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Shruthe thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
me waiting and reading DA side by side
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 10

Everything between them that he treasured seemed meaningless part of her cunning plan. Maan Singh Khurana was nothing but a puppet of her plot. Her plot to deceive him, cheat him, fool him, play with his emotions gods knows since when!!!

Geet left to office from there. It was better to lose herself there rather than wait for the unexpected. she was used to his indifference & knew he will still manage to come out with something that will be more hurting. but now t hurt had gone so deep in that it was not in her to bare any of it. ..she just let it go!!!
The evening turned out totally strange for Geet. She was shocked beyond her. Maan had called her family. She ran & hugged her mom. wat followed tears in her eyes & anger from her father & darji.
They had no clue why Maan called them.. wat did their daughter do wrong. Why there damad sounded so indifferent & her sasu ma was so angry .. daadji looked so disappointed.
Every one shocked when Maan walked in anger throwing the divorce paper to the table.
Darji ' yeh kya hain beta
aap Geet se hi kyun nahi puch le the he spat fury
Geet closed her eyes. She knew there will be day she would have to face her family. But never expected it would be like this. She thought Maan would take steps to at least talk to her now. Alas she forgot it was Maan she dealing with. He would want both the families to know it before even he himself understood it. She dipped her head unsure how to speak up in front of darji.
Darji ' Maan beta aap hi bol dijiyen
she wants a divorce
it was like hell broke down for them. Darji sunk down in the couch broken & shamed by his granddaughters deeds. Rano shook Geet & began to shout at her.. yeh sab kya hain beta.
Main ne tumhe kaha tha jo bhi baat hain aap Maan se baat karke solve kar sakti ho
wo dress wali.. phone wali.. baaten tho hoti rathin hain beta
us thapad ko tho abhi bahut saal hogaya hain beta.. tum abhi bhi
Maan knotted his brows curiously.. wat r they even talking abt
rano continued to shake Geet beta aap aisen kaisen kar sakti ho
beta aapne ek bar bhi khandan ke baren main nahi socha, raji ke baren main nahi socha..
Geet just stood there numb. She knew her family would never support her in this. For them family name would come always first. Moreover they would never understand wat she is missing. Because for them wife's r supposed to take care of the house without any expectation & yanha pe tho Maan allowed her to work. So according to them he is really the best damad.
Now came another big taunt from pampi ' aur bejo issen job pe. Mujhe tho phelen hi pata tha aisen kuch hoga. Wonhi mil gaya hoga koi
Maan was stunt. He had the whole day thinking why did she have to take a step like this. He had thought abt all the different reasons but not once such think crossed his mind. He glared at her in anger in disbelieve, above all questioning !!!
everyone was ashamed & angry.
Geet did expect that but not for this reason. She was ok with all their anger & rude words, but his shaken trust broke her.
Then came the verdict from pammi to kick geet out of the house. She spat mean & rude words. She held her arm & dragged her to the door. Geet helplessly looked at Maan. He just left from there without a word. He was in no straight mind to think. He couldn't believe there could be another guy in his wife's life. No that can't be... t first hit was straight on his ego.. then broke his heart into millio.. zillion pieces.. a war he didn't want to fight anymore was his plight.
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A month had passed Maan was totally shattered, his initial anger & ego was fading into his helplessness. His heart & mind was not at rest totally unaware of his own self condition. His life was shaken. Worst he was not ready to accept that it was because of her leaving. He had never spoken his feelings, his pain, his restlessness.. actually he didn't know how to. He never had that sweet talks, or caring words, neither did he shared that with her. But he had felt that warmth when she was around. & a month away from his wife also evoked desires in him which he didn't know ever existed in him. With her around he had never been deprived of his physical & subtle emotional need. But her absence hit him.. hit him really hard. He didn't know he could be so desperate. Being highly conservative types he hated that feel. He was a learned person & he knew right & wrongs. But now he seem to know nothing. At times his urges was just to feel her once. Dammit.. he hated himself to even thing like that. Just the thought of her made him high. At times t need was so deep with in he could just close his eyes to imagine her.. those curves, how it felt, lips.. he snapped open is eyes.. they never had a deep lip lock. It was only him.. placing his lips on hers & softly placing pecks. He gulped hard wondering wat weired thoughts r playing in his mind.
Oh he wanted his wife.. of god .. his ego was crushed!!!!
he desired her..
yes he missed her.. something he won't accept, not to himself forget to her.
he missed her absent presence in his room. Every passing day only made it impossible for him. He became more irritable. Snappy. .. losing all sense of right or wrong. Still not sure why he feel like this for her. When she cheated on him, when she bought so much of defame to their families. When she didn't care abt anyone. This confusion.. how can he be disturbed because of her was killing him. He couldn't understand anything. Business .. office.. home.. family.. everything only made him more irritated & angrier. He could do anything to speak to her.. but his ego doesn't let him think in those terms.
She left me.. she didn't want this relation. She is the one who left. At moments when thoughts deepened he would wonder if there was another solution to this. But...!!!! she seeks some one else. The mere thought broke him. He couldn't have thought abt anyone in his life who could fill her place, then how could she. Where did he fail. He gave her everything. This whole idea of marrying such young person was wrong he concluded. May be that person is of her age.
This is was his inner turmoil... but trust me.. on outside everything in his life continued to be as normal as it was ever. His work, his long hrs.. his meetings, his straight frwd talks with family everything remained the same. Nothing in his routine changed except his soul like his surrounding felt empty. But this vacuum that he felt he couldn't understand. He was like the newborn kid who didn't understand the feeling of hunger.. yet felt a strange discomfort when not fed. Just the difference they could cry out but he didn't even know that. .. even if did.. he couldn't.
Precap
divorce proceedings!!
- PART 9 PREV NEXT PART 11 -
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Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me 1st again...yiipeee

