MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 11- Epi 4 / Pg 144 / Nov 17

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26_chaitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing :)👏

Loved it a lotzz...😊

Loved the whole FF a lotzz and lotzz...😊

really gonna miss dizz superb ff...

ty for writing such an amazing ff👏

thank you... 👏 👏

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kirti98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Nice ending. Felt happy but at the same feeling bad cos this ff ended 😭

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yash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Awesome and Beautiful ending to a beautiful story !! 👏

Very different but realistic part. Life is not always a bed of roses. It is how two souls (husband and wife) come together and overcome the shot comings of life to make it a complete one.

Painful !! But to over come the pain and start everything a fresh is where the strength lies. Geet and Maan's characters and this story re-initiated the belief in institution of Marriage (Vivah).

Very sad !! Gonna miss this story very much. 😭

You have grown as a writes so much 👏. I read Till Death Do Us Part very recently. Great going... Looking forward for Winter Sonata 😊.

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

An awesome end to a fantastic ff

Loved the ff

😊

The epilogues were perfect

Bringing out their journey of Vivah perfectly with their shares of up n downs in their marital life

Kabhi khushi kabhi gham

Thats truly the essence of life n journey of a beautiful relationship

VIVAH

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priyanka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

the epilogues were simply outstanding, talking of love relationships and more love!
the journey of vivah was one endearing one that had me hooked to each part
though i have been late on many occasions while commenting either due to work or my ill health
but i can never miss reading such a beautiful and enchanting ff
vivah is one ff that defines marriage, relationship between a man and woman
how a man supports a woman, how a woman nurtures the relationship adjusting into her new reality and how they understand each other and give happiness to each other and be happy
what a beautiful ff
am gonna miss it!

Edited by doublecross - 12 years ago

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

hi thanks 4 da pms..last pms 4 vivah 😔...Thanks 4 a beautiful fab Maaneet journey! Loved it! Js read epilogue 3 n 4 nw! Superb awesum emotional updates! Wonderfully written! Finally Maaneet blessed with a baby boy n den a girl! Geet deprressed n Maan takes care of her! So sad it has ended! 😭 U r an amazing writer! 👏⭐️. will miss Vivah! Bt looking forwrad to winter sonata! Thanks 4 all the hard wrk, updates, dedication n tym! U write beautifully! 😊

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Angel

@amita5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#847

Awesome Epilogue

Loved the 4th part of this Epilogue

Geet and maan go through hard times

when geet has a miscarriage

but with the love and support of maan and family

geet becomes pregnant and finally they have kids of their own

Vivah is truly a beautiful story which takes us into a

relationship between two individuals bounded by marriage

An Enduring story that keeps you on your feet

I will miss Vivah a lot.

Thanks for making us a part of it

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Anubhuti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#848

Awesome epilogue dear..

Wow so much touchy..

And you covered a life cycle in this epilogue

Love happiness sadness downfall.. Everything is part of life and as we grow older we get more to face harsher side of it but along with it comes the beuty of new lives nd responsibility

Maan became a true life partner who gave her some space to recover but then not as much space where she could sink herself

So at last he have to be strong and break her quietness

I will term this FF as a realistic fiction

And i love the realistic of seperate house too... Even i beleive... Stay nearby with more love... This is what current generation needs as life is full of so many things nd this way love always remain intact

Dadima left😭... You know i was feeling she really left... Coz every character in this FF were so realistic

Loved it