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Posted: 12 years ago
part 23
nice part...
grrr u didnt change Maya?
grrr...
poor Kiran...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Am i the only person who can't dislike Maya? I never hated her, maybe pissed with her poisoning a child's mind but that was it. Never hatred. And after reading Avi's piece, I can't even dislike her. {Same here shika..You know whenever i plan a story,I used to have a "Start" and a "end"..The things between these two are filled with flow..They are never pre decided..Now i have a end of "LP"in my mind and to make the story reach its end,I very badly need evil maya...After reading Avi's part,Its getting more hard for me to write it further..😆 Truth is I have seen people like her, I have met people like her and I have known them closely. Maybe that would be the reason because every time I want to use an expletive I try to remind myself of the circumstances that would have made them so and I shut up. I don't support Maya but if I do anything I pity her. Because by being bitter, she not only is pushing others away from the happiness but also herself.
My heart went out for Kiran. I know how it feels when someone reminds you of an old scar you so want to forget. Kiran is in the same position. The scar she wants to forget always comes before her, and needless to say the present which reminds her of the past may effect the future too. I was wondering about the last line of the doc.
We all know that Aravi being a child is susceptible to the infection and Kiran should be extra careful with her child now. And if she stays away from Aarav, that would sow a negative seed in his little brain. Oh Palin how I want to undo everything in their life, though I am clueless as of what to do.
Why is life so complicated Palin?

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Back to Maya the Saas from Maya the mother!

You know, whenever I read about strangers being kind to you, I think ke abhi bhi duniya mein acchai hai. It feels like a taboo these days! You gave an example here when the doctor payed Aarav a visit this late at night. 😊

Another issue that happens in almost every house: chicken pox or fever to a child and the child afraid of injections. But it's kind of funny when this fear of injections carries itself when the child is grown up!{We have a "live example" here mariam..Ask Diva7 how much she loves "Injection"...😆} I know many who won't admit but they're scared of injections! 😆{I am not practically scared but I have to make myself mentally prepared for injection...😃}

I feel bad for Kiran. She is a mother, after all and she'll do anything for her children. Even listen to the taunts of her mother in law. But she still is kind and loving enough to be concerned for her Saas's pain immediately after receiving a scolding from the latter! She is a gem of a person and it's Maya's bad luck that she can't love her back!

Though after reading Avi's piece, I'm trying to see it from Maya's perspective too. She is probably too concerned for her grandson to care for what she says and to whom. But still taunting an already concerned mother and accusing her of not having motherly feelings in her is way too much! 🤢

There was very little of Maan and Geet in this chapter but it's needed for the story, I think? Whatever little there was, I loved the concerned Mamu and Mami! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Aww poor baby Aarav! In so much pain. Even reading about kids in pain give me goosebumps.

This update brought to mind all those soldiers worldwide who are out defending borders created by politicians. Their families esp their wives shoulder the burden of everything by themselves. Lucky for Kiran she has family support but usually those living by themselves must have such a tough time dealing with all the issues from teaching to sickness.
Heart tugging update again Palin. Very well done.
Thanks for updating.
🤗
P.S. I wanted to give you special thanks out here in writing for posting my piece and taking on the burden of sending all those PMs and making me part of your FF. Also a huge thanks to all the readers who posted so many positive comments. Thank you, Shukran, Aabhar, Shukriya!

pleasure is solely mine dear avi..
you should take your "writing talent" seriously...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Slov_perfringes

chicken pox😡 mere ko b hua tha when i was in 12 std. i had my board exams at that time. mele ko bhi blisters aye n roz fever ho jata tha . 😭 mummyyy mujhko mere wo tadpaty hue din yaad a agye palin. 😭😆 pata hai- un blisters se yucky wala smell ata tha n mujhko itching ne mar dala. allahhh😆 maar dala😆 phir mere se mere bhai ko bhi ho gya. usky bhi exams they bechara apna half exam chod k ghar wapas aa gya. main to chemistry me points se pass hui thi..shame on me😆



get well soon arav...i can understand ur pain. i sympathize wid u.

n maya aunty is again back to her real avtaar. palin palin palin tu maya ko sudharny kyu nahi deti😆 uska doc se affair chalwa de. wo busy ho jayegi n taunt marna thoda kam kar degi😆

Whan an idea madam ji...🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Palin lagta hai tera b(u)ra mat dekho wala pic kaam kar gaya. B(u)ra Shin Chan ne dekha aur dimag ki batti khul gayi tumhari. Aur update hume mila. Wah! kya baat hai Shin Chan lage raho bacchu lage raho.😆{apki creativity ko mera salaamm...🤣🤣}


Bakwas khatam hui ab mukhya samachar.

