself cocooned in maan's embrace ..sobbing hard ..she buried herself in his arms ..shivering with the dream she saw again as always 'while his eyes moist a bit seeing her in just a devastating state ..every second of last 3 yrs he has been punishing ..cursing himself to have become the reason of her sorrow ..her loss ... thr loss ..!!

While she just kept snuggling close in his embrace as if wanting to get rid of that moment .. wanting to ran away from that bitter reality ..n he sat thr hugging her in helplessness patting her back to sooth her aching heart ..


Maan : shh ..chup hujao mishty 'I am here '


The only response came from her was to tighten her grip on his shoulder ..making him feel that piercing pain yet again with the thought what she must have to face every night in his absence 'hiding her in his arms he laid resting on the bed post ..trying to make her sleep n after good 2 hrs he succeeded ..it was getting early morning near 4 n he was still thr sitting on the floor of the small terrace ..repenting each n everything that she faced alone on last 4 years 'how she must have faced the world in those 6 months being an unmarried mother ..those pricking accusation 'the loss of thr child ..n his guilt made thr relation wrecked n nothing else ..

Sitting thr he remembered the most terrible night of his life time '

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Turning his head towards the direction he shoot the goon ..but his heart was beating soo violently seeing her socked in blood '

Running through the empty corridors of hospital n made her admitted n the last word escaped frm her mouth be4 fainting shook his existence '

Humara baby maan 'humara '

The mere thought of him being the soul reason of his child's death made him hate himself to the core 'when the doctor came with the news it was as if his heart refused to beat any more ..he stood still trying to process the words ..but all he could think of was how will he face her 'how

The eyes which has always showed immense trust ..n unconditional love till now will only depict hatred ..but her numb state was even more terrible n difficult to bear .. 7 steps those 7 steps to enter her room after her surgery was so difficult that it seemed like death will be far more easy 'but he has to ..he has to confront her n made her out burst her anger her pain on him ..for her speedy recovery ..but as usual his angel was way too innocent to blame him for anything '.but just for the fact he left his dadi alone on her ..


Geet : how could u maan ...how could u just walk away leaving dadi in such a state ...ek baar unka tou socha hota u can't simply do that .. (a tear skipped her eyes ..no matter how much she try but the hurt of the loss was much more clear in her eyes n he hugged her tight crushing them both in either of thr embrace they both sat thr n she said) ..abb tou chor kar nahi jaaoge na maan ..


A tear skipped his eyes ..for the 1st n probably the last time ..infront of her in that ICU ..n he lost every bit of courage to ask for forgiveness 'n promised her to meet her whenever he will be able to but yet again she was not allowed to ask any question ..

the togetherness meant so much to her ..she could do anything to just be around him ..n here the simple condition was not ask any question this was way too easy for her ..she guessed ..but was it ...?

the only question he asked himself ...how would she do this ..even after loosing her child she is not even saying anything forget about accusing him ...wrecked he sat thr hugging her ...


hum na kar sake dard-e-dil bayaan ..

ke woh seh na paate shidat iss zakham ki ..

jante thay ke woh sanam had se ziada wafa'daar hai

magar yeh na socha tha ke iss had tak jaayegi daastan e wafa unki

ke mushkil hujayega humare liye daman e wafa thamna ..

yeh kaisa mor pe laayi hai zindagi ...

abb na dor jaa sakte hain ...na paas reh sakte hain ..

yeh kaisa sanam paaya ai hum ne ..

ke har aansoon ki waja bhi hi hain unke

phir bhi iss dard ki dawa bhi humien hi bta rahe hain ...

lafzoon ki qaid se door hai yeh talooq humara ..

naa samajh paaye hum ...na samjha paaye woh ..

baas itna jaan liya hai aaj ke ..

ke iss dard mien bhi rahat hai . ...

(poem by me)


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Silent understanding was the most beautiful part of thr relation but now this very silence from his side has changed every thing 'his guilt ..his weakness in front of her painful eyes has snatched that beauty of thr silence n left it with an awkwardness prevailing b/w them ..

He felt a delicate touch over his shoulder n knew its his mishty 'sitting beside him she looked at him intently ..n after 3 yrs finally she broke the silence b/w them ..


Geet : kab tak maan 'kab tak iss dard ko apne andar daba kar rakhienge aap 'uss raat jo kuch huwa aapki galti nahi thi tou phir kyun ..


Maan (he looked at her shocked with this sudden confrontation n said with a firm painful tone) : galti thi meri ..meri waja se tum ne '


Geet : mene jo kiya apni marzi se kiya 'aur apne liye kiya ..aap iss sab mien kahin nahi thay maan


Maan : tum ne mujhe bachane ke liye who goli ..//


Geet (chocking voice) : apne aapko bachana chahti thi '.nahi dekh pati aapko uss halat mien maan 'nahi dekh pati ..
Jo huwa uss ka dukh hai mujhe maan ..apne bache ko khone ka dukh hai ..
Magar afsoos nahi hai '(shocking maan with her words to look at her ) 'mujhe koi afsoos nahi hai apni kiye par ..
Kyun mien janti hoon 'zindagi mien agar dobara kabhi aisa huya tou mien tab bhi yahi karoongi ..