but update was emotional one di...
he had been brought up like that..that is why he never shared his inner feelings with her...
and geet...now i feel she is also wrong at some point..not only maan!!!!
she shudnt have kept quiet like that..if he doesnt ..then she has to speak out..loud!!!

and maan..he shud have tried to at least understand his own wife..
he loves a lot..that is why he is so hurt and agonized..just that he doesn't know its love...
his desiring her...imagining her..is all out of love..
but his damn ego is not letting him break free...
waiting to see geet's coondition dii...
hope she too speaks out..not speaking anything./always expecting him to understand her unsaid words is also not going to help their relation.will it!!!
am sooo looking for the next part
continue soon
Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i so hate maan,
whatever the reason but still hate maan😭
his ego and way of living lie will torment him and geet.
i hope he will soon get to know his geet
before it's too late


Edited by tich.1990mg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

i really hate maan here..
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was heart wrenching completely...

The way things turned out to be... Again he did something out in haste.. informing her family and everything is down in a pit... the part where her mother tried to tell the things which went wrong, he didnt pay attention or actually gave it a thought... And now everything gone !!! Geet was thrown out... and here he is thinking that she likes someone else... So much of communication gap...

Maan's POV and his feelings were beautifully written... he loves her, but damn the ego !!! His being introvert and not knowing to express himself has led to all this mess... but he has to find out and analyse wat went wrong...

eagerly waiting for the next... continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very sad and emotional update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very painful update...
I'm crying for geet...
How much I hate this Maan!
Maan how could u!
Maan is THE DUMBEST man...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg..how maan can accept pammi's accusing geet..maan😡😡 ang geet family are 😡😡.
very very sad for geet..precap sad...divorce😭😭😭😭😭 pls cont soon and open maan brain soon tooo 😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Intensely sad update Muskan.When I thought he could go no lower, he did. He had to humiliate her in front of her family, get her kicked out by Pammi. Very nicely written and very thought provocative update. Family reaction is so typical of most. Geet expecting all this.The worst was that he believed she wanted a younger man! Hated him then.Thanks for updating Muskan.
Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago

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