MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 11- Epi 4 / Pg 144 / Nov 17

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

The teasing of personal pilllow was fab hahahahahaLoved the updates

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

OMG!!

Wat a beautiful update.

Too gud yar.

Maaneet marrying again... So sweet...

Geet's surprise ws simply superb...
Lovd it!
I actually imagined d portrait as u explained so well.
Haaye! Mere maan ki smile hai hi itniii... pyaari.

Song chosen ws sooo apt.
Lovd it n it jus conveyed maan's thoughts,feelings fr geet n her importance in his life.

Maan being teased...!!!!!
Breaking news...

Dis round of teasing ws jus too gud.
Most hillarious part ws vicky's comment n d final words of Daadi.

So finally maan ne geet ko uthaa hi liya.

Pr pr pr geet se chhupaya tha na maan ne abt his early arrival toh punishmnt toh bnnta hai boss...

Conti soon.

Its been one of d best parts of dis ff.

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

nice👏👏

update soon😉

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Beautifully written.
Waiting for d next update.

Edited by SNEHA4990 - 12 years ago

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Poor cutie pie vicky not understanding d teasing & giving innocent reply.
The way Maan lifted Geet at last was so romantic.
Lovely update.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

loved the update beautifully done loved the remarriage and the picture geet gave to maan awesome update thanks for the pm
Still image of Maan and Geet from show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

Still image of Maan and Geet from show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

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known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Awesome well written loved all words and emotions superb

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Haaayeee

what a dreamy update dear

U r really awesome dear

the little decription of mandap and all the family members teasing made me feel that i am really attending a vivaah

a vivaah so spcl not of two souls and bodies only but a vivaah of two families in true sense.

the only difference was that in real marriage all such teasings are done by the friends of the couple but here both the families are included in the teasing

i liked the father in law's teasing for his dear son in law and daadima's teasing the MOST

what a sweet way to include every one

hats off to u dear

and what to say abt my dear maan and geet

they are so so so good . both maan and geet's surprises were heart touching

now this is a real fairy tale for me

and here the prince charming does not make everythings fall into their places just by his arrival ( as in the usual cinderella kind of fairy tales )

here u have shown how both the prince charming and the princess work hard towards the success of their relationship ...overcoming their weaknesses and accepting their mistakes and flaws or insecurities

a great work dear ritzy

i think u should be awarded for spreading so much love , positivity. happiness in all of us

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

well done dear great job

and now our dear couple would really live happily ever after

( and even if the situations are not favourable sometimes they would overcome it with their love respect and support for each other )

and waiting eagerly for the sitaron ka milan

( ur choice of songs are very very good dear )

oh and i liked when maan lifted geet in his arms ( frustrated with teasing of his family )

it was best for him to be besharam 😆😆😆

loved it so much the whole update

thank u thank u thank u so much dear

for such a loveful, blissful and positive and yes teaseful update dear

god bless u dear

Edited by gudmeet - 12 years ago

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ramya sree

@.ramya-gurtian.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#300

wow perfect beginning
loved geets surprise
and the dance wow kaise muje tum mil gayi
perfect song and my fav tooo
awww the teasing session hehehe msk ka teasing 🤣
awsumm update soon diii