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Posted: 12 years ago
😛😛😛wowww another sweet ,lovely,superb n awesome part dear loved it👏👏👏 ... I feel its Geet 2 dear which i m watching through ur FF ...I love this ff very much cos I feel my sweet maaneet in it ❤️❤️❤️keep it up dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update . . Happy diwali to all my frnds . . . . . And happy diwali mona g god bless u
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was very tired & not willing to comment

BUT

Ur update was too GOOD ... 👏👏

AHH , Hell Angry with MAAN 😡😡
He shldn't go & see what is written on her palm

But that Part i heard MAHI MAHI 😳😳

Hayee
Yeh MAAN ke sath kya ho gaya 😆😆😆
He is Madly in LOVE 😳😳
WIth her MEESHTI 😳😳

UPDATE soon
whole day i wait for this FF 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww this was a really beautiful update. Loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb

Loved it dear

Continue soon

Waiting

pls pm me whenever u update

HAPPY DIWALI😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
So geet has started to learn how to type in laptop and maan knowing that his name was written on geet's palm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
jaldi update karo na dear pls
waiting really eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago



PART 31



At mid night, Maan pushed Geet room door and entered. She was sleeping peacefully, smiling in her dream. Maan slowly came to her bed and bend on her face. He removed her hand, from under from her cheek and saw. His Name was carved, beautifully, on her palm.



##



The Maan Singh Khurana, A man of domination, wealth and supremacy, was surrounded with ocean of millions of dropping emotions. His name which was always he had seen carved on metals with gold, was looking incredible and captivating on a simple, white and soft human skin. No sign of any richness yet seemed most expensive place, for placing His Throne. A feel of fullness, a emotion of completeness was made him mawkish. He, who never had any one close to him since years, found a new companion, a new member in his life. He did not blink, did not breath, did not do anything which could take this moment away from him, he feared. He moved back n back n back till, it was impossible more and stood there, looking an angelic face which was unknown of a rising desire, a hope of being together with same person, who was lost in some mystic dream, carving His name, on her palm.



Maan was staring her with pure love and a weak heart. Yes, indeed he was the most powerful human of this country, yet, had weakest heart who always used to run toward love. Who always had thirst of a care and a hand, caressing his hair during headache. He always wished a hand on his shoulder when, he uses to feel strained. He knew This Girl would fulfill his every miss moments with her love and aroha (care). He smiled. Some drops hung on his eyelids, waiting for permission of their owner but Maan did not give approval . He was so much happy to forget to cry too. He stood there, looking her till eternity and this trance broke, when Geet stirred.



Maan blinked. He came to know where he was. He was in a girl room, without her know. But, she was not a girl only, she was His Girl, His Geet and now, he knew. He knew what she felt for him and this granting, gave him right to be there, in her room, in this night. How easily She claimed His name, in her life. He shook his head, thinking what he thought. How much his moral changed within few days. But he dint feel repent or any wrong. Her unsaid Words had given him this permission, and so, he was there.



He stepped to her. She was unknown of any fact, what had been changed around her. He bends close to her face, thought for a second, and then moved back. No, it won't be right'' he thought. He stepped back, reached to door, turned back for glimpse her once. She was looking so pure, so pretty. He shut his eyes, calming his racing heart. Again argued with his mind he went back to her, touched her same palm, with his shivering lips, pressed little, filled his longing with her warm hand and moved back, leaving room, without turning back. …


##



Morning


"Nakul Bhaiya where is Maanji'' Geet asked



"He had already left Geet'' nakul answered doing his chores.



"hmm..'' She felt unknown emptiness, his leaving without her knows. "Bhaiya I am also going school '' she said and rushed out, taking her bag.



Afternoon


She was in her class, engrossed when heard some gossips. Her some classmates were whispering and talking which caught her attention. She frowned when found, they were looking her only. "What happened?'' Geet asked, finally feeling awkward but dint get any answer instead got some giggles. Geet went irritated and brushed off.



After class she, with her mates, came out and walking in campus when again same group of girls and same weird gaze on her, she found. Now it was becoming out of patience. She decided to ask herself ant headed to them when, someone rocked her way. She saw, Maan was there, in front of her, very close. Her step stopped automatically and lips animated " you .. here ?? '' she spoke in surprise



"hmm.. I am here to take you home'' he answered.



"But.. '' she wanted to argue but failed as His gaze was so deep to do accept her denial. She followed him, leaving same giggle behind her.



"She is MSK maid no? " one girl said, making jealous face.



"haan yaar, and look how he is taking her with him along with and that too in his car '' next stated, glaring them (Maaneet)



##


Maan stopped car, in front of a mall. For those most beautiful occasion of his life, he wanted her to gift and now, they were here, in a dress shop. Again Geet tries to refuse but his one glare and she agreed. she hesitantly bought some suits for her and both left for km, back.



In evening, again maan hand started paining and Geet ended up with typing for him. Also he helped her in her school work and both spent their quality time together. Though maan feeling had changed for her, completely yet, did not show her knowing, she will be more conscious and it was last thing he wanted. Therefore, both was changing inside wholly, yet was not showing their feeling to each other, hiding them inside and enjoying each other company.



##



Next day, in school



" Geet, wow your suit is beautiful'' one mate said


"Thank You'' Geet said smiling. Thinking how Maan made her buy this, yesterday


" Geet !! Where did you get this dress? I mean it looks so expensive. '' One girl asked


"MSK gave this no ?'' next asked, smirking


" hmm'' Geet nodded, smiling, happily. Her eyes were roaming all around, for Maan, hoping, he might come like yesterday.


"Geet why are you waiting yaar, come na'' her friend said.


"Hmm .. let go'' Geet said, feeling upset. It was strange, why she was expecting him. She left with them, when felt His presence, near, somewhere.


"umm.. Actually.. I have forgotten something. Do one thing, You go I will be back later, okk !!'' Geet said, tried to make it normal but she was feeling unusual inside. All left leaving her alone there, where she knew, she was not alone anymore. She turned back and looked, searched everywhere she could but did not find whom she wanted.


And then, someone tapped her shoulder saying " Geet ?'' …




Precap: " Geet ? Tum Geet ho na ? '' She asked



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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear

loved it so much

hehehe ... maan making excuse to be with geet

ab ye new banda kon aya

i hope everything is fine

cont soon
Edited by love4all - 12 years ago

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