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Posted: 12 years ago
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WARNING: strictly 18+!!!
PART 8:

He just hugged her naked body tight draping his hands around her waist crushing her into his embrace soothing himself wiping the tears that were coming out from his eyes, while geet was getting chocked with breathe,knocked of her respiration ...maan!!! I cant breathe. She wriggled again... I cant breathe maan plz, this time his grip loosened as her words registered into his mind


Maan: are u done with ur bathing?? he asked still not breaking the hug, hmm she nodded for yes. Maan took the towel and wrapping it around he picked geet, coming back to room sat on the bed taking geet into his lap, putting his head on her bossom listening to heartbeats, held her closer. His tears didn't seem to stop wetting her towel and geet was going restless seeing maan breaking down so much. Very reluctantly geet caressed maan's face wiping his tears, she gathered her wits to question him, kya hua maan?? Is something bothering u?? main jaanti hoon u don't want to share anything with me, par... geet cudnt continue as she felt maan holding her hips firmly again crying... sab mujhe chodke chalegaye my mom, ab sam kyun geet?? wat did I do?? Mere saamne mom dev ki har jaroorat puri karthi thi, she neva used to look at me atleast. I wanted to sleep in her lap jaise pehle hota tha par jabse unki shaadi hui I used to see her sleeping on the bed with her husband and dev A COMPLETE FAMILY!! aur main?? Kya main unka kuch nahi lagta tha?? Even wen she died I cudnt attend her funerals too!!! Phir sam she came into my life I know I was a bad lover I did not give her time par usse bhi dev ne apni taraf le liya. I saw both of them making out. she loved my name, my fame not me!!! I have no one to love me its only the power and money that makes ppl come to me, TUM BHI!!! Haina?? U will also leave me one day


Geet: maan if u love sam so much y did u eva touch me?? That question, maan became numb not knowing wat to say, aapne aapse poochiye maan kya aapne sach mein sam se pyar kiya?? Agar kiya hota toh u wud neva have touched me.


Maan left geet and tried getting up, let me complete maan, all I want to say is that u and dev are going blind with revenge. Aapko samajh mein nahi aaraha ki aapne kabhi sam se pyar nahi kiya even now u are breaking down thinking that dev will win, not that sam is getting married. Abhi bhi waqt hai end all of this kahi aisa na ho ki aap apni gusse mein sab ko na de... he held geet's hair, ab tum mujhe bataogi ki mujhe kya karna hai??


Geet: haan maan main bataongi, I don't fear u aur abhi maine jo bhi kaha its all true, maan's knew wateva geet said was right!!! Right with every single word. There was an awkward silence between the two for a sec. Maan's hand automatically undid the knot of the towel which slipped from her body. And then he pressed his lips on hers getting relieved for wateva those lips said soothing his senses. His tongue toyed with hers!!! Geet fell on the bed pushing him away and his hands caught her breasts cupping them madly and his lips on her spine nipping every inch of her skin. He undressed himself, turned geet around looking at her hazels he ran his fingers into her core circling it every now and then driving her to the edge, something which geet got used to now!!! She knows she can stand upto maan's passion. Geet held his neck pulling him closer both of them panted heavily and finally he thrusted into her. That was just the beginning of the day, bt venting out all the pain maan slept on geet resting his head on her back, he hands entwined with hers!!! Even in deep slumber, geet tried to move away bt cudnt he was a way too heavy. After a long time finally geet succeeded to release herself, came out and dressed up. She looked at maan's face, cudnt stop herself from coming back and kissing his forehead and left to kitchen, had her food.


Geet maan ke liye bhi toh lejaana hai!!! haina?? Jhalli khud khaliya unka kya?? Geet then placed maan's food on the plate and was abt to leave to the room, she was stopped by sam!!! She raised her brows


Sam: hmmm not bad geet tumne woh kiya jo main nahi kar paayi ek baat poochon?? How is maan on bed?? She smirked and continued, too tuff to handle I know u can make out looking at u, aur toh aur tum dono subah se bahar bhi nahi aaye apni room se!!! Aisi bhi aatishein ishq dono ki jo sirf jism se juda ho??... sameera, enuf apni gandi jubaan apne paas rakho ya I agree maan is tuff to handle on bed par tumhe isse kya?? After all u remember wat he said I am his grlfrnd agar main unki har kwahish poori nahi karongi toh aur kaun karega?? I am not the one who wud run away if I don't get things I expect from him!! jo tumhe maan se nahi mil paaya woh mujhe mila and u are jealous of it I know it!! and I know wat are u...and I know wat u are too geet a p******** a paid s*** jise maan ne iss liye ghar le aaya jo... and then a tight slap from geet I agree maan got me here for his desires bt u know wat I am pure now and I feel glad knowing abt his life that I cud atleast give him some comfort


Sam: ull pay for this geet u don't know with whom u are messing with sam warned and geet smiled, and I don't want to know anything other than maan!!! sorry my maan!!! she finished and left with the plate to the room. Maan was still sleeping, geet hugged him placed her head on his torso, and his grip on geet increased


Geet: aap jag gaye?? Maan did not reply bt started to place wet kisses on her throat rubbing his rough stubble against her skin and took her lips into his!!! He was feeling happy for the answers she gave to sam something he least expected. She is not wat he assumed her to be!! And then his phone to disturb his peace.


