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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan

Awesme update di
wow they confessed finally n geet accepted him with his profesn..lol maan apna name ka khulasa kardiya finally..
Swetha ke papa agaye be4 time ab kya hoga?
Waitng for next
sorry for late di


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Posted: 12 years ago



Dedication:- this update is dedicated to sharmeen and Mahek for thier belated birthday's .. am sorry girls for delay .. and happy belated Birthday to you Both..

PART 18

Adi (came running in):- ahh !!! MK he is here.. He is early..


Adi looked at MK and shekher ,holding the 2 girls.. and knew they must be up to something ..


MK:- why is he so early??? MK was angry, punctual of timings..


Adi:- I don't know .. He said he wanted to meet so.. He couldn't wait for next day..


MK:- send yash and Nikhil out to check the surroundings of the building .. They must have followed him..we will come in a while .. you sit with him..


Adi nodded and headed out ..MK looked at shekher and shweta.. and then looked at Geet in his arms .. who was lost in him..



He smiled and shook his head.. whispered:- you are totally gone case.. Geet blushed and lowered her gaze.



Geet:- let me make her understand ?? She will shout for nothing .. MK looked at her and then at shweta, he nodded and left Geet..


she went to shweta, shekher too left her and went to Maan..


Geet:- you know who has come to meet them??


Shweta:- who ??


Geet:- vishal uncle..


Shocked shweta looked at Geet and then at the two boys.. who were busy in talking with each other..


Shekher:- will you seriously leave her???


MK:- what are you talking abt ???


Shekher:- Am talking abt Geet...


MK :- Ahh !! well lets see..


Shekher:- I don't think, she will let you go easily from her life.


shekher deliberately teased him.. MK smiled..looking at the girls talking ..


MK:- I know..will do something that will make her feel good..


He winked at shekher and shekher looked at him suspicious..


Shekher:- we will see.. Both smiled and looked at girls to lead them to the hall...


Shweta:- but ???


Geet:- you meet with him ..you will come to know everything..


Both girls came out from there and boys followed them..


Shweta:- papa ???


Mr vishal:- My child .. (He came forward and hugged her..she too hugged him back ..)


Shweta:- Missed you so much papa..


Mr vishal:- I know...I hope these guys took good care of you..


That reminded her that, these were criminals and what MK was doing to Geet.. she broke the hug and looked at him in shock..


shwetal- you know them???


Mr vishal:- yeah.. I hired them to take care of you.. (he then told the story of those goons ,in brief)


Shweta was totally in shock.. she sat there holding her head ..


Geet ran to her...while Mr vishal came forward to MK ..who was seeing Mr vishal in little anger..


MK:- you could have waited for tomorrow.. or have informed us a little before..


Mr vishal:- I know .. but I so much wanted to see her.. I was afraid..(MK looked away in frustration) am sorry.. If that would trouble you.. I have seen no one was following me.


MK(sarcastically):- yeah right ..you think if they would have followed you then they would have shown up to you ???


Shekher(holded MK's shoulders):- He means they might have followed you by other means ..


Mr vishal:- oh I don't know that .. no idea..


Shweta:- dad .. if you have hired them then they must be something???


she looked at MK instead of her dad, for answers ..MK looked at Geet..


Geet:- shweta .. wo..


Shweta:- and you Geet ??? you all the way knew that who they are and why they are here,still you pretended that you don't know them ???their motives ???


MK:- she didn't know anything till just few days back.. MK spoke in Geet's defense..


Shweta(ST):- wow.. He didn't give ans to my question and here I was talking to her and he is taking her side now ...is he truly in love with Geet??? Did I misread them???


Yash and Nikhil came in..


Yash:- we didn't see anyone ..


Nikhil:- yeah we went far too.. but didn't find anyone .. nor the car or any vehicle..


MK:- Do you expect them to wait here till you get them? Huhhh!!!


Adi:- so you think ??? shekher tried to get the ans with his next quez..


Shekher:- They might have followed and left ???


MK:- 90% possible..


Mr vishal:- am sorry.. I didn't know that...


MK(cut him):- that's ok.. but we need to get out from here early tomorrow... you decide what you want to do?? Either take your daughter with you or you are living here with her umm them..???


Shweta:- Lets leave dad.. I don't want my friends to suffer coz of me..


Pinky:- plz shweta.. Its nothing like that ..


Sheweta:- Trust me girls .. It's the most appropriate option to use.let me get out from here..


Avni:- and you will be out from our lives too !!!


Shweta:- that can never happen.. (she looked at MK ) we would be leaving tomorrow ..i will live here tonight, with my friends.. (MK looked at Mr. vishal for confirmation .. who nodded )

MK:- ok then.. we will escort you out to your home ..tomorrow morning.. do your necessary packing..


Shweta:- yeah..

Priya:- Be in touch.. shweta nodded ..


MK:- Nope.. if you want your friend's safety then you should not contact them.. Its risky, just be careful for few days..Shweta nodded.


Payal:- can we girls sleep in one room together for tonight ??? she asked looking at MK..


MK nodded .. looking at Geet ...who was unhappy.. but all girls just went to the hall way and Geet was pulled by pinky...


Geet was with her friends but only physically ... as her mind and heart were having a war.. whether to go to him or to stay with her friends..


Geet(St):- what should I do ??shweta is leaving tomorrow so I must stay with her at least tonight .. but He is also leaving tomorrow.and I don't have any info abt him, like where could I find him or have any contact with him. but with shweta I know her num and I know no matter what we would get in touch by other means .. but He !!! will he give me his contact num ??? uff !! but Geet for that also, you need to talk to him.. and that is only possible if you get out from here and meet him...what to do ?? what to do??? Hmm.. I will ask him that too right now .. hmm.. that's better idea..



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Edited by drrose31 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar dont do this yaar we really love ur work plzzz dont do this of ur loyal readers plzzz and updaye was amazinggg
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update hun,...
n plz don't leave yaar..u're one of my fvt FF writers..plz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
and as of you leaving.. i cant say anything rose... as m too fed up with this constant things.. i will respect ur decision which will be good for u and for all your readers dear.. just take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me sad sad

Wht to say

This SS is coming to end n u r saying u r leaving IF totally, plzzz don't leave us n don't stop ur writing. I know tht u r hurt bcoz some CC writer r using ur write up n getting more likes n comment

:'( :'( :'(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dr don't do that dr
i always like all ur ffs.
I do not comment but stil
i press like button
atleast do not stop writing
for loyal n regular readers n
dr 2d update is awesome n superb
love it dr. Now wanted
to knw wat wil maan do for geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
dont end ...plz...dont say bye...we love ur works...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Swetha realised everything.
But wat is in Maan's mind ???
Wat is his plan abt Geet???
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
umm...let me check how many updates i missed due to exams😒

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