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PART5( Beauty and The Beast)






"I don't possess these thoughts I have --- they possess me. I don't possess these feelings I have --- They obsess me."(source-net)

he opened his secret room whose path was from his room, hidden from all.. the room's door was hidden by an huge painting , and when the painting was removed , there was a security lock, which opens with the thumb print.. it was like a small devil den, where no human was allowed, where no fly can fly without devil's order, it was room, which never existed for other, the strange was the room and more stranger was devil. he went inside the room, he sat on the couch and made a drink for himself and started drinking and started thinking old moments..

he remembered when he saw her for the FIRST time ,he was drinking and she was dancing and showing her grace, first time in his life he was enjoying it, he hated such party, it was important to come , he saw some boys dancing with her, he controlled thinking it was fake, when he saw a boy seeing her with some feeling in his eyes.. his blood boiled, he was not able to tolerate and broke the glass which was in his hand, the blood started coming out. His most trustable employee- adi came and asked him to take medical care, but he refused, his thought was still on her.. he don't know what it was lust, attraction, or something else!! he didn't know, but his blood boiled when he saw someone else looking her with feeling, adi was trying to hold his hand for medical care, but he pushed his hand and started moving out!! he saw the girl again and saw her talking to man, his muscles tightened and he wanted to kill him as he was ruthless ,heartless, insane devil as his employee and client call him...!!!

he was surprised with her answer and then he saw that man again , he again tightened his grip this time very hard such that the blood started drooping on the ground!! he knew what ever this feeling may be , SHE WAS HIS..!! and only his and he smiled and left...

'Love comforteth like sunshine after rain,
But Lust's effect is tempest after sun;
Love's gentle spring doth always fresh remain,
Lust's winter comes ere summer half be done;
Love surfeits not, Lust like a glutton dies;
Love is all truth, Lust full of forged lies.

(-Shakespeare)

his chain of thought broken and he saw his hand, it wasn't healed and he went near the table and lit a candle and removed the bandage from his hand and put his hand near flame and it was very painful for other, but for a devil it wasn't. he laughed and saw the photo around , he saw her photo and then saw the camera which showed her current position and he reached camera and whispered "WELCOME TO DEVIL'S LAND SWEETHEART" and went away from the room after locking it...

Here adi and geet reached , geet was very surprised to see such a big house, it was like a palace..!! a royal palace of which she just heard of..!! for her it was the most wonderful place in this world, her uncle house was very small, but this was great, she didn't know ALL THAT GLITTER IS NOT GOLD...!!! she very excitedly make face while adi was enjoying it..!! one servant came and opened the door for them and salute her, in her life first time anyone gave her so much respect and she just folded her hand to tell that she accepted her salute, the person was shocked he worked here for 10 years and no one gave him such respect, adi was shocked and wondered " if there is any person so selfless like her" and they went inside.

adi saw one man sitting, he said "hello sir!!". the man was of 35 years , he stood up and saw adi, then his gaze shifted to geet, he was drum struck by her beauty she was as beautiful as snow, adi noticed his gaze, the man said " hello adi, hello". adi can make out that he was drunk meanwhile geet was thinking " poor old man, he is not well, even can't stand properly". the man asked " and who is she??", adi quickly replied " maan sir.." he was not able to complete when man said " adi have some other work here??", adi replied "no sir..". the man replied" no worry you can go home, i will be with her" said with pure lust.

adi"no thank you sir, i will wait for maan sir", he knew his intention. man said " adi i said go!! you know that if mr khurana came to know that i am angry and leaving this project, he will kill you, so go..". adi was not able to decide, when the man came beside geet and touched her shoulder " hi baby". geet took word 'baby' in nice way. she smiled. the man again looked at adi and said " go away..", adi said "sir she is with maan sir", and then man said "don't worry after that she will be with me..!!" said disgustly. the man quickly said " you heard that ad 'jo tera hain voh mera" and laughed. adi was totally hating it, she was not able to understand anything, adi loved geet as a sister because of her nature.. when they heard something breaking, it was a huge painting, they saw the Devil standing there, with red eyes and anger. geet was petrified with his anger and she hid behind adi, adi was touched by her act, she trusted him so much ans assured her with his eyes...!!

maan started walking, man thought maan wasn't angry , he said "mr khurana, finally you are here, where you get this beauty from..". adi was going to stop, when maan showed him his hand, and dangerously started walking towards man..

Come not between the dragon and his wrath (-Shakespeare)

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next- A Real Devil

rahul worried about geet

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Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago

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