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ramya sree

@.ramya-gurtian.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

awesome update
loved it
omg wat is this 12yr thing 😲
he even killed his father ok he did in many ffs :P
but for geet?? 😕😲
and she dont even.remember him..
may be wen maan told adi about finding geets details
he found dat she is the same gul whom he met 12yrs bck
wat if maans dad trying to force himself on geet?
ewww but geett is more like kid dat tym right 😕
diii ye stupid gueses cant giv peace to my heart so plzz update soon

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Oh Maan he is so scary!! Im going to repeat this in every update of urs I guess. Really he is so scary. He is an psycho

Does he know Geet before? 12 years ago?? Something very fishy. 12 years those eyes were haunting him and now turn him into devil 😲 What had Geet done? Why can't Geet recognize him? Seems like she doesn't remember him but Maan does clearly.

Maan killed his dad!!!!!😲 Confirm something is terribly wrong.

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

OMG... maan killed his father n that too because of geet ... damm interesting
eagerly waiting to know full past but that will not come soon i know
maan n his dangers moves make shiver me too
poor geet fainted ... what next???

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Another part... He is so intense .. loved it.

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

a bear hug and a very big congratulations for the new thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the update was super hot and passionate

we got the glimpse of the devil in full glory!
the devil in his kingdom is on a rampage
he is here to destroy
to avenge for the last 12 years of burning hell
but why? and that too from the angel?
he says the angel's responsible for his destruction for his despair for the darkness that he is into now
but why and how?

truly this devil is a puzzle!
and its a sheer pleasure to solve this puzzle

the devil maan singh khurana promises to make geet burn
alas! he doesn't understand that he is burning already and its not due to despair and darkness or the past but its due eluding or trying to elude the unwanted unacknowledged feelings that have already crept in within
though the past is important but its the present that beholds your future and no matter how good you are in devising planning for the future destiny always has its say in the long run!

the update was truly magical
its suspenseful intriguing and passionate
it gives a glimpse of the raw and passionate side of maan and indeed the devilish face comes to the fore
but the more devilish he is the more interesting it gets
no matter how much he feigns ignorance but its hard to resist the charm of or angel geet but he is already charmed by her

the ff seems different and has a raw energy to it which actually attracts like a magnet!
looking forward to the next piece in the missing puzzle
looking forward to yet another amazing and lovely update
please do continue sooonnn

so glad that my symbolism of the burning apple was liked by you

love
doublecross/priyanka

Edited by doublecross - 12 years ago