Maan : geet ..!!


Geet : yeh mere haath mien nahi hai maan 'mere bass mien nahi hai ..na uss raat tha na aage huga 'uss waqt bhi aapko bachane ka khayal aaya jo bhi mien kar sakti thi mene kar diya ..


Maan (clutching her shoulder roughly jerking her 2wards himself) : tum aisa kuch nahi karogi 'kabhi nahi karogi 'samjhi tum ..
Tumhien wahan hospital mien uss halat mien dekhne se tou acha hai ke mien mar jaon ..


Geet (gasped with hs words) : maan '

Maan seeing her tears ..removed his grip from her ..n turned other side ..while she came forward n hugged him tightly ..


Geet (crying) : itna sab kuch kaise hugaya maan 'humari dunya itni haseen thi tou phir yeh kahan aagaye hum ..kyun maan ..kyun

Plss wapis chaliye ..wapis chaliye apni dunya mien ..plss wapis chaliye ..

Helpless he just cocooned her in his embrace ..n socked her pain in his heart ..


Maan : mishty 'mien buhat aage jaa chukka hoon ..abb wapis aana mere bas mien nahi hai '


Crying hard ..oblivious to herself she fell a sleep only to woke up alone on her bed 'the cold air surrounding her was it self enough to tell her he is gone ' for don't how many days ' with another painful smile she sat up to go to her office ..

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With a jerk ..someone unfold her eyes from the black cloth ..n after few second her vision got cleared 'n petrified she tried to march towards maan 'who was tied with ropes on his knees n many armed persons were surrounding them '


Geet (scared in the grip of a stranger ) : choro mujhe kuan tum log ..leave me 'yeh kuan hai ..aap theek ho na maan '//


Person (interrupted) : wah re ishq 'qurbaan jaon teri aashiqi pe 'azaadi mangi bhi tou yaar ko bachane ke liye '
Aur yeh qaid huya bhi tou tujhe azaad karne ke liye ..


Maan (tied with ropes) : Mahesh tumhari dushmani mujh se hai 'is larki ko jaane doo .


Mahesh (furious) : tumhari dushmani bhi mujh se thi mere bhai ko kyun mara tu ne

CHARLIE ..

The 2 were going on n onn talking furious spitting venom ..but geet was still in the tight grip of those men ..confused as to y that person was referring maan as CHARLIE ..

Be4 her question could get its answer ..all those people started beating maan furiously ..n geet shrieked in horror seeing him getting beaten 'n tried every way to get out of the hold of that person ..


Geet (trying get free) : choro choro mujhe ..Maan 'maan plss mat kejeye aisa 'mere liye apne aap ko takleef mat pohanchaiye 'plss maan

Whereas all the people were getting tired of beating him but thr was not even a single line of finch on his face 'furious Mahish made his way 2wards geet n grabbed her hair harshly making both maaneet scream ..


Mahesh : tou yahi hai na teri kamzoori 'abb tou dekh kya karta hoon mien iss chamiya ke saath ..tou ne mere bhai ko tarpa tarpa ke maara than a abb tou tarpega ..jab apne aapne apni chamiya ki izzat utar '//

Even be4 he could complete his sentence 'a tight punch across his face ..n he blew away with the force n geet fell on the ground ..grabbing the gun maan pointed out at Mahesh making his men hold on thr places n told geet to go out of here right away ..


Geet : nahi mien nahi jaa rahi aapko chor kar kahin bhi ..


Maan : geet zidd at karo hum dono mien se koi ek hi yahan se jaa sakta hai aur tumhara jaana ziada zarori hai 'dadi ko mujhse ziada tumhari zarorat hai mishty 'go


Geet : but mujhe aapki zarorat hai maan ..mien nahi jaa rahi aapko chor kar ..


Maan : tumhain meri kasam geet jaao abhi yahan se ..


Geet : maan ' Maan : jao geet


Unwillingly with a violent heart beat she left glancing back to get just one glimpse of him .. n ran from thr to get some police help ..but only after 10 minutes of running found massive police force approaching the place '

N with in next 10 min 'the whole hostage area was surrounded by the police but geet was still not allowed to go in 'praying for his safety she stood outside ..n lost her heart beat for a minute to hear a gun shot 'n breaking the police barriers marched in only to find maan socked in blood n Mahesh dead beside him '


Geet ( ran 'n kept his head on her lap) : maan ..maan yeh kya kara aapne ..plss maan mujhe chor ke mat jao plss aap yeh nahi kar sakte 'u promised me '.aapne vadaa kiya tha ..

After 17 hours in hospital ..


Doctor : unka operation successful tha comessioner sahib 'nothing to worry about aap kal test report aane ke baad unko ghar laa sakte hain ..

