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Posted: 12 years ago

superb part

nice teaser😊
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Part 17...
uff finally dev is in jail...
dev n maan r not same...maaneet love each other..
oh geet left him...hope he finds her soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 18...
OMG!!! dev is forcing her to abort her child...
maan jaldi apni geet ko doondo...
dear ek request hai, please aapki next new stories mai please don't make geet pregnent this soon...😔

sameera finally realized her mistakes...
happy that dadi came to know everything..
and ya maan didn't once tried to see geet's majboori, her pain..uskeliye ..i hate him

nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 19..
dear one thing i hate is , someone coming between lovers...
when sameera knows everything will be fine if maaneet meet eachother, then she is not telling to maan about geet...this is not done...and i don't like her...
and now she is giivng reasons like she is guilty...so she is giving shelter to geet...
kair, maan is enough to find geet..and he will find her...

nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Atleast update for ur regular reader.
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Posted: 12 years ago
she came on the right time...
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PART 20:


She made geet to get up but she was so lost in her agony to even open her eyes and see for once, the abortion thing has taken a toll on her. Geet seemed to be lost somewhere, she did not come out even after shaking her for so many times finally chamkeeli had to slap her to get back into normal world. That was when she began crying thinking that the abortion has taken place, she couldn't hold herself and ran out of the room not bothering to listen to anything. She herself didn't know how will she survive without the baby!! She decided to end her life too which seemed to worth nothing to her. After coming out she made way towards the terrace, chamkeeli's heart sunk as she followed geet understanding as to why she was going mad that way. By the time geet could jump off the building she was grabbed back harshly and was slapped again breaking her reverie ... tera bacha thik hai geet usse kuch nahi hua, woh jinda hai chamkeeli said.


Geet stood rooted with the news letting it absorb her mind and heart. She couldn't thank her babaji but again she felt herself at the same point where she felt helpless for mother. It was she who had to choose between her mother and child, how hard was that to think off even... par chamkeeli maa ...Agar abortion nahi hua toh dev meri maa ko...she couldn't continue remembering the warnings of dev, tears rolled down her cheeks


Geet teri maa sameera ke paas hai chamkeeli said wiping them with her hand...mujhe maaf karde geet uss din mujhe tujhse jhoot kehna pada ki teri maa mar gayi dev had warned me that he will kill my husband if I don't do it par ab jab woh jail mein hai toh teri maa ko sameera leke aagayi. Tu ghar jaa she is all fine and safe now.


Both of them hugged each other, while geet couldn't just wait to meet her mother. She left immediately for house with happiness. Things were now getting better, she thought unaware that her pregnancy will break her mother to no extent.


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Maa!! She ran like a kid into her mother's arms crying bitterly with zillion amounts of emotions, it had been long since she had seen her mother so close. Sameera had tears seeing the duo that way, she had lost her mother when she was a kid probably she was alive sameera wouldn't have been the way she was then. For every child it is just the mother who would teach what is right and wrong, who would give away her everything to make the child's life. Geet just couldn't get this fact, here it was different she was already a mother to her own mother!! Giving birth to a child a women will not become a mother, it's in the nature. Even animals give birth but few animals eat up her children out of hunger after they just arrive into the world out of hunger!! To become a mother, she has to give up herself, her life to bring them up. What an irony that's what geet did to save her mother, she had given away her most precious possession, her chastity to a man whom didn't know even. But that led her into a thorny path which will only give her pain and agony.



It was mid night when geet went into the kitchen to prepare something for herself, as her pregnancy was making her to crave for food. She was trying hard to control it but it seemed of no use. She lazily placed the bowl on the stove and got some noodles to boil, she stood watching it tapping her leg unable to cope up with the hunger. She was in the same saree which she wore in the evening as her mother wanted to go to the temple. Geet bent down to inhale the aroma of the masala when she felt something cold slipping on her bare tummy from behind, she jumped back with fear. But the hold when tight not allowing her to move at all. She knew who it can be, his strong cologne engulfed her with an assurance. She closed her eyes unable to hold on with the happiness she got after a what seemed ages to her. First she got her mother and now maan back to her on the same day!! As his hand caressed her tummy slowly she moaned his name... maaan!! That was it maan turned her around and hugged her crushing geet into his embrace complaining her for leaving him and going away!! She didn't say a word instead let him do whatever he wanted to... kyun chod aayi ho mujhe?? I told you already you will not leave me until I say!! How could you leave without my will?? He said crying in her arms like a baby.


