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Ufff..Muskan Its been nearly a year since I commented on your work!! sorry abt that..I do let u know on fb sometimes thru my randoms msgs. 😛
But I thought today to fill the quota here tooo..
Kashmakash has been very simply written..every emotion every confusion has been written so crystal clear by you (like always) and yet again the core of this story is hidden with so many other complex things...
I think someone earlier in the comment called that easing his physical frustration was letting him off too easy..well I think its the exact opposite... what he just went thru will make him even more damn right frustrated and hurt coz this Maan has been a blind fool!! Infact I only feel bad for Geet... she deserves the best in every which way..physically it went something close to that in this chapter but her actual dream would be when he sees through not only her body but also mind and soul.. her Dil.
Geet is absolutely beautiful... she is a lotus who seems to have closed herself amidst this dark phase of her life but the beauty of her character is she still can see through his heart when she has surrounded herself with walls of stone!
Glad to still be here with you..following your writing adventures and like I always said..physical intimacy makes me 🤔😵😳 but the way you weave them in your stories its always much more than just that...
Thank you for being here like always 😳
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