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awesome update. loved the surprise planed by their parents
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NYC update soo maan's mom n geet's mom playing trick wid their kids... Awesome update dui waiting for next
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Part 20

Next Morning

In Geet's house

Rano maa was very happy that this alliance will get approved from Geet n making all the favorite dishes for her laadli, as she know that still Geet is not in herself but when she will come to know about the Groom, she will more than happy for her laadli.

In Geet's room

Geet was still sleeping as she was twisting n turning whole night. After sometime Rano maa comes to her room n wakes her up but when she touches Geet forehead it was burning which means she was having fever then guilt occupies Rano maa as she didn't want this to happen to her child. Immediately she goes down n bring cold water n cloth to put it on Geets forehead. While doing this one tear of her touches Geet cheeks n slowly she opens her eyes n sees her maa is crying.

Geet: maa kya hua aap ro kyon rahe ho dekho tum mera fever bhi kam kar diya please maa pata nahi kal kya hua ki neend hi nahi aayi jab aayi tab so gayi n fever ho gaya, maa please ro mat dekho main tumhari baat maali thi ab meri baat mano please chup ho jao main ab thik hoon.

Rano maa: arre mera bachche main toh darr gayi thi ki tumhe aise dekh kar chalo tum thodi der so jao n baad main utha dungi aur haan main ladke walo se baat karke unhe mana kar deti hoon ki aaj na aaye ok.

Geet: arre nahi maa rehne do main thik ho jaungi, main rest karti hoon n woh log toh sham mein aa rahe hai na tab tak to bilkul thik ho jaungi

Rano maa: pakka na beta kyonki tumhari tabiyat se zyada mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai

Geet: haan maa

Rano maa: thik hai beta tum so jao.

Rano maa left her room n goes to living room n calls savitri n tell her about the condition of Geet n starts crying but savitri maa consoles her n tell not to worry she will be fine till evening.

After talking to her Rano maa feels better n disconnect the line. Savitri also gets disturb by hearing n decide to tell Maan but shrugged this thought as Rano n Maaneet friends has done all the preparations.

After two hours

Geet woke up n feels better now n decide to take bath with warm water as fever is not fully recovered. She goes to bathroom n freshen up.

Geet go downstairs to see what maa is doing n comes to kitchen.

Geet: maa kya kar rahe ho please kuch bana do mujhe bhook lag rahi hai

Rano maa: arre beta tum niche kyon aa gayi main upar aane hi wali thi, ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai.

Geet: maa ab halka sa fever hai thik ho jayega.

Rano maa: chal tu bhaith main sandwich aur chai bana ke lati hoon. After sometime maa bring the tea n sandwich n feed her.

In Khurana mansion

Savitri maa was having lunch with Maan n asking him that : beta all preparation are done na actually the girl's mom has booked a restaurant for talking as it will be good for parents n you both to talk freely.

Maan: yes maa all is done but at what time we have to go to the venue?

Savitri maa: We have to reach by 7 o clock. If you want to buy anything for girl it will look nice gesture. I was going to buy but have to come home so didn't get time so with your choice buy something for her ok.

Maan was blank n he was doing all the things as per his mother wish so he have to fulfill it n said: ok maa

With that expression Maan goes to buy something.

At 4 O clock

In Mall

Maan was searching something n got stuck to a beautiful bracelet which reminds him of Geet n decide to take it as if this alliance to not go further he will gift this to Geet. N he knows that this meeting with the girl will not go further.

Maan buy the bracelet n went home. He enters n see Yash n Meera were talking to maa.

Yash: arre yaar kahan tha tu?

Maan: ABC Mall gaya tha kuch kaam tha aur tu bata yaha kaise ?

Yash: kyon pooch raha hai kya main aunty se milne nahi aa sakta kya? Thik hai main chalta hoon chal meera.

Maan: ye nautanki bas ka raise hi pooch liya yaar.

Yash: main bhi kaun sa ja hi raha tha, mazak kar raha tha...

Maan: ok ok

Meera: chalo Yash hum chalet hai n ready hoke seedhe venue pe pahuchte hai. Ok aunty bye sham ko milte hai.

Savitri maa: ok beta bye

In Handa house

Geet was getting ready when her maa came to see if she is ok or not.

Rano maa: Geet beta taiyaar ho rahi hai to Pinky ko bula deti hoon vo help kar degi tumhari

Geet: nahi maa rahne dejiye main manage kar lungi use bhi toh ready hona hai aur usko zyada time lagega.

Rano maa: achcha thik hai

It was 6 O clock when Geet get ready but in her heart she don't want to go as she only love Maan n giving herself to other person making her difficult for going n accepting him.

She came downstairs to see where is maa?

Rano maa was coming out from her room to call geet n when she saw her daughter, her happiness turns into manifolds as it was her n Geet's baujee dream which is coming into reality n tears were forming in her eyes as geet's baujee is not with them to see his laadli in this important occasion of their lives.

Geet was startled seeing maa crying n quickly came to her n said: maa kya hua aap ro kyon rahi hai?

Rano maa: kuch nahi beta bas tere baujeei yaad aa gayi n kitna achcha hot ki vo yahan hote par main bata nahi sakti ki main kitni khush hoon, nazar na lage tujhe bohut sumder lag rahi ho.

Geet: maa please aap roye mat mujh rona aa jayega.

Rano maa: achcha chalo late ho raha hai aur pinky ko bhi toh lena hai.

Geet: arre maa isko yahi bula lete hai rukiye main call karti hoon

Geet dials n tell Pinky to come as we are getting late n come fast.