Maan: haan adi kaho he said irritatingly, sirrr actually hame naya client ka phone call aaya tha sir for the construction purpose and I have given him appointment for tomorrow he finished


Maan: bt aadi we have a board meeting tomorrow are u out of ur mind?? He gritted his teeth, sirrr this client is very important, aapka jo dev sir ki company ko overtake karne ka ek weapon, the chance u have been waiting for years.


Maan got busy listening to the listed out details of the client taking the opportunity, Geet got up to get the food on the table for maan wen he held her pallo, she turned around to find him looking at her making a baby face asking her not to leave him still holding the phone on the ear, maan plz ill be back within five mins aapne kuch khaya bhi nahi subah se


Maan got up to close the door slamming his phone down, I need u more than food right now he said walking towards her!!!


Next maaneet on the bed again into an nth session of love making, which continued for long hrs again till late night loosing patience geet finally managed to speak maan aapko bhuk nahi lagi?? Kuch kha lijiye food is here geet said sitting on the bed wrapping the sheet on her naked body, hmmm he said with droopy eyes. Geet almost ran to get the food, sat on the bed to feed him, his eyes turned teary as the thought of dev and his mother flashed infront of eyes. Maan kissed her hand with a feeling of contentment. U are coloring my life geet he said out of the blue not understanding the fact that geet was falling hard for him


Early mrng, maan was going to the office he came downstairs to look at the arrangements made for the marriage of dev and sam. Dadima was smiling sitting in a corner, he almost ran towards her and touched feet with a smile crept on face.


Dadima: kya baat hai beta aap bohut khush lag rahe ho?? She asked, haan dadima bohut jaldi pata chalega he replied, dev aur sam ko apni shaadi ka gift bhi toh dena hai!!!


Precap:
Teri baahon mein mili
Aisi rahat si mujhe
Ho gayi jaan-e-jahaan
Teri aadat si mujhe
Dekhun main jab tujhko toh
Tab mera din yeh dhale


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
yipeee me first again
ok
about update,its really gud
as ,its move the story in many fronts
as
maan start open himself in front of geet emotionally and that is strongest reason for any two person for being in relationship.
if you can;t share your sorrow with your loved ones ,than their must be lose link in your relation which may lead to break the relation fully.
and seems like desai se bhi chuuti mil rahi hai maan ko. as their is other clinte also who can help him to complete his dream.dead meat desai😡GO TO HELL

AND our sweet geet , she is in her full sherni mood in todays update be it in front of maan aur that bitch sam😡😡😡
accha hai thodi akal maan ko bhi dedi
he really need it
and that slap ,is long due on sam
maan ka kaam tha ,par chalo geet ne kar diya
kehte hai na
jab miya biwi raaji to kya karega kaaji
so ab maan maare ya geet hame kya farak padta hai , slap se mere tho kaleje mai thand pad gayi😆😆😆

and dear last dadi ko kya double meaning answer diya hai, old soul happy ho gayi
bbut hammara to dimaag extra chalne lag gaya
as what is cooking in his mind
me think about two option
1 munda deal sign karke aayega and shaadi ke baad dev ko gift mai uski hi company par take over ki good news dega

waise better than this
2 dev aur sam ki shaadi se pahle ye janaab geet se shaadi kar lege

i will prefer second one more😉😉


Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43


pagli upar ka kya tha?? blank post😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: dreamyharika



pagli upar ka kya tha?? blank post😆

its mytry to tell u ,how it fell to be stick.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
do you know my age,its 54.did you stillcall me by names.i m aunty type dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

do you know my age,its 54.did you stillcall me by names.i m aunty type dear




really sorry then can i call u aunty then😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n intense passionate update! Well written! Congrats on da new thread! Hate Sam! Geet told her off! Maan needs Geet! Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
yupiieee finally harikaa ko reham agaya hum pe...😛😃🥳
awesome amazing emotional naughty update...😉
awww mera maanu ro rha tha...
cn't c him like diz...😭😭
sad sad story of maanu...
love da way geet show maan reality... dat he wz not in love wid sam...😊😃
n thnk God k maan k samjh bhii agayii ye baat...
oye huwe..👏 merii shernii.. kiya ans bck kiya sam ko... 🥳
hugggsss 2 geet..🤗 n harika 🤗4 writng diz scen...👏
haaayyyee mera naughty maan...😉
okiee so geet iz falling in love wid maan.. n same 4 maan also... bt usy relize krna rehta haiii..
precap: dreeaammyy😳 my fav song.. w8ng eagerly 4 next...
Edited by zaidi98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so th sherni is awakening...is th song for geet or maan or for both...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it, loved the way geet explained reality to maan and knocked some much need sense to his brain that he never loved sam...and the jhapad that geet awarded sam...wowww..muaahhh, hayeee maan saw that and heard everything that geet spoke to sam but didnt ssay that to geet, both have fallen hard for each other...

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