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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#681

Awesome update
Loved it
OMG Maaneet finally met eachother...
Ops sanjana kabab mein hadii... Lol brij ki perfect timing to offer her to dance...
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#682

wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Yeh sanjana toh kuch jyada hi irritating hai😡

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

tune bin batae update kar diya...😡

kaha hai...??????

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Originally posted by: deepali1022
tune bin batae update kar diya...😡
kaha hai...??????

mumma meko nini aa rahi hai..,:-)
mele os pe b cmnt karna... Pls

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: deepali1022
tune bin batae update kar diya...😡
kaha hai...??????

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#687

superb update

chalo finally dono party me toh saath hai

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#688

firstly...mai naraz hu...so u have to manofy me......!!!

ye tere liye big wala hug...!!!

i so much luv u for updating such a wonderful part...

o teri tab se bakwas kar rai update k baare me to bola hi nai......nai sorry wapis karo...maine abi update padha hi nai to bolu kaise...

ruko..padh k aati hun...tb batati hu......!!!

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so me came back aftr reading update...umm...thrice...!!!

ha baba thrice...don't b ...sweety...as update was shrt n too gud...!!!

hayee...babaji kitna bakwas karti hun...!!!

so now me going to give my feedback about dis update to dil tham k padhna...!!!

sooo...me starting frm start...

aila wat a great starting...my god...

i mean...maan's marriage news wasn't enough to break geet's heart dat her mom came wid her marriage news...i m feeling really miserable for geet's condition...

n wat she said...."she must be blushing...my baby"...grrr...ya dis was only thing she can think of...

so now adi came wid such a dhaasu entry...i mean straight forward types...awww...poor baby...got great lecture too frm maan...

i luv'd dis conversation...

"yaa,as geet doesn't belong to mars..."adi who was fed up said sarcastically...

"shut up...adi and what are u doing here...go and work...u r my friend that doesn't mean u'll take liberty..."

"gooo...get out of my cabin..."maan shouted

so finally maan came to conclusion dat she is geet only...woow...i mean aftr 10 long years of seperation also he was able to identify geet's eyes...!!!

aww my baby geet is crying...well dis tym due to her mothr...uff wat a wrng tyming yaar...

well dis i m sure she is going to win maan's heart...by hook or crook...

grrr...i so hate dis sanjana n her mom...

well i don't think dat sanjana is true friend of maan...she is not happy dat maan have sum feeling for dat unknown grl...bt she is bzy in thinking about d outcums...n want to secure her place in km...

n her mom is becuming kaikei of ramayan...bt she doesn't need any manthra...she herslf is enough...!!!

umm...n yes she got d brain of kans n shakuni maama...

yaar why dis maan is so much aagyakari n sanskari beta dat he even can't say anything to dat chipkali...!!!

so finally maaneet is meeting aamne-saamne in party...

bt uff dis kabab me haddi...nahi chipkali...

pura kabab ganda kar degi...is gandagi ko dur le jao mere maaneet se...

brij babu fas gae...haddi k sath...

"may i've the pleasure to dance with beautiful lady...i'm sure maan wouldn't mind.."he asked forwarding his hand towards sanjana..

"yaa,why would i..???? go sanjana..."

update was indeed awesum sweety...!!!

n very well written...!!!

d character's dialogues r amazing...!!!

i so much enjoyed it...!!!

well i can't wait for nxt part...!!!

so u better before starting anything new...start writing it's nxt update...!!!

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Edited by deepali1022 - 12 years ago

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change12

@change12

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#689

nice story line realy diffren pls add me to ur pm list

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#690

Originally posted by: deepali1022
firstly...mai naraz hu...so u have to manofy me......!!!
ye tere liye big wala hug...!!!
i so much luv u for updating such a wonderful part...

o teri tab se bakwas kar rai update k baare me to bola hi nai......nai sorry wapis karo...maine abi update padha hi nai to bolu kaise...

ruko..padh k aati hun...tb batati hu......!!!