A wide smile spread across geet's face who was sitting all pale on the same bench since the time they came hr ..n then stood up to meet her maan ..

In ICU caressing the face of sleeping maan ..with tears n a smile adorned her face ..


Geet : thank god aap theek hu ..warna pata nahi mein kya karti 'aapke

bagair jeena nahi aata mujhe maan plss jaldi theek hujao '

OUTSIDE ICU ..


Geet : comessioner uncle aap plss abb mujhe saaf saaf bataye ..yeh sab kiya hai aur maan aur Charlie ki kya gudhi hai '


Comessioner (C) : geet bete aap janti hain hm sirf delhi ke commissioner nahi maan ke MAMA bhi hain ..

4 saal pehle ..Shipra aur jija ji ke accident ke waqt hum yahan aaye aur humien maan ne bataya ke who accident nahi tha bulke ek planned murder tha ,'aur who unke qatil se badla leena chahte thay


Geet : badla ..yeh kaisa badla tha uncle maan apna ghar apni dadi ko chor kar chale gaye aur aapne kuch nahi kaha ..


C : agar aisa na karta tou darr tha ke kahin maan humesha ke liye apni dadi aur apne ghar se door na hujaye ..


Geet : matlab ..


C : geet uss waqt maan ke sar par khoon sawar tha 'who kuch bhi kar sakta tha aur iss hi liye mene uss ko police training ke liye dehradun bhej diya 'mujhe laga jab tak maan wapis aayenge tab tak unka dimag shant hujayega 'magar 6 months baad jab hum ne unko ghar chalne ko kaha tou unhon ne saaf keh diya ke jab tak who apne parent ke qatil ko apne haathon se nahi marte tab tak wohh wapis nahi jaenge ..


Geet : aur aapne unko kuch nahi kaha ..


C : maan ke junoon ke aage mien majboor tha beti ..
Aur dekho aaj aakhir uss ne mar hi diya apne baap ke qatil ko '


Geet : matlab wohh insaan ..


C : han ..Mahish agarwal hi maan ke parent ka qatil tha jis ko Under

Cover Police Officer Charlie ne maar diya '


Geet : mien dadi ko kya batongi 'yeh sab kuch maan ne mujhe kyun nahi kaha '


C : mene yahi sawal kiya tha uss se jab 2 din pehle wohh tum se milne tumhare ghar gaya tha 'aur us ne bas itna hi kaha ke wohh tumhari zindagi mien aur koi gham nahi dena chahta ..

Next day


Maan opened her eyes ..n was blessed with a smile of his mishty 'a small smile crept on his own face 'but soon it vanished seeing the Comissioner ..

C : maan officer Charlie ka 1st or last mission complete hugaya aur abb iss ke saath officer Charlie bhi 'abb delhi police force mien iss name ka koi officer nahi huga ' clear enough


Maan : but mama ji 'abhi tou


C : poori delhi ke goons ko marna tumahri zimedari nahi hai '.bulke abb kuch aur zimedariyan tumhain bola rahi hain 'jao aur unko sambhalo ..


Geet (cupping his face) : han maan 'dadi humara ghar par intezaar kar rahi hai ..


Maan (with a serious face) : ek shart par ..


Geet : kya


Maan : meri baby ki mama bann'na parega ..


Geet (with a teary eyes n smiley face) : haq se banogi '


Closing charlie's chapter 4ever 'With a hug ..n lots of smile they entered in thr new world for many other responsibilities were waiting for them 'n many new sweet n sour moments were waiting for them '

Living with each other facing lots of difficulties ..they were still together saying ISS DARD MIEN BHI RAHAT HAI '

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pheww ..me done with it ..

hope u all will like this ...

plss do let me know ur view about it ..

waiting for ur replies n likes v.v.v.v.v... eagerly ..

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that was simply awesome...👏
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res..will comment later dear my net gng to over soo when again come ol9 toh comment dedugi sollyyy
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb emotional OS! Beautifully written! 👏
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link to all my work till date ..

Deepa di's daily ff thread # 4 page 37

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AWESOME OS Sobi,it s sooo emotional OS whch touchd ma soul sooo deely...da name s superb...me spppeechless yaar...

Hats Off baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ek baat bata sobia tu har os me rula ku deti h
it was awesome thiller cute love story
aww loved the way geet never asked him any ques nd waited for him

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Amazing OS 😛
Keep It Up Dear 👏
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Originally posted by: geetsmile

ek baat bata sobia tu har os me rula ku deti h

it was awesome thiller cute love story
aww loved the way geet never asked him any ques nd waited for him



woh kya hai na ..mien FIL mien buhat hasati hoon na
iss liye boar hukar saddy type OS khud hi mind mien aa jate hain ...😛


waise dont worry i have a bundle of OS in my mind KUCH HAPPY HAPPY wale bhi hain ..
just pray ke april aaye aur mere board exams finish hu ..
u will have to bear big time torture through my writing ...😉 😛😛

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