Yaar yeh Maya ka metamorphosis reverse mein kaise ho gaya? Avi ne usse butterfly banaya aur tune usse phir caterpillar stage mein pahucha diya, prickly itchy and irritating as hell. Ya phir yeh keh sakte hai, she is suffering from permanent case of chicken pox. Bechara Aarav is itchy irritable, suffering from high fever and feeling miserable. Isn't Maya exactly like that, irritable, suffering from high temper surges, making others around her miserable. That woman is really sick. And I mean literally sick.
I hated chicken pox with a passion when I got them. So you can guess my exact feelings towards Maya memsaab.😡

As for Geet and Maan, the whole last paragraph reminded me of the song,
Do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke chupke.😳

This chocolate installment was bittersweet.
Aapka bohot bohot shukriya nanandji.😆{Shukriya kaisa parjai ji..aapka toh haq banta hai...😃}

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Same pinch. Mere chehre pe bhi Varicalla Zoster naam ki virus behenji {Virus behanji hoti hai???i thought virus is a "bahisaab"...😆}apne 2 nishaan chod gayi hai. Ek pyar bhara kiss mere forehead pe bilkul bindi pehente hai uss jaga pe,{mere bhi hai yeh chaand sa nishan bilkul isi jagah pe...😕}taki meri bindi kabhi na gire. Aur ek pyar bhari pappi mere gal pe.😆 Jaise log nahi chodte kisi jagah par jaane se apni nishani, apna signature on some centuries old monument, some tree carved with their name, ya phir kisi toilet ke darwaze pe apna naam.{😆..aap "out of India" ho par india ki yadein dil me basa rakhi hain ab tak...🤣}We were here too dikhane ke liye. Though now I'm wondering out of the 3, which one was I to Madam Virus.🤣

Ruko meri kahani abhi khatam nahi hui.
Teen aur nishan mere pet pe chodke gayi hai woh. Uske bacche jo mere andar zindagi bhar ke liye chod gayi hai, shayad unke liye unki maa ki akhri pyaar bhari pappiya thi.🤣
So just enjoy uski pyar ki nishaniya. She must have really enjoyed her stay at your place.🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

aha poor aaru he's suffering so much ...u were right these updates r gonna b painful fr me😭

his spitting syrup reminds me of my deeds yuck these medicines 🤢 {tu bhi aisa karti hai????😲}
bt thank god u saved him frm injection ...dat was my biggest fear fr him...
so evil maya ji iss back so our Dr. ...welcome back Dr. Pallu...ohh i missed u😆{😆..I have suffered from this chicken pox some years ago..so i know about it more like a patient not a doc actually...}
all i can say now is i pity maya ji...sigh!!!!!!!...she's devoid of all d happiness which r infront of her...n she can live wid peace bt seems like dats aren't in her fate which she's ruining herself
"I know you don't need sleep but you need your mother at this moment..."...aww mommy's r best 😛
"He did not know why but his heart wanted to hear "same"from his hemamalini..."...i jst adore dis slowly n steady progress of their relationship ...there's different charm in it😳
vry nice bt painful chapter Pallu ...ek aaru ka dard aur dusra kiran ka ...both mother n son r suffering😒{arey wah..nice nick name....😃}


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Posted: 12 years ago

why have u stolen mine n shikhu's wordings????????????????nanandji n parjai ji😆..why why why...i want my answer my lord😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Slov_perfringes


why have u stolen mine n shikhu's wordings????????????????nanandji n parjai ji😆..why why why...i want my answer my lord😆

I seriously had no idea about your "copy right" on these words...🤣and btw who is nanand and who is parjai between both of you???

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