Geet didn't know that her leaving him and going away that way will push him into dark, she for a moment forgot as to where she was standing but when the reality knocked in she repulsed his touch, she went cold with the numbness. All she could do was to stand unable to say no to him, like he understood her problem he freed her and turned her to face him... kya hua tumhe?? Why do I feel repulsion from my touch?? Kyun chodke aagayi tum mujhe?? He said with anger coursing through his veins, he knew he was wrong all the while and now seeing her in that house with only basic necessities irked him. He couldn't see geet cooking that way in the middle of the night, where he used to treat geet like a princess and here she is doing all chores. Getting now reply maan again held her through waist, he actually wanted to apologize but seeing geet that way only hurt him. His love was something which was making him do that.



Geet was looking around fearing that her mother will come out, and she didn't want maan to know the truth of her life{geet is unaware with the fact of maan knowing the truth}. Maan wanted to take geet from there, he just couldn't let her stay back not even for a second. When he pulled geet out, she wriggled to let go off which instigated his anger.



He slammed geet onto the wall seizing her from moving... Tum sirf meri ho geet aur jaha main le jaon tum mere saath chalogi he said warning her.


Main aapke saath nahi chalongi, Maine aapke saare paise lauta diye hai aur ab main wahi karongi jo mujhe karna hai aap please yaha se chale jayiye she tied to free her hand from maan's which was gripped firmly.



Toh hamara rishta sirf paison aur jaroorat tak hi tha geet?? He asked bewildered with the way geet replied. He was beyond shocked with her words, his palm rested on her bare back and squeezed it, kyun nahi aana chahti mere saath tum?? He questioned fearing her rejection yet again





Aapke sawalon ka jawab nahi hai mere paas please mujhe jaane dijiye she whispered getting weak but by then maan left her... maine tumhe kaha pakda geet?? She ran away from there towards the balcony understanding his effect that was coursing through her body. How will she tell him that she cant go with him?? It was her helplessness that she had to bind herself with him and now she commit the same mistake again. Her mother for whom she did all that will die the same moment when she gets to know as to how she was saved. She hid herself behind the pillar when suddenly she saw maan coming towards her with the candle in his hand, she walked back while maan stepped further with the rhythm of her steps... bus yehi tak ka saath tha hamara?? Maine hamesha tumhara has muskil mein saath diya aur tum?? Tumhe shayad yaad bhi nahi hoga agar main nahi hota toh pata nahi tumhara kya hota!! His last words echoed in her eardrums violently, she lowered her eyes remembering how maan protected her till now. How he had taken care of her till now... main yeh kabhi bhool nahi sakti ki meri jindagi aapki amaanat hai she said mustering her courage seeing his immense anger par main aapke saath nah chal sakti, her denial hurt him the most. {think of the other way geet did go to him willingly never did he force himself on her and now if she is safe thats only coz of maan!!} He was trying hard to make her confess the feelings she has in her heart but now her answers were only making him believe that he had actually used her for his need. For a moment maan thought that she loved him, her eyes were expressing her tale but why her voice is saying something else?? Kyun nahi aana chahti ho tum mere saath?? Again a question, geet was now fearing him even more what if her mother finds with him?? The thought itself made her her breath to hitch ... kyun main nahi chahti ki mere jindagi ki boj tale aap dab jaye with that reply of her maan harshly constrained his palm on the candle with the fire... khokli baatein mat karo geet yeh saare jhoote bahane hai tumhare... she began to leave when maan placed his hand on the pillar not letting her to go, she looked at him...sach batao geet, tum mere saath iss liye nahi chalna chahti hona kyunki tumhare dil mein mere liye yeh naye ehsaas hai bolo geet yehi wajah haina inkaar karne ki?? Bolo geet yehi wajah hai na inkaar karne ki?? Tumhe darr hai ki mere saath rehte rehte tumhe tum apni jazbaat peh kaabo nahi kar paogi, bolo na geet tumhe mujhse pyar hogaya hai, chahne lagi ho mujhe ... The moment still with both of them looking into each others eyes, his pupils dialted when geet replied... HAAN!!!

well serial mein HAAN ka kuch aur hi matlab tha yaha kya ho sakta hai?? socho socho girls 😉


Well I have decided to give few more parts to this story for my taani aka tanvi!! Maan's behavior is weird na?? Its because now he wants to know of geet's feelings, he wants to know whether she gave into him physically out of love or helplessness as he had seen love and care in her every gesture next update will give you all a clear view of things leave your comments girls

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tu soyi nahi ab tak?? uff😆

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