Pt7/8'Forbidden Fire' Thrd5 Pg1

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fantesy

@fantesy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

awsuuum part...2 days challenge vry interesting...loved it

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

waiting to know how r they related in the past...12 yrs...

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lehr

@lehr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

wow awesome update dear.

waiting to know about their past

continue soon

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

hi thanks 4 da pm n double fab intense updates! Superbly written! Maan really wants her! Geet questions Karan! TElls Brij n Karan tht she is nt ready to get married! Well written ! update soon

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Maan succeeded in what he palnned

I love him

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

your eyes are my window to your soul
i see fear, i see hatred, i see helplessness
i had lived all these years just to experience the despair that i now see in your eyes
you do put up a brave face and fight
it ignites something in me
sparks fly
just like the way it did twelve years back
i'll make sure you burn with me this time
i'll make sure to be a devil
a devil that loves to see fear in those hazel eyes of yours
a devil that has vowed to burn you
a devil that'll burn with you
a devil that'll hate you
a devil that'll love you unconditionally irrevocably madly ever forever forever
you can't escape
you cant run
and if you do so I'll make you come to me
as i'm the inescapable devil

yours forever

Maan Singh Khurana

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now that's my interpretation of the situation that these two are in
wow what an update annie
had me hyperventilating
please continue soon
its getting hard to resist

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Awsome update. ... Maan is such a devil... :p he knows how to play wid minds... And he suceeded in crupting her thoughts for her marriage and Karan... Now she is bak at home and thinking about her marriage again... The sce where she hugged him tuk my breath and leave my mouthh open... Di u r tooo good