After 5 minutes Pinky came n they all went to restaurant. Entering the hall Geet was shocked to see the arrangements as if some big family is coming.

Geet asks her maa: maa kaun hai jo mujhe dekhne aa rahe hai aisa lag raha hai ki bahut bade ghar wale hai.

Rano maa : arre beta main chahti hoon ki tumhari achche khandaan mein shaadi ho aur haan tum chinta mat karo mujhe pata hai ki tumhe ladka pasand aayega.

With this all went to the table which was booked for them n for the Grooms.

In Khurana Mansion

All were ready to go to the restaurant.

Maan, Savitri maa, Meera n Yash reached to the restaurant n asked the receptionist for the booked table for them.

Savitri maa : Maan bete come , we have to wait for the Bride family as I have called them they are on their way.

Savitri maa, Meera n Yash all were thinking how to take Maan to the hall so that their plan can be successful.

Yash msg Meera that I have an idea that I will say to Maan for a drink n take him to the hall ok.

Meera who was tensed had now smile on her face n immediately msg him perfect.

Yash : Maan chal hum log ek peg laga kea ate hai as it is your day.

Maan: nahi yaar achcha nahi lagega, ladki wale aate hi honge.

Yash : kya yaar ladki ki chinta abhi se hi abhi toh tumne use dekhe bhi nahi hai.

Maan made an annoyed n said : ok ok nautanki chal...

Maan n Yash goes n Meera n Savitri maa were happy with their plan.

Yash says : arre Maan main abhi aaya tum yaha jao ok main abhi aaya n Yash goes like he is running in a marathon.

Maan enter in a dark Hall n waiting for Yash.

On the other hand

Geet, Rano Maa,Pinky n Aadi was waiting for the Groom's family.

Pinky says: Geet I am going to washroom, want to join as you are looking disturbed.

Geet: I was going to say ya lets go.

Both go there but Pinky goes from there n messaged Geet to come to Hall.

Geet comes out of washroom n saw the message n was going to Hall. As she enters in a dark area she got scared n about to go.

Maan sense that someone has enter the hall n turns n see Geet is there he was so happy as well as shocked to see her here As planned Rano Maa, Savitri Maa, Yash, Meera, Pinky and Aadi open the light n shouted: "SURPRISE"

Maaneet was shocked, surprised, and happy n tears were forming in Geet's eyes due to happiness.

Geet hugged her mother as the news of getting engaged to Maan is making her all blush.

After the revelation, Maaneet n their family member started the preparation of engagement.

First Maan put the ring in Geet's finger n as he touched her hand Geet was fully red n maan eyes caught that blush n whispered: Geet aise mat blush karo varna main abhi sabke samne kiss kar dunga so control.

After hearing this Geet lower her eyes n she cant look into mesmerizing eyes of maan n now it turn of Geet n was not in herself so Rano maa said to put the ring n with that Geet put the ring on Maan finger. Both had an eye lock n then think...

MAANEET POV

Both were thinking the same that we will respect, love, care and above all trust each other as for lifetime n if anytime they had argument will solve it with talking n understanding each other problems.

Yash voice bring them out of reverie n he said: Maan n Geet baad mein aise dekhte rehna chal dinner karne.

Maan glare him n walks to the table with Geet. Both sat beside each other n all were in their own world but Maaneet was in theirs.

After sometime they all had dinner n left to their respective homes. Maaneet wants to spend some time but they decided to talk to each other.

At night

Maan: Geet mujhe abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki humari engagement ho gayi bahut achcha surprise diya na.

Geet: Haan Maan aur aapko pata hai ki aaj subah mujhe bahut tez fever bhi tha n mummy toh itna pareshan ho gayi thi par maine hi kahan ladke walo ko aane do main thik ho jaungi.

Maan : kyaaa tumhe fevr tha aise kya ho gaya tha ki tumhe fever hogaya batao.

Geet: Maan main itna ro rahi thi ki pata nahi kaun hai n aapse dur jaan eke khayal se mujhe fever ho gaya.

Maan: Jaan please aapna dhayan rakkha karo.

Geet blushes when Maan said Jaan.

Maan : tum ab so jao hum kal baat karenge thik hai good night Jaan n dream about me.

Geet: ok Maan good night n sweet dreams.

They drifted to sleep.

Next Morning

Maan's Maa n Geet's Mummy decided to go to Panditji n fixed the date of marriage.

At Temple

Both Mom's ask Panditji to give an auspicious date as soon as possible.

Panditji whispered them the date of marriage n will be a good day for marriage n if it is not happened then after One year there it is. After discussing they agree with the first one that is after two weeks.

Savitri Maa call Maan to Geet's home.Rano maa told Geet about the marriage date. He immediately went there n saw that Rano maa n Maa are smiling n Geet is blushing.

Maan : Maa kya baat hai aap log itna muskura kyon rahe hai ?

Savitri Maa: Maan abhi hum log shaadi ke date fix karke aa rahe hai.

As Maan listened he had million dollar smile on her face n asked: Maa batao na kab ki hai.

All were silent.

Precap: what will be the date????????????


this update will be the last n epilogue will be coming.

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Edited by angelic_cute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lol.. i have a feeling they will say 1 yr.. superb yaar.. cont soon
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superb part
maaneet engaged and happy with their family surprise
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Maaneet indeed surprised n happy! They r engaged n cannot believe it! so wedding date fixed! update soon!
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superb part
maaneet engaged 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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