Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40

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@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

awesome part...it was fantastic...love maans dialogues...precap *blushing*...wonder what geet will do now?...plz update soon...pm me

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

loved it di...
so he was faling for her, ,
he want her by hook or crook...
without her will she has to come with him for the date...
loved the dialogue... it is good to be king of hell rather than be nothing in heaven... how deep... she is really scared..., wow, maan became mind reader too...
precap, strip for me... gosh... what is this???
waiting...

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome story to read
thanks for the pm

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lovely_sweet

@lovely_sweet

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

GREAT update... Thank you for such a long and intresting update... He can read her... That can be dangerous but on the other side its the greatest gift we can have.. Someone WHO can read is and know how we feel without us telling...
He really rules the hell... And i love HIM for it hihi:))
Please continue sooon

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Mona

@mona1997

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Awesome update continue soon thanks for the pm!

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

awesum updt...wow!!!geet out fr date with not a normal person maan...loving this maan...continue soon... precap,hmmm...

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Superb Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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Afroz

@crazy4maneet

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

haayeee...what a devilish update 😛 😛 😛
and now me eagerly waiting for d devil's date 😉

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

hi thanks 4 da pm n congrats on the new thread! Awesum rocking update! Maan is really a devil bt he wants a date! Geet shld nt exapect anything normal! Maan leaves her home n comes to get ger 4 da date! Police r der bt who can stop MSK! Maan n Geet talk! Maan can read her very well! Geet shocked! Maan wants her to love him wid his rules! Superbly written! update soon

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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Great update...👏👏

Amazing dialogues.👍🏼.Speechless..

Do you know, your one glimpse ignites something precarious, something forbidden inside me, it's painful but still I want to see you all the time? Punish me more, -Superb..👏

Maan is really different.full of insane.He tell her to be enemy..😆.

Omg...Devil gave penality to her😆...ordering for date...😲

Glad that geet families are understood her situation⭐️

Omg.😲.Maan came inside of geet house.. Geet is full of shocked when he confronts about her think..Geet came to know that he will read her mind..

Again he carried her that to with night dress..😲😳

Loved the line-" "It's better to rule in hell rather than be nothing in heaven,"👍🏼

Precap sound interesting

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next😊