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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#781

awesome touchy update dear,loved it a lot.

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#782

Ewww...Creepy rahul...abhi yeh update padhne ke baad lag raha hain ki hamare soch se bhi jyada tumhara soch aage ki story ke liya achha hain...

I can understand about such creepy fellows in office...even i am working but touch wood i did not encounter such issues till now...but i heard of people facing such kinds of issues...

Yet again you came up with a social issue in this story...such a nice thought...

Continue soon...Waiting for more...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#783

hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Ur son has ur writing talent!Lovely song! Well written! Rahul is so disgusting! Worried abt Geet! Dadi confronts Maan! update soon

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dreamymishti88

@dreamymishti88

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#784

awesome

fabulous

liked a lot

continue soon

waiting

happy new year

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#785

Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#786

First of all congrats dear...tumhare gun aysuh me dikh rahe hai...lovely song...I could imagin how you would have felt with his first song

Whatever you wrote in the last, that very true...it always that girls have to face. Its our daily routine to judge the men around us and belive our sixth sence, our instincts on each step.

Coming to the update, hope geet also sense her sixth sense about rahul before it becomes late...very apt words you used for rahul's thinking.

Loved how dadi adviced maan about the change he is going thro. Hope he would follow the right path which destiny had decided for him

Cont soon dear

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#787

loved the song di written by Ayush... so sweet and lovely...
love was depicting in each word of the song...
mama, papa n rhia... wow...

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#788

loved the updates di,
part-13,14...
the inner turmoil of maan, he was struggling with inner feelings for geet but loved the way dadi made him understand everything...
rahul...gosh... seems like he can scan her body inside of her clothes... like his eyes having sense of laser light which can see through her clothes...
"i remember one scene which was in badshaah movie,there was a goggles, after wearing those goggles, person was able to see the person naked..." lolz..no offense pls...i just regained it...

what will happen when he will be able touch geet? she will be shatter completely, she won't be able t trust any men in this world again and maan???

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_GoldenStarz_

@_GoldenStarz_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#789

Part 13:

What should i say amazing, you so beautifully depicted how maan and geet are feeling.
On top of it he had ended up smiling at Nakul when he had passed him coffee. For a moment he thought it was Geet and worst was after Daadima checked if he had fever seeing him smile, he had still wanted his illusion to stay.He started fixing his buttons and spoke out rudely to hide his inner turmoil "Anything else or are now you going to fix my buttons also." i loved this part very much. Maan is so lost in geet and geet is comfortable around maan. Maan has gone to pantry lost in his thoughts and decided to be away from geet and now they both are working seperately. Hate that rahul, i dont any positive vibes from him.

Amazing update dear.

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amrutavjoshi

@amrutavjoshi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#790

Amazing one..
People like 'Rahul' who we face each day..they so cheap n creep kind of person..
Emotional turmoil of Maan is nicely described...
